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[Lady K's Dress Up Game]

Decent

What struck me as really cool In this game was how you were able to have so many cool looking things going on. It doesn't take much to know that this is well done. and you have done just that, make a great game, I am glad I checked this game submission out. Hmm so this was an alright dress-up game, the "BUTTONS" were ok but seemed kind of small so you may want to make more larger and flashier buttons, Some backround changer would also be nice, you have a good amount of items with this but the onlything is that with the button style it kind of limits in creativity, and the music on this could have been louder it was too low, but other then that it was alright. What is amazing is how there are so many differant elements in this game, but it isn't very complicated. infact its a good game, I will say that I am impressed with this game submission, You just never knew what was going to come up next in this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Alright While there could have been some slightly better effort in improvments just a tad on some stuff here and there, It's still a pretty good game submission for what it is. just a few things to work on that i could possibly suggest some ideas below. so take a look into them. needs flashier and larger buttons, needs some backrounds, Music could be louder and have more choices, add drag and drop style

[Luigi Dress Up]

Kind of basic

This is great! I probably only like it because I'm such a huge fan of these types. of games When you combine all the stuff Thats in here you get good results and you have done just that, So props to you on this game, I had a smile on my face the whole time. throughout this flash. So for a dress-up its an ok one kind of too basic if you ask me, it has alot of element of clothing and props but they were all just the same and needed more unique and differant designs to them, now "LUIGI" is always a popular subject, but throw in some differant and random stuff, maybe stuff you might not normally see, make it funny like that, theres actually alot you can do with these types of games everything from backrounds to unique stuff and so on. It's Games like this that makes me realize it's a great website and a great game you have here, it's also decent in its own right. but it's actually not that bad. It reminds me of a good quality game ionce played except with a little buzz to it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I admit that I was a bit disappointed at how there wasn't a lot of real interesting things going on. but there was some other areas that still had other things that kept my interest up, and besides you can always make time for some improvments. needs random props, more props, loder music and some backrounds would be nice.

[RIKKU DRESSUP 3]

its alright

Here's a great entry that works well because there is so much to it. The graphics aren't that impressive, but it really is a fun and somewhat entertaining in itself. I think it might be because you didn't try to make it too fancy or anything, just portray it as how it's supposed to be. Another dress-up game allthough i admit this one was ok it was kind of interesting, i like the fact that you had some backrounds and alot of assorted items, one thing that bothered me here was that the "BUTTONS" were kind of small like the backround buttons, There was some "SLOPPY" effort like how the items were placed, you should have the items and clothing sectioned off, but other then that this was an alright dress-up game. so It seems like you really went out of your way to make some of this more complicated then it was, yet it was also pretty simple, wich is one reason why i have come to enjoy this as i know others will also enjoy this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Buttons can be larger so you can click and view them closer and better, the items can be larger aswell some of them seemed too small, So I will start off here with suggesting some sorta more random items, some animated ones, and stuff you might not normally see, maybe its funny, or even bazzar but something differant, and on another note you also want to add a bunch of items not just a few.

[Pumpkin Dress-Up 2005]

Has potential

Now This had its good and bad parts. But for a game it was alright, For the most part, the good outweighed the bad, so it was an game I would recommend. It was a simple game but still entertaining and somewhat impressive. This one has lots of potential but you did not push the limits or the creative skills forward, and with a pumnkin you could have done so much with this one, the backround changer was a nice effect but you only had three backrounds, you should have had more then just 3, atleast 5 or six would sufice. The "GRAPHICS" was so-so could be better with some more shading and small details to give it a more detailed look, maybe even some dark elements to give it the feel of halloween and such. I like that this Submission was easy to understand,and yet very interesting, not to mention entertaining, Everything worked out great, and had a nice look and overall design. I also Think some things could be possibly better, but i will get more into that a bit later.but its nothing more then a few small details.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This was actually not bad, but could use a few things, to spice it up somewhat, so below i have suggested some good things and advice some new ideas and even some old ideas. at least think about them. The backround changer was decent but needed more backrounds then the three you have, needs more detail maybe some shade work for more detail all around, alsomore of a dark feel aswell.

