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[BearBound]

cute game

As i have been reviewing for years I have seen alot of this and alot of that, but its nice to see the quality improve, your entry shows the effort and quality of what talking about or in this case writing about. Congrats on the award first of all, those are always nice as it shows that people appreciate your work so that was a nice gesture, The game had a small issue like when you found a spot that it went to a menu acheivment screen and when you click on menu screen button it didnt do aything something to check out, its a fun game kind of cute but needs more medals, needs more content and such,The game was pretty easy and the medals were pretty easy maybe add some harder medals to acheive. Creativity will make worlds come alive, So keep creating with no Limits. and as far as im concerned you have created a vast world of creativity already,
now just keep it going with other awsome stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Other than that I felt like the game was fun for a bit, there are some things that could make it better, so i have made a few ideas and basic stuff that i saw that could be improved on and such so give it a thought or two. I would really like to see you improve more on this, i think one way of doing thatis going with more Medals, the ones you do have on this flash are ok but could use more, for a more fun experience. Also look into fixing the button to go back to menue screen from acheivments page seemed glichy, Adding some harder medals to acheive would be a pls for this fun game. And adding A skip button on the intro cut scene would also be another nice addition.

[the Clobinater Dressup v2]

Kind of dull

This is a some-what Interesting game, I thought it would be something totally differant but boy was i wrong, I thought this was a pretty good Flash game in its own right. And you gave it just the right groovy feel, so nice job there. I found this one to be kind of dull, not that it was a bad thing just that there was not much to this including "ITEMS" So items are a much needed plus for this and any game like it so thats something to think about, There was not much backrounds, but you did have a few, the whole color sheme was ok but maybe abit too soft, and last the "BODY" it was the dull part that could have used more options with more shape options more curve and more formation options. Now that i think about it, this was pretty nicely done from start all the way to the finish, It is a fairly differant and interesting flash you have here. What's the most interesting is how you're able to have so many complicated and appealing parts in it wich i think is why i really liked it as much as i did.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So There are a few Things to take a second look at, And I will get to those, You have a decent entry, But i would like to take this time to Throw a few ideas at you, maybe some advice and so on, and I hope you use it to the best of your knowledge. Untill good luck. Add more Pieces and Accessories, especially adding some detailed ones with shading and some blinking and animated pieces. The body needed more formations and curves and so on.

[Megaman x - Armors]

Lots to chose from

I thought this was an alright game submission that you have here, I have always been a fan of these types of submission entries, In fact this was alot better then i had expected, but was pleased with what you had here,a good game for some good fun entertainment. Good game you have here, there was actually alot to chose from as in items and props, i dont think i saw a single animated one though thats probably something you may want to add at a later date and such. the other thing i have noticed about this are that the "BUTTONS" are too small here, you can click them but still too small so some larger maybe more fancy buttons would sufice, Things seemed too "PACKED-IN" on items so maybe you can make the view screen larger somehow and the items wont seem so packed in, anyways good game here. I am surprised this doesn't have a much better score! I have really come to enjoy this! You just get so wrapped up in this flash it is hard to keep track of everything else, The neatest part about this is probably how there is alot of possitive elements through-out the entire flash. so nice entry you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Alright All in all, you have a quite nifty, but under the surface, there's a lot of room for improvement. You just have to take the time and effort and put more into this game, And maybe you will use a few of the ideas that i have posted up here. Just give it a thought. One thing i have found that lacks in alot of these types of games is the lack of items, and props, Such is the case with your game, so adding more stuff will only make the game better and give it a more full finish to it. buttons are too small they could be a tad larger viewscreen is needed, everything looks packed in so a larger view screen would be nice.

[[SS] Morning After Pill]

Hmm interesting

And so this entry was somewhat differant more then i had expected, but i would say that i had some fun with this, and allthough it could use some more stuff and more happenings it was still something of some interest so you did a good job so far, OK so ill start off first by saying this is actually not a dress up game, but i did happen to find this in the Dress-up game section wich was odd, as for the content it waspretty short fast and a lil cute so it was not all that bad, and i was entertained, but seems like it started and finished very fast though, unless there is some hidden game icouldnt find but anyways it is what it is. And to close this review off ill just say that it was a pleasure seeing this and even reviewing, now i hope i was able to help somewhat, as there were some things that could be improved, there was some areas that could be better, But i will get to that, but for the mostpart here was a good entry and i really enjoyed what you posted up for us here today.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A decent flash entry here, some small changes could be made to make it better and more improved, something like that, but here are a few ideas and some advice that might help to inspre and make things somewhat improved and more better, so try them outif you are able too, make it longer more to it more depth also add more story againmore depth aswell, these are things that can make this a better entry.

[Sandile's Who's That? 2]

This was an alright game

Well here we have something interesting a good game if you ask me, i thought it was presented well, and i thought there was some nice elements throughout this whole flash, but anyways lets get really started with the details of this review. Alright this was actually a fun and entertaining game, you only had a few medals though, i think you should have it go every five questions to earn a level, but the 3 medals you have are just alright. but you have a good game here and the music is qwirky even, Maybe as another tip you should add a second or even third song to start after the first and so on, since the songs are so long you could have a variaty of differant songsplaying one after another.so fun game it was a pleasure. And so there is the main of the review, you have an interesting yet entertaining game here, some parts could be cleaned up and or add some small changes but not much.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
OK so as mentioned there could be some small changes and ill post up some small changes that could make it look and act better, just a few tid bits and such. Add more medals as suggested above there just very few and you can balance it out with the mass amount of questions. have more variaty of songs.

[[SS] watr???????&)#(*$&(#]

Hmm ok

Now here was something interesting, not the best of choices but it was interesting and kinda nifty, there is more room for some extra improvment on this, but will take some effort on your side, but anyways its a good start i thought and i hope to see more from you, So this was interesting, i thought this was a dress-up of some sort, but just has a "LOOP" that is streaming here, but i guess this was more of a joke or trick from back in the day, and that was ok just was expecting a dress up game since i was looking in the dress-up section in gadjets and all, but anyways as a loop i guess its ok, the "MUSIC" was ok, kinda the onlything that made this worthwhile. And while the end is near on this review, i will take this time to comment that you have something here but you need more positive and better productivity all around, I did however find it kind of interesting nifty though, so i was glad to see this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And some improvment ideas are always a plus for anything, and with this one i may have found one or two things that you can improve and make this somewhat better, so try not to take them lightly and go with them or even just one or two ideas well thats if i have any good ones. And with this one it was pretty entertaining but it was just a loop, neededmore of some more stuff going on and atleast throw in some dress-up stuff in there as it was in the dress-up section.

[Abomination Assembler]

Another good one

Submissions such as this one here today are differant, sometimes unique but always exciting, so throughout this review today i will suggest some new possibilities on improving, but as far as i can see now, it was a good entry. OK so i saw the other one and was pretty impressed with what you had going on, and like that one this one is pretty good aswell, and this was another great idea allthough it was the same as the other but still good i thought, Now i did mention in the last one that the buttons and some added color could be a better option inimproving this, i will go into more detail later but that would be a big plus on your part. Very impressed, that was my lasting impression on this piece, allthough there are some areas that you could have dones this or that differant and a touch more efort, but for the most of this i was pretty impressed and liked what you had to offer.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some of these types of entries are hard to give some good feedback into making them better, but i think i can muster up some ideas here, just look into the advice and ideas and go with it, just try and make it work. So making the buttons larger and more fancy would be a big plus on this, also adding some color and some colored backrounds would be another plus on your part.