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[1.7 Sextillion Pin-Ups]

Someting differant here

This is a Groovy flash entry, Its Groovy and Swanky, OK so i just want to get this started and mention here that you have something good here you have a good vision of ideas and an overall good concept of stuff, and thats all it really takes to get something like this really going, now throughout the review i may suggest some ideas but thats later in the review, So with this one i was abit confused with this one, because the design and interface was really confusing, and kind of just everything was "CLOGGED" up and there was no real direction, i wouldnt mind seeing more of a traditional method here though, It seems well made and lots of effort but just has too much goingon here and could have things more spreadout expecially the design and all. But anyways once again we have another decent game here, theres not alot i can say to improve on this but there are some things that could be cleaned up as menioned and below, but for the most of this its pretty good and i liked everything i saw here, so keep up the good work. with some more effort so below are a few ideas that really could push this flash to the extra efforts, good luck on updating this or any new games you might be working on.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The Submission actually looks pretty good at this point. All you need to do is keep on improving from here and making more extras here and there. needs things to spreadout more, theres too much stuff with the interface and all, a more basic and more traditional style would be nice

[Anime Avatar Creator]

Good idea

You have Engineered a good flash game here, it has lots to see and do, allthough it could use more in some parts but that will ultimately be explained later, But as i start off this flashsubmission, i like what you have presented here and there are some fun and entertaining stuff as this gets started, I do hope to see more of it thruout so keep it rolling. I must say this was something, differant, I have seen alot of dress-ups and this was a wellmade one with lots to see, lots of items, and some good effects like with color and such, so i was pretty impressed with the whole outcome, Now i would like to see some more things like some "SOUND/FX" even some "MUSIC" choices would be great, well something to think about anyways. I really like what you have here, and since this review is almost over ill just say that in moderation this was a decent flash game, and shows what you are capable of and would love to see more of your skills pushed further, but as for this game, it was a nifty lil game, and i was pretty happy with the gameplay, very entertaining and some good fun to it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I found this to be mildly entertaining There was some nice lements here and there, and ofcourse there are some parts that could be better throughout. Well you have a good game here, i would suggest that you add some sound/fx and some music would really put this even in a better effected light of improvments.

[Anime Character Generator]

Cute dress-up

OK well good game you have here i would really like to see this Thrive and Flourish into something great, I can elaborate in more detail on that later, but you may want to find any Lacking and unnecessarily elements and make them more better and efficient for the flash game so that it runs better aswell, But you have a good start into something good here. I was glad to see that this has won underdog of the week, Its always something nice to win some awards for your efforts, and now onto your game here, And as i get more into this i am pretty amazed you have somethin really good here, but there is not much of creativity as you cant design stuff with easy you do have some interesting stuff though, and i love the use of the color bars here and that does add to the creativity, you should add the dran and drop dress-up option though, that would allow for more creativity. also some sound/fx and some music options would be another good option. A Dazzling Flash submission you have here, So my final thoughts on this was that it was a pretty good flash, and i got some good fun play out of it, it does need more effort but it was pretty entertaining and glad i had the chance to check this out. and i hope your other stuff is just as good, and on the last note here keep up the interesting works of flash.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
First of all in improvments tis could use a few, you can add a number of tings to make this a better and more entertaining game, So below i have suggested some new ideas and old tips that can make it all worth your while, keep up the good effort. and remember creativity is always a plus, and never hurts to go beyond the box in creation anyways good luck. Add a drop and drag option style of dress-up, Also adding some music or some music choices would be great with this aswell as some sound/fx to go with all the clicking and such.

[Pokémon Fartfetch]

Cute

And here we have a decent game, and a good submission entry, there was some decent imagry and visuals, and also had some fun gameplayabout it all, I did like some good points in this, However there are some points that could use more effort but I will elaborate thatlater in the review, but overall this was a decent start of a game entry. and you Processed a good flash here. OK so the idea behind this was ok, the graphics were cute and the idea was cute aswell, there was not muchto this though a little "TIME-WASTER" not more then that, but once you get all three "FANS" going it does get laggy and choppy, so maybe some lower quality options could work there aswell, but anyways its an alright game but needs more to it, needs more fun to it. I really found this Submission entry to be pretty good, Well presented well percieved and well orginised, The game was fun and entertaining, not to say it could use some small adjustments for improving, But you brought all the elements together making for a decent game here. So untill your next flash keep up the creative skills flowing and hope to make much more enjoying fun games like this one, i would love to see more anyways untill then good luck on your next Submission.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I must say this was a decent flash submission here, It has some entertaining and amusing factors and was pretty fun, Could use abit more Focus on some of the weaker areas, and if you do put some stronger direction there it will be a pretty solid flash, but other then that its an ok flash game, and could use some updates and changes with a few ideas as suggested, so go with it and let it shine thru. Gets choppy and laggy way too fast needs ome quality issues there, maybe slowing down the fan abit would be key.

