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[AdVaNcE DrEsS uP 2]

Kinda simular to the first one

I really like these types of flash games as they tend to take some time, I thought you showed some good effort and the outcome seems to show off that time and energy put in so props to you there, nice job indeed, There are some areas of improvment and it would really make this an all around flash entry so something to think about there. So i cant give this much of a higher score then the first version, but i will grade you on the effort and creativity of it, So you basicly have no changes except for maybe a girl version, now as i explained in the other ones you need some adjustments, like thinner lines brush stroke tool not so thick on the character and prop outlines. also adding a larger canvus will help since you had such a small areas to work with, it will also help to add more items aswell, and some sort of backround sthat change or the user can change would be a nice option aswell, these are all things i have mentioned in the first one but could still be used here, other then that this was notbad. And here is another interesting game, it has alot to offer and has some potential aswell, I did enjoy what you have here now just would like to see more effort all around, So while this was pretty good it could use a few extras It had everything that made it a great flash nice art, nice detail and nice graphics, so all and all this was actually a pretty good flash. So as any suggestions i posted try them and see how it goes, but for the overall of this it was pretty good stuff so good luck with all that.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I really liked the effort you put into this but it also still can improve, A few improvments could be done here I have posted a few ideas that could really make this flash take off, I have some advice on a few things here and they are posted throughout the review but they are all some needed improvments to your flash that will make it much more enjoyble for your fans, and anyone who views and or plays this game. backrounds would be a plus here, Aswell as more items and more of a canvus like too it, Make thinner lines brush stroke tool not so thick on the character and prop outlines.

[Aquarium Dress Up]

Nice game

Alright you have a delightful and Divine piece of flash work here, its not all the time that you can find such unique entries and i am glad i have found something of interest here today, Now ofcourse theres room to make things better and some slight improvment, I will elaborate on that later though, and how effectively you may push improvments. Sofar i like the "MEBU-PAGE" it was fresh and very inviting as a game should so it does show the interest that it should, but i must say the "GAME-PLAY" is much to be desired for like you just click on objects and it changes to a new item or color patteren, that sort of takes away the creativity as that a drag and drop style canoffer, so why not add a darg and drop style over the click and change option it will allow for more creativity, the music was fresh and interesting and made it for pleasent. And here is another interesting game, it has alot to offer and has some potential aswell, I did enjoy what you have here now just would like to see more effort all around, So while this was pretty good it could use a few extras It had everything that made it a great flash nice art, nice detail and nice graphics, so all and all this was actually a pretty good flash. So as any suggestions i posted try them and see how it goes, but for the overall of this it was pretty good stuff so good luck with all that.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
there is lots of room for improvments, just a few things here and there, but the extra effort would really improve on this and make it better and a great game overall, Dont get me wrong its pretty good as is, but could stand for a few more enhancments, and will only make things better. so give some of these ideas a shot and let the flash comeout nice. Add a drag and drop option, kind of style like the old drag and drop.

[Arri dress up]

Interesting dress-up

You have Engineered something very Professional here something delightful, and something of good interest here, i was glad to have found this, And i didnt find anything that was lacking or anything like that, So Eliminating anything to take away from this would be out of the question, you do have a good entry here and i look forward to seeing more of this and your work. So this was not a bad game i actually like and review alot of these types of games, and while this one does show some good effort, i think you did more of a copy and past style of stuff, you need more creative items, you need more random stuff, and more unique props and such, i do however like the "SNAP-ON" option that was someting differant, also adding some music, would be another nice touch. Ok so with all that said and done, there was some good parts in this flash entry, there were some parts that could be better on your end, but again i must say for the most part of this it was notbad at all, just needs some changes here and there, But you have something decent and something to go with for something even better on the next run

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Improving is always a plus, and So im here to try and suggest some good points, and hope they do get some consideration, and only say that because they could help to make this more fantastic then it already is, so here are some suggestions. but i like what you have here, hope to see some more qaulity and improvment come along soon. So you can Make it your own dress-up with your own unique twist and style, Add Some backrounds, Also i think you could add some music to this it just seems kind of bland without it. just some things to think about.

