Pretty decent game
~~REVIEW~~
ok so the loading time was not an issue but would have been nice if it was somewhat better in that area, it didnt take alot of time to load, but again something to think about in the next one, So as it did load, i was looking all over for the {PLAY-BUTTON} and it took me longer then expected but found the tiny button, another tip of improvment might be to make a better button, something more visible, I like how this starts with a story, The game is pretty fun, and its like a story wich shows good creativity on your end, so nice job on this and i had fun with this, there were just a few issies with loading time, and maybe the buttons but not much of an issue, other then that i thought it was alright, so nice job on this one and nice creativity.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As for the {PLAY-BUTTON} >> Work on the button, make it look more like a button, all you have was the text of a buttion, you should make the text with a box or circle around it, and make that clickble aswell, that will give more area to click on and not so hard to click on by viewers.
~~OVERALL~~
A fun story game pretty good.
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