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[Awaken: Front Line]

Interesting and unque game

My Initial thoughts were not great but then thought this had some more Positive then the Negitive, It actually Contains alot of interesting ideas surrounding it and such, and by the end it was more on a Spectacular