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[ASV Dress-up #1]

Needs more items and stuff.

So i dont wish to be Negitive at all with this one, because it was actually pretty Groovy, and with some more enhancements with some moderation it is capable of being even more with some more quality and detail it can be even better, So as i do start this off, i will say that i have enjoyed this and hope the rest is just as good and even future projects. Now this one was pretty interesting there was not much to go on though, it was interesting though and the drawing was notbad and there were a few items, but not a whole lot maybe you can add more items and props, also remove the whole button thing and use a drag and drop idea it seems to create more creative, an idea to think about. I found this to be a pretty decent flash even found it Dazzling at times, It did however have some ups and downs but nothing that couldnt be improved with some fixes here and there, even suggested a few ideas above, besides that it was pretty good, hope to see more. There was some stuff that could be better but for the mostpart i liked it and im pretty sure others will too.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This was a pretty Clever and good flash if you ask me, It was Expressed well and presented well, but it could be better with a few suggestions and ideas, But keep at it and always improve on your ideas so hope some of these may help to make your idea much better. I have Recommended a few ideas to help and improve on your flash work here, just needs to be Pollished a lil more. Adding more items and more of a Drag n Drop style, so with a few extras this could be much better.

[Aliens Defense]

Kinda like starcraft

There are a few Lacking points on this flash I can elaborate on those bits and pieces later in the review, But you also have some outstanding points that really stood out and made this a rather enjoyble flash experience and thats something i do hope you keep up with as this was pretty decent and just needs some smal changes and cleaning up. So nice game here, was not very big but i still found some fun in it, this kind of reminded me of starcraft, and as soon as you get the game going it takes you right into battle wich is nice but you should slow easy it in and off some more basic idea of this, this kind of game has lots of potential, and even adding medal options would be another big plus as well. I found some parts Of this game even better then others, it was pretty good though, and could go for some upgrades here and there and some small details also here and there, Although this review is coming to an end i just wanted to say it was a pleasure checking this out very amusing, very entertaining, and i was pretty happy with the outcome, so nice job and nice efforts.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And I will start off The improvment tips with saying this is actually pretty decent the flash has good potential, it does need some more work though, Maybe i can elaborate that better here though, Below are a few ideas that could make it better but does need your effort on this, Its actually pretty outstanding of a flash game submission, but at the same time is Lacking in some areas of the flash, So use some of the ideas it will greatly make this better. OK so there are a number of things you can do with this to make it better, like more better instructions, dont start the battle right away, adding some medals would also be key.

[car riding]

Kinda fun

I wont start this review off with being Negitive, because this was more Spectacular then anything else, It was not outstanding but is capable of being just that, as well as being the best it can be, but its a decent flash and i can see this going even farther, so you do have a decent presentation and great idea here i hope you can improve on this. This was actually a kind of fun game, the music could be more clear and sharper and probably have more choices in the music cycle, but the game was actually kinda fun. this is one of those little games that probably could use some medals to it, but overall a little fun game. I was glad to have seen and even review this piece as it was highly entertaining and you gave it much effort, Even with the right Attitude and thats what you need to make something nifty like this, so props to you on that, i wouldnt mind seeing more into this and even more effort but for the most of this it was pretty good stuff. So hope this helps good luck I really liked the flash.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This Flash could be Pollished up a bit, and maybe use a few Tweaks here and there, ultimately This will be a better flash game with some improvments , so checkout the advice and tips i have suggested. And again ultimately will allow you to have more viewers to your flash as well. And bring a bit more quality to your flash. So try some of the ideas out. ADD MEDALS this will increase the worth and popularity of this game. you can also add a cycle of different music or adding music choices at the click of the user to the player, also abit more quality should go into the music and sound.

flashmakeit responds:

Thank you for the review and advice. Your comment was really worth reading. I am thinking about making a point and click game. I would love to learn how to add medals to a game. It would be worth the challenge. I am glad you kinda enjoyed this game and I enjoyed your useful comment.

[ASV Dress-Up #2]

Pretty basic dress-up game

You have made this out to be an outstanding and Professional flash submission now dont get me wrong it does have some spots here and there that could be better, but im sure you will ultimately get to that, but overall this is a good piece of flash and i was pleased to see it in its entirely, so nice effort and good job all around on this one. Not to bemean or anything but this was a pretty basic dress up, i love all the bright and cartoony color and all but it was still basic and not much stuff to really mix and match the whole click a button was kinda meh since the drag and drop seems more creative, but anyways its was your basic dress-up here. On an ending note here this was a fun flash, really enjoyed it and liked the effort you put forward making this fun and entertaining for all to enjoy, There was a few Lacking areas but those are things that can be easily cleaned up, Maybe i can elaborate more on it later, I really liked it from the start to the finish, making a good effort all around, nice job here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And well you have a Decent flash here, It was actually pretty clever the way you did it, so i was pretty impressed with that, Some things could be Utilised better but anyways there are alot of these types but with some small fixes here and there and a few more additions, It could be much more improved, so dont be afraid to try some of the ideas out it can only make things better and much more improved. This needs more of a DRAG n DROP style, MORE ITEMS would be a big plus aswell, Besides that this was just your basic dress-up game.