[[LL] - Dress Up Wine.]

Something differant

This was someting differant for sure, and you gave it some appeal, and i was pretty entertained with what you do have here, still could use some fixes and clean ups here and there, but for the most part of it its pretty amusing and entertaining as said. Hmmm ok so this was a differant idea of a dress-up game never would have expected to dress up wine, but you had it more like dressing up a "CHARACTER" and not really the wine, maybe to improve on your idea you could keep the idea of dressing up the wine bottle, but go more with that with fancy labels, and logos maybe some corks some shampain glasses, and so on, but anyways not to lose track you do have a good idea here nice concept but the character part should probably be removed, more props and items are needed though. The hardest part of reviewing stuff is that it has to come to an end and since i really enjoyed this piece, i will have to end it soon, but before i do i just wanted to say you have the effort you have the skill and you have the idea, but wouldnt mind seeing more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Theres always something new and differant with new ideas, i think some new ideas could be tossed around, and while i may not have the best i have suggested something that may help so i do hope you use some of my advuice and ideas, or just a few of the tips, The thing about these types of games is that you have to allow for creativity so with the more random and differant types of items the better especially whena dding unique random and even some animated items aswell, this allows for more of that creative style builds. maybe to improve on your idea you could keep the idea of dressing up the wine bottle, but go more with that with fancy labels, and logos maybe some corks some shampain glasses, and so on

Madanimation responds:

Thanks for the write up, but I literally don't care enough to improve on anything these days.
I'd forgotten I even made this thing.

[Angel Of Love]

Decent dress-up game here

I am very entertained with your submission, you bring some new and old stuff but in a way it all seems to work out, I was excited to see some things that were nifty and what not and those are the types of things that make tings kinda differant but that seems to work aswell. The music was realnice and set a good tone for a decent game, the graphics were notbad, you shoiwed some nice detail and nice effort all around so nice efforts there, The "NAVIGATION" was something to be desired, but the game was actually fun and i got a good kick out of it all, the music was really something that kept it goping as everythng else could have used more items even some backrounds, but other then that it was an alright game. And so i have come close to the conclusion here on this submission, I have liked what you made here today, you have some interesting and entertaining ideas that went on here and i was generally pleased with the outcome. of things.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And here we have another decent game something that could ofcourse be improved on with some small changes and some possible clean up here and there, so this is something you can push in the next submission or upgrade on this one. A backround changer would be nice for the backrounds adding more items would be a plus, You have a good game here but in the end there was just too few items and needed more stuff and even effects.

[Abbie's Perfect Wedding]

Decent I really love these types of game submissions, while thy dont get the recognition they deserve, but they are interesing and unique in there own way and do deserve some extra points, now thats ofcourse if you put in the effort, but as for this one, Dress ups are always fun and its nice to see some different styles and i have seen my share of some differant styles, and this one is kind of new so thats cool and different i thought, the "BUTTONS" were too tricky, maybe it was because it was so close together and it was just odd on how they worked, Everything seemed "CLUTTERED" everything was just too close together, so maybe spreading stuff around, maybe a larger "CANVUS" is needed, anyways decent game here. So as explained there were some points that could be better, but i will get to thatsometime later in the review, for the mostpart this was still an alright entry, now ofcourse it could use some extra stuff and a tad more effort, but that will come in time,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You can never stop improving on things, as some submissions can be greatly improved with all sorts of changes and fixes, so i do hope you clean up a few things and add some changes as i have suggested here are some possible changes that will make it somewhat better, buttons need some reworking they seemed tricky and hard to play, it seems maybe because they are too close togethet and you never know whats being added and clicked. I think this type of game could use alarger canvus or screensize the one you did have was not that big, but with a larger one you can add more stuff, and you can add more stuff with more detail and quality, so thats something to think about when making these types and styles of games. Everything seemed cluttererd so maybe by adding a larger canvus as mentioned will help.