[Ashley Tisdale Dress Up]

A fine dress-up game

So my Initial reaction was that one differant by the end of the flash, This Contains some good visuals and content that was Loaded with some excitment, It was very Acceptable of being a great flash entry, it Thrived on all the elements and was a top notch submission and i was glad i had a chance to check this one out and look forward for more of your works soon. So you have a fine dress-up game here, it had lots of nice and detailed items and props, one thing this could use that was lacking was that there was no music, youcould easily add lots of music variaty, but anyways the items were pretty good, maybe adding some other types of items, i wouldnt mind seeing more random items. So a good start to a game with some nice options And some decent visuals, You really know how to use the flash program effectively and it shows, and you do it in moderation so thats some more effort and skill thats hows well on your side, Cant wait to see whatelse you are capable of im pretty sure it will be just as good as this one if not better.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So You have a neat game entry here, There was some nifty and Clever Things about it thruout the flash, There was a few various unnecessarily things here and there, and some cluttered areas,So maybe those are some areas to Focus on, But It could be even better though because it was decent but with some fixes and and more additions, it would be even much better so here are some of my ideas that i thought might help and improve on an already decent game idea. So there were a few things that could make this better, 1 being there was nomusic, and 2 you could add more random items, more goofy items more creative ideas.

[Ashley Tisdale Makeover]

This game was interesting

I really love these types of game submissions, while thy dont get the recognition they deserve, but they are interesting and unique in there own way and do deserve some extra points, now thats ofcourse if you put in the effort, but as for this one, I found it to be pretty Spectacular, and had some interesting points but could be better in some ways. Another good dress-up here, and by now i have seen alot of these, this one had some extras that you normally dont see and such, but the items while in dress-up mode are far too small you need a close up, and there was no music or sound/fx, so those are a few things that could be worked on, but other then that this was actually notbad at all. A decent game here most of this was pretty good And you showed some nice effort here, The game was was good and thats not to say it may need some more work but that may be suggested later, But some good effort was put fourth and was pretty good i thought, keep at it and keep making facinating stuff like this, I do look forward to more of your works though, as this was notbad and kept me interested and didnt bore me, it was highly amusing, anyways keep up the decent flashworks

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
First of all good Flash you have here, Theres a few things that could have some Ironing out just little stuff though, and its the little stuff that will propell this flash even farther,So you do have a good Project here but some areas and elements can be Utilised much better and more efeciently, so anyways here are some tips and advice that can help improve on your flash entry her So with this one i noticed there was no music or sound option unless i missed something, also the items were too small so maybe making the screen much larger and making the items much larger aswell.

[Ashley's Dress Code]

This one was alright

You have Established a good submission here with this entry, and with a good and Positive attitude and good direction you really have brought out the good in this, Infact i Realized it was more Spectacular then i thought so nice job there and with some more efforts in the right direction i can see this going even father as it has lots of potential. This dress-up was alright nothing too special here i do like the going on a trip and packing up options and the music was notbad, but it was pretty decent, the props and items were ok, allthough there could be more random and unique styles, but other then that this was a pretty basic type of dress-up. A decent Game here, i was surprised with some of the nice options it had, but that brought more to the table, so nice effort there, OK so while this reviews is almost comming to an end I found this flash submission to be fun somewhat entertaining, it had some good Graphics and showed some of your effort put into this, so keep at it as this was notbad at all. but with that said hope to see more of your work especially if its like this, but anyways great job on this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I Really like what you have presented here, You Delivered A decent flash game, You have shown in this submission that it has alot more Potential So i say keep rolling with it to make it a top quality submission already more then it is, So here are some ideas and tips It could use a few fixes and changes for better improvment ofcourse that should help on making this better, Hope you have the time to put some of them in as it will only improve on your good idea already. There are a few things that could make this better like, Change to drag n drop, Add more random and unique items, add more animated stuff in general.

[ASV Dress-up #1]

Needs more items and stuff.

So i dont wish to be Negitive at all with this one, because it was actually pretty Groovy, and with some more enhancements with some moderation it is capable of being even more with some more quality and detail it can be even better, So as i do start this off, i will say that i have enjoyed this and hope the rest is just as good and even future projects. Now this one was pretty interesting there was not much to go on though, it was interesting though and the drawing was notbad and there were a few items, but not a whole lot maybe you can add more items and props, also remove the whole button thing and use a drag and drop idea it seems to create more creative, an idea to think about. I found this to be a pretty decent flash even found it Dazzling at times, It did however have some ups and downs but nothing that couldnt be improved with some fixes here and there, even suggested a few ideas above, besides that it was pretty good, hope to see more. There was some stuff that could be better but for the mostpart i liked it and im pretty sure others will too.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This was a pretty Clever and good flash if you ask me, It was Expressed well and presented well, but it could be better with a few suggestions and ideas, But keep at it and always improve on your ideas so hope some of these may help to make your idea much better. I have Recommended a few ideas to help and improve on your flash work here, just needs to be Pollished a lil more. Adding more items and more of a Drag n Drop style, so with a few extras this could be much better.