[1.7 Sextillion Pin-Ups]

Someting differant here

This is a Groovy flash entry, Its Groovy and Swanky, OK so i just want to get this started and mention here that you have something good here you have a good vision of ideas and an overall good concept of stuff, and thats all it really takes to get something like this really going, now throughout the review i may suggest some ideas but thats later in the review, So with this one i was abit confused with this one, because the design and interface was really confusing, and kind of just everything was "CLOGGED" up and there was no real direction, i wouldnt mind seeing more of a traditional method here though, It seems well made and lots of effort but just has too much goingon here and could have things more spreadout expecially the design and all. But anyways once again we have another decent game here, theres not alot i can say to improve on this but there are some things that could be cleaned up as menioned and below, but for the most of this its pretty good and i liked everything i saw here, so keep up the good work. with some more effort so below are a few ideas that really could push this flash to the extra efforts, good luck on updating this or any new games you might be working on.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The Submission actually looks pretty good at this point. All you need to do is keep on improving from here and making more extras here and there. needs things to spreadout more, theres too much stuff with the interface and all, a more basic and more traditional style would be nice

[Anime Avatar Creator]

Good idea

You have Engineered a good flash game here, it has lots to see and do, allthough it could use more in some parts but that will ultimately be explained later, But as i start off this flashsubmission, i like what you have presented here and there are some fun and entertaining stuff as this gets started, I do hope to see more of it thruout so keep it rolling. I must say this was something, differant, I have seen alot of dress-ups and this was a wellmade one with lots to see, lots of items, and some good effects like with color and such, so i was pretty impressed with the whole outcome, Now i would like to see some more things like some "SOUND/FX" even some "MUSIC" choices would be great, well something to think about anyways. I really like what you have here, and since this review is almost over ill just say that in moderation this was a decent flash game, and shows what you are capable of and would love to see more of your skills pushed further, but as for this game, it was a nifty lil game, and i was pretty happy with the gameplay, very entertaining and some good fun to it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I found this to be mildly entertaining There was some nice lements here and there, and ofcourse there are some parts that could be better throughout. Well you have a good game here, i would suggest that you add some sound/fx and some music would really put this even in a better effected light of improvments.

[Anime Character Generator]

Cute dress-up

OK well good game you have here i would really like to see this Thrive and Flourish into something great, I can elaborate in more detail on that later, but you may want to find any Lacking and unnecessarily elements and make them more better and efficient for the flash game so that it runs better aswell, But you have a good start into something good here. I was glad to see that this has won underdog of the week, Its always something nice to win some awards for your efforts, and now onto your game here, And as i get more into this i am pretty amazed you have somethin really good here, but there is not much of creativity as you cant design stuff with easy you do have some interesting stuff though, and i love the use of the color bars here and that does add to the creativity, you should add the dran and drop dress-up option though, that would allow for more creativity. also some sound/fx and some music options would be another good option. A Dazzling Flash submission you have here, So my final thoughts on this was that it was a pretty good flash, and i got some good fun play out of it, it does need more effort but it was pretty entertaining and glad i had the chance to check this out. and i hope your other stuff is just as good, and on the last note here keep up the interesting works of flash.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
First of all in improvments tis could use a few, you can add a number of tings to make this a better and more entertaining game, So below i have suggested some new ideas and old tips that can make it all worth your while, keep up the good effort. and remember creativity is always a plus, and never hurts to go beyond the box in creation anyways good luck. Add a drop and drag option style of dress-up, Also adding some music or some music choices would be great with this aswell as some sound/fx to go with all the clicking and such.

[Pokémon Fartfetch]

Cute

And here we have a decent game, and a good submission entry, there was some decent imagry and visuals, and also had some fun gameplayabout it all, I did like some good points in this, However there are some points that could use more effort but I will elaborate thatlater in the review, but overall this was a decent start of a game entry. and you Processed a good flash here. OK so the idea behind this was ok, the graphics were cute and the idea was cute aswell, there was not muchto this though a little "TIME-WASTER" not more then that, but once you get all three "FANS" going it does get laggy and choppy, so maybe some lower quality options could work there aswell, but anyways its an alright game but needs more to it, needs more fun to it. I really found this Submission entry to be pretty good, Well presented well percieved and well orginised, The game was fun and entertaining, not to say it could use some small adjustments for improving, But you brought all the elements together making for a decent game here. So untill your next flash keep up the creative skills flowing and hope to make much more enjoying fun games like this one, i would love to see more anyways untill then good luck on your next Submission.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I must say this was a decent flash submission here, It has some entertaining and amusing factors and was pretty fun, Could use abit more Focus on some of the weaker areas, and if you do put some stronger direction there it will be a pretty solid flash, but other then that its an ok flash game, and could use some updates and changes with a few ideas as suggested, so go with it and let it shine thru. Gets choppy and laggy way too fast needs ome quality issues there, maybe slowing down the fan abit would be key.