XwaynecoltX's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[How to Draw The Simpsons]

((( GOOD DRAWING TUT )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad, kinda neat actually, and shows you step by step very nice work, could use more characters, and maybe a better menu section, but for the most part it was entertaining...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more characters like different ones from the whole shoe moe, should be in there barny, and somany others which would make this much better...

~~OVERALL~~
A good tutorial, one of the better drawing ones but still could use more...

~X~

Aprime responds:

thanks for the review, but i did how to draw the simpsons family, and think how long this takes me, however your right i should take my time, lol, u didnt even say that, any who, thanks for the review

add me to favs

www.aprime.tk

[Mystery on the High Seas]

((( FUN BUT NEEDS WORK )))

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad, but clearly needs more work, and more effort for sure, i did notice some nice moments here and there, but you need more time and also downsize thats just way to big, anyways fun game...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some details, more effects, maybe even different view shots, but most of all. downsize the file as much as you can...

~~OVERALL~~
A very large file needing some re-work and more detail...

~X~

[KoolMoves Tutorial (1of3)]

((( INTERESTING )))

~~REVIEW~~
Its nice has some decent stuff about it, but also could use more maybe even a more fresher look about it all, nice job though...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More stuff for mor variaty, and more presentation at the start...

~~OVERALL~~
A nice tutorial could use more hough, nice job...

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tTLight-SephirothTt responds:

thank you very much

[NSG004: Pico Jr. Jr. 0.6]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad, i was very entertained with it, i loved the music it was really pleasent, and the game itself was very fast paced, but very cute and funny, also very nice work on the sketch like artwork at somepoints, as for the controls it was abit tricky but got it down...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe a run through the control system maybe i missed it, but for the most part it was a neat and well balanced game...

~~OVERALL~~
A fun game abit tricky at first but fun and cute, aswell as nice artwork...

~X~

Bezman responds:

Cheers man!

The full game is meant to have a sort of interactive intro. After going to the toilets, Pico would come out, then the commentator (not included due to lack of time) would say you need to get back to class and a message would pop up letting you know the controls for movement. You'd start off with no gun and first you'd learn to use the bodies, then pick up the gun from the open locker and learn to shoot. Lasting maybe a minute.

That got scrapped, along with many other things. I'll maybe ask you to look at it before we submit to make any criticisms.

Danny (the programmer) did actually put in a control screen at the start though. You should see it when you click play, so maybe you clicked twice quickly by mistake or something.

Right. Review of your review.

constructive criticism/suggestions: One well explained point. More would be nice. 7/10

exposition of experience:
"a run through the control system maybe i missed it"
"as for the controls it was abit tricky but got it down..."
I get the gist of how you coped.
It'd maybe be nice to know what level you got to but enh.
7/10

praise/encouragement: You pick out a few points you liked. 8/10

clarity of expression: No problems. Though "notbad" is two words. But I only mention that for the pedantic bonus points.
10/10

elaboration & being specific: Not really any more specific than it needs to be. You do focus on the various aspects - control system, music art... maybe be nice to know a particular sketch you liked, or maybe what in particular made it cute and funny... but that's not really needed.
7/10

coverage (how much): Pretty much everything.
8/10

overall: I'd basically just like more suggestions/criticisms. I'm all about the brutally harsh criticisms, letting me know what to work on, or what to bear in mind for future.
But it was a brilliant review. You really let me know how you felt, praised and criticised. Just as a good review should.
7/10

[Resident Pico]

((( WOW )))

~~REVIEW~~
Wow this is what should have won for daily 1st, very fast very fun, and great detail like in the enemy, i espicialy like the gun fire and its effects very impressed, anyways great game very fun and very smooth work...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing it was as perfect as i love this game awsome work...

~~OVERALL~~
A great pico day game, should be daily first...

~X~

[Pico vs. Uberkids]

((( HAHA )))

~~REVIEW~~
Ok now out of the bunch you sent this one seems to be the funniest, the game portion is funny as hell and great sound.fx, love all the characters and there simple ways hehe, anyways great game tom...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would suggest lose the "TEXT-BUBBLE" buttons and let it stream or flow like a movie or something...

~~OVERALL~~
Another pico classic, one of the best in my opinion...

~X~

[GIJoe Action Figure Maker]

((( WOW )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha i love this, i never thought i would see a dress-up of "GI-JOE" i was such a fan back in the day, and im gonna add this to my faves list very nice idea, add more soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more options, maybe like add different pages to flip though for much more props and stuff, anyways nice job, keep it up...

~~OVERALL~~
A great idea for a dress-up, Gi-Joe hehe...

~X~

applepwnz responds:

Thanks for the great review! I'll take your advice into consideration when I make the updated version.

[halo delta]

((( NEEDS MORE )))

~~REVIEW~~
Seems like it was unfinished, probably not best to submit half arsed work or even parts, but it did look promising for something really good just needs more to it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Finish it first then release it...

~~OVERALL~~
A half arse finished game sorta...

~X~

[Sonic Defense]

((( IT WAS OK )))

~~REVIEW~~
It was an ok game sorta fun, but also seems like it needs more to it, and much more effort, and more time, needs some little detail and stuff...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More effort and more detail, even little effects will omprove on it...

~~OVERALL~~
A fun game but needs some work and more effort...

~X~