XwaynecoltX's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Goth Chick Dress Up]

I like the dark theme here

~~REVIEW~~
So this one was more goth girl related that was ok, kinda neat since you dont see that much, The "MUSIC" is pretty good and fits the theme very well, The loading on this seemed to take up some time abit, But as the game started it was kinda worth it, So as the game started, it was pretty good, and the character was pretty good, and the amount of items was evene better, allthough you could add some more color and animated items in the mix of all the dark stuff, but other then that this was actually pretty good, on a last note, you might want to add some sorta scene-selector.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I thought i would use this little area to help suggest some sort of improvments in making certain things better, so try some of these tips and ideas out as it can only make things better, and even bring you a better overall outcome. you had a decent amount of items, you could add some more color and animated items in the mix of all the dark stuff, I personally love these types of games, the things that really make these work to there best potential, is a few things but one important thing is to have a related backround, just a white or bland backrounds are ok but just not much there. anyways hope that helps.

~~OVERALL~~
A good dark theme dress-up here, could use a tad of color though.

[Summer Skater]

Ok so this was a fun game

This was fun and differant, the graphics were pretty good, the gameplay was even better and ran pretty smooth, but i suppose this does get a little repettitive, it could be better in that aspect of things i do like the game score and option to submit scoresso it did have options for the user or player, it ran pretty good with no real issue, maybenot having the cursur up there and just have theskateboarder as a better idea, but anyways good game i had alot of fun with this one and it was neat in the straight forward view, i look forward to more of these games, you should think about adding some medals it would really push up the game popularity,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some extras like some medals, maybe remove the cursor as stated above, but it was a pretty good game.

~~OVERALL~~
Fun game really enjoyed it, lots of fun im sure everyone else will enjoy this.

[Escape Pico's Mansion]

Another decent game of pico

Ok so heres another pico game, notbad at all on this one i guess i could understand the "SIZE" it was abit much but then again the content was really good so in the end it was worth it, and congrats on winning an award on this so guess it reaaly was all worth it, also like the addition of medals on this one, that made it that much more fun and entertaining, Only problem for me. also love how this is in the whole "PIXLE" form, almost reminds me of my series and ghost motel. so anyways onto the game, I am glad youkept the same style as the old and original pico games, still had that feel and such, so anyways good game here i really liked it, keep up the awsome work, i look forward to more from you.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So this was pretty good pretty close to the original, and the medals were neat, onlything i can suggest would be lower filesize somewhat.

~~OVERALL~~
A fun pico game alot like the originals, everyone should enjoy this one, as i did.

[IHOP Waitress Soundboard]

Funny board

Ok so for starters this was notbad, the board itself is ok kinda entertaining, i love hopw you have alot of differant sounds with this one and such, I also like how you made this all into like a menu of sorts and the voice was real seems like it, Now the one thing about alot of these types of sound boards is they are just the sounds but you should add some clip with each sound, that would really make it more interesting for the viewer of the board. The soundboard was pretty good and does show some good effort on your part here, the text as buttons could be better aswell, maybe more of a box or circle would make it click over better and look better, but anyways nice job its a good game i actually did like this one, anyways untill next time good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
first of all good game, could use a few fixes and changes for better improvment ofcourse, i have suggested a few ideas to help and hope you have the time to put some of them in as it will only improve on your good idea already, Now the one thing about alot of these types of sound boards is they are just the sounds but you should add some clip with each sound, that would really make it more interesting for the viewer of the board. You may want to work on your buttons more too, the textonly style buttons are kind of hard at times and dont click over as good as they cn be.

~~OVERALL~~
And overall this was a good game i had fun reviewing it, there was actuallysome fun sounds with this one, and you showed some nice effort, keep up the good work.

JuneLinMilliam responds:

After I took a look at your newgrounds it is like a honor to get a review from you lol. I started making soundboards in 2008 and what I like to do is try to make them not look the same as you can see by the SSFIV soundboards I did. If you put your mouse over the text and move it near the end you will see that it is made with a box around it but you just can not see it. I am open to better ideas when I make these and will try to use new things when I learn them. Thank you very much for the review!

[Olympic Shooting Practice]

Kinda like duck hunt

So i must say this one did took awhile to load but was still good, The file was abit larger but i still found this flash to be pretty entertaining and keeps me interested, and the music alone was very impressive kept it interesting aswell, The game was pretty simple kind of like duck hunt but thats what i liked about it, the game was fast paced right away so maybe that was my downfall, or maybe it could be a lsower build up from easy to hard but from the mostpart of this, this was pretty good and i found it fun and entertaining game, veryamusing, as for improving maybe slower build up of harder levels, anyways nice job here i liked it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
To start off you could have a slow build up of harder levels,

~~OVERALL~~
Fun game kind of like duck hunt, i look forward to more like this, keep up the fun gamework.

Psionic3D responds:

Thanks for checking it out and taking the time to respond!

[Dress teh Anime]

Nice art detail

So this one was actually pretty good still had some points it could be better though, Now as just said the art and detail was very nice good detail and shows great effort on your part thats a plus and makes it visually great, it could use some other aspects such as some backrounds, some other items more some that maybe have some sorta animation to it, also everything is just bunched up too close you may want to spread things out abit more, You have something good here, allthough it does need abit more, but really overall it was pretty balanced just needed abit more stuff, as stated already, so great work here keep making more flash as these are pretty good and lots of fun.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So this is were I suggest some ideas and tips to better improve stuff, Your game is actually pretty good doesnt need much but could use a few things. First off i want to suggest spreading everything out as it was just too bunched up. Decent game here, i really like the effort you put into this, one thing you could have done though was put more effort on the backrounds, it just seemed too bland. Items and accecories are probably the key stuff that really makes up a dress-up game, and seems like your game lacked in alot of them, so i would suggest adding much more items, props and accecories, having some items that were animated somehow would be an extra touch aswell. besides that it was pretty good.

~~OVERALL~~
It has been a pleasure enjoying this flash from start to finish, i got alot out of it and i hope others enjoy it aswell, if not they will be missing a decent flash, could use some extra stuff but for now it was pretty good. keep up the good work.

[Descent]

~~REVIEW~~
So in my opinion this was a pretty good game, the first level was actually pretty good and very easy and simple as some might say, but mostly too easy, maybe you can make the first level somewhat more interesting and harder. Also nice effects especially with all the level completions that kind of made it more entertaining so props to you on giving it some nice and flashhy effects. As said before this was more simple then anything else but the game it self was hard to master, so regardless it was still fun and entertaining, But anyways you have some good work here allthough some more effort for better improvment could be done for an overall better out come, Its not perfect but is ok for what you did supply in content, so on that part of stuff it was notbad at all. keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I really found your flash interesting but still has room for improvments, so with these ideas i hope you can make it somewhat better, hope the ideas do help as you do have a decent flash here. maybe you can make the first level somewhat more interesting and harder.

~~OVERALL~~
You have some decent work here, and i was pleased to have seen it, while it does need some work i still enjoyed your work and look forward to more improvments and or updates as it has alot of potential, but for the mostpart this was decent stuff, so keep up the great flash works. Good game kinda simple at first but does get better as you play on, could be harder though especially in the earlier levels.

[Heroestick]

~~REVIEW~~
This was actually a pretty good game, the creatures were neat, very well designed and was neat to see a good ai in this wich you presnted well, so nice job there, i was impressed, Great choice of music and sounds wich came in handy and made for a pretty good game here, The game play was not that hard but i was happy with how the art and graphics was of some god quaulity, so nice work there, And once again we have another decent flash, theres not alot i can say to improve on this but there are some things that could be cleaned up as menioned and below, but for the most of this its pretty good and i liked everything i saw here, so keep up the good work. So anyways great game it all seemed to be very interactive and fun, hope to see more of your work soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I found this to be a decent flash, but still thought it could be better, I hope with abit more effort and some more ideas as suggested it can be much improved, Such as maybe not so simple but give it some sorta depth. even more design to it,

~~OVERALL~~
What a great presentation you presented here, while it could use more effort and a few other stuff, i still enjoyed what you made here, and i hope others enjoyed it as much as i did, good luck on your next flash works. Great game fun and simple and nice graphics, really good design here.

[Last Robot 2]

~~REVIEW~~
This was a pretty good game, i like the fresh feel and smooth element you brought into this that was anice addition, I love the world you created for this though, The game was hard at times maybe thats an area you can make it easier for users and such, The game was fun and i like all the medals you should think about adding moremedal options though, So while i liked this flash there are some good and bad about it, i went over it abit but have suggested some more ideas below hope it helps, its not major but could use more of the effort on little stuff here and there, anyways hope it helps as this was actually a pretty good flash. So anyways good luck on your next piece i really enjoyed this though. Hope to see more of your work soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
There are some improvments that could be made, here are a few suggestions, some effort on your side will only make this even better. So give these options a try, Such as some easier options for players, and some more detail in the graphics and art.

~~OVERALL~~
So overall this was actually a pretty good flash, there were a few things that could be better as suggested above, but overall it was pretty good,