[Akiko Dress up]

Decent game

So unnecessarily I found this flash by random chice but i must say it was a pretty good find as it was an entertaining and flashy game, now i still think there could be some more work in other places, and i will ofcourse elaborate more on that in abit, But in moderation it could use a few things here and there giving it that extra push it needs to be even better then it is. So let me start on some detail points and saying that you do have some decent variaty, but the fact that every 2nd 3rd and fourt item is basicly a copy of the other one doesnt do much for creativity, so with that said you can always make each item have something differant maybe something more unique and such from the other, also things are too "SMALL" aswell as "CLUTTERED" up so you could make the canvus larger to help releave that stress of issues, but other then that it was notbad, a fun dress up game but could use some more sttention for detail. I really enjoyed what you made her em a delightfull flash with lots of entertaining and amusing visuals, great stuff all around, its stuff like this i can really appreciate so very nice work, keep it up. There was alot of tips i suggested that will greatly help make this much a better game, and again good luck. And once again great flash entry here. Cheers till next time.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ok here we have a decent little flash entry, this was notbad of a game, it had some good and bad points and i have suggested some ideas for the bad if even that, And all it takes is a few Tweaking on spots here and there, But I do Recommend a few ideas and suggestions that can make this better and improve on them, so just something to think about. So make it your own, make it your own style adding some backrounds and even adding a larger canvus would be a big plus.

[Angel Of Peace]

Nice dress-up

To start off this review is kind of hard because Theres so much to start with, I guess I will start off by saying that This was kind of nifty work you have here, ultimately This can even be better with a few extra details and suggestions, Because after seeing and playing with this game I can see that you are capable of, and that makes me really interested in this and your other works, but anyways as for this flash entry. so you have a nice dress-up here it was very "ELEGANT" the graphics and visual effect was amazing smooth and fresh looking, This was a fun game but it lacked in much more items, not much creativity there, so thats one area you can work on, because these types of games are based on "CREATIVITY" and design so thats something to think about, and i would love to see this submission excell to and beyond expectations, anyways nice effort. What else can I say about this game, i enjoyed it for what it is Had some fun with it and it did give off some entertaining value, Its amusing and entertaining and had some nice visual graphics so from start to the end it was A pretty good entry. Now as for any kind of fixing up, ill leave that for the improvment section just below, but it was all good, Im not sure i saw any real negitive points needing improvment, but if there is anything else ill be sure to leave some ideas below.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
There is always room for some sorta improvments There is actually alot you can do with this, I thought i would atleast suggest a few ideas I hope you do use some of them since it will improve on an already decent Game, this flash did lack some stuff but that can be worked on with just a tad more effort, So look into these ideas, the game is great and could really take off even more then it has already. So forst off More items aswell as some backrounds will do the trick here.

[After Bath Coloring]

Something differant

You have Established a good game entry here, it was nifty, it had a few suprises and was overall a fun and entertaining element of flash work, I Realized all this as soon as i started in on this game submission, there was some decent quality about it all, and it brought in some nice and nifty features, Now later ill discuss maybe some ways to even improve on it. OK now as i get more into the game and this review, i must say that you have really done somethng differant here, im not so sure this is a dress-up but more of like a page out of a coloring book wich is A-OK its differant and unique, the colors are nice the design is welldone, and overall this is a fun idea like a coloring book, i thought everything was fine except i found one issue and thats the the brush speed should be faster and smoother seems hard to drag, maybe thats something to look into, anyways nice idea of a game here. Now you for sure have the right Attitude when you were making this aswell as some good direction and so on, Thanks for putting the effort into this, allthough it could still be spiced up a little, it was still a pretty good flash you have here, and i look forward to any other entertaining flash you have planned for us, anyways good luck. Decent flash here, hope to see even better stuff and improvments soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And so here we have it, A Clever little flash submission, Good idea here good concept and it grew on me, We come to that area to improve on things, and while it was a fun and amusing game and doesnt seem like it needs much change but it could use a few things, to be honest this was pretty good, so if i do find any lacking points, I will post them here next. So only really one major issue. the brush speed should be faster and smoother seems hard to drag, too slow so speed it up somewhat, and make it feel more like a brush, more smoothlike.

[AdVaNcE DrEeSs Up]

So this one is interesting

And once again i find myself with another decent and even at times outstanding submission here, its a pretty decent game you have created here, and shows in the outcome of it all, There was some high and low points thruout the submission some areas that can be fixed and ultimately cleaned up on certain areas, but I found this to be pretty nifty of a flash works. But anyways notbad of a dress up game and or start to one, the character screen seemed slightly small, even putting hair on his head, was being cut off so that tells me that you need to add a much larger design area and or canvus, The props and clothing were ok but maybe you should not use such "THICK" lines of a brush tool, a thinner line will show more detail Also you should add more random and more unique items, even adding some animated ones would spice things upon this one. and its something to try, But anyways a good effort here could use a few adjustments for improvment. And Here once again I find one of those unique and interesting with a nifty touch good flash's so glad i saw this it was pretty good and had some entertaining value to it, nice effort here. I look forward to seeing other stuff like this, hope everyone enjoyes this, you have a good game here some slight fixes can make it even better though. So keep up the fine work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ideas, Ideas. and even more ideas thats what its more or less about, Here are some Tips and ideas to better improve on this delightfull game, Sometimes it just takes one or two ideas to really get the game going and even on a more popular note so considar some of these ideas. as they are in place to help and make things better, so try them out or some atleast. So with this one a bigger canvus and some backrounds would work and some more random items would help also. Dont use a thick brush tool for the outline of the props and even character it tends to look sloppy, and you show more detail with a thinnner one