[Aliens Defense]

Kinda like starcraft

There are a few Lacking points on this flash I can elaborate on those bits and pieces later in the review, But you also have some outstanding points that really stood out and made this a rather enjoyble flash experience and thats something i do hope you keep up with as this was pretty decent and just needs some smal changes and cleaning up. So nice game here, was not very big but i still found some fun in it, this kind of reminded me of starcraft, and as soon as you get the game going it takes you right into battle wich is nice but you should slow easy it in and off some more basic idea of this, this kind of game has lots of potential, and even adding medal options would be another big plus as well. I found some parts Of this game even better then others, it was pretty good though, and could go for some upgrades here and there and some small details also here and there, Although this review is coming to an end i just wanted to say it was a pleasure checking this out very amusing, very entertaining, and i was pretty happy with the outcome, so nice job and nice efforts.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And I will start off The improvment tips with saying this is actually pretty decent the flash has good potential, it does need some more work though, Maybe i can elaborate that better here though, Below are a few ideas that could make it better but does need your effort on this, Its actually pretty outstanding of a flash game submission, but at the same time is Lacking in some areas of the flash, So use some of the ideas it will greatly make this better. OK so there are a number of things you can do with this to make it better, like more better instructions, dont start the battle right away, adding some medals would also be key.

[car riding]

Kinda fun

I wont start this review off with being Negitive, because this was more Spectacular then anything else, It was not outstanding but is capable of being just that, as well as being the best it can be, but its a decent flash and i can see this going even farther, so you do have a decent presentation and great idea here i hope you can improve on this. This was actually a kind of fun game, the music could be more clear and sharper and probably have more choices in the music cycle, but the game was actually kinda fun. this is one of those little games that probably could use some medals to it, but overall a little fun game. I was glad to have seen and even review this piece as it was highly entertaining and you gave it much effort, Even with the right Attitude and thats what you need to make something nifty like this, so props to you on that, i wouldnt mind seeing more into this and even more effort but for the most of this it was pretty good stuff. So hope this helps good luck I really liked the flash.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This Flash could be Pollished up a bit, and maybe use a few Tweaks here and there, ultimately This will be a better flash game with some improvments , so checkout the advice and tips i have suggested. And again ultimately will allow you to have more viewers to your flash as well. And bring a bit more quality to your flash. So try some of the ideas out. ADD MEDALS this will increase the worth and popularity of this game. you can also add a cycle of different music or adding music choices at the click of the user to the player, also abit more quality should go into the music and sound.

flashmakeit responds:

Thank you for the review and advice. Your comment was really worth reading. I am thinking about making a point and click game. I would love to learn how to add medals to a game. It would be worth the challenge. I am glad you kinda enjoyed this game and I enjoyed your useful comment.

[ASV Dress-Up #2]

Pretty basic dress-up game

You have made this out to be an outstanding and Professional flash submission now dont get me wrong it does have some spots here and there that could be better, but im sure you will ultimately get to that, but overall this is a good piece of flash and i was pleased to see it in its entirely, so nice effort and good job all around on this one. Not to bemean or anything but this was a pretty basic dress up, i love all the bright and cartoony color and all but it was still basic and not much stuff to really mix and match the whole click a button was kinda meh since the drag and drop seems more creative, but anyways its was your basic dress-up here. On an ending note here this was a fun flash, really enjoyed it and liked the effort you put forward making this fun and entertaining for all to enjoy, There was a few Lacking areas but those are things that can be easily cleaned up, Maybe i can elaborate more on it later, I really liked it from the start to the finish, making a good effort all around, nice job here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And well you have a Decent flash here, It was actually pretty clever the way you did it, so i was pretty impressed with that, Some things could be Utilised better but anyways there are alot of these types but with some small fixes here and there and a few more additions, It could be much more improved, so dont be afraid to try some of the ideas out it can only make things better and much more improved. This needs more of a DRAG n DROP style, MORE ITEMS would be a big plus aswell, Besides that this was just your basic dress-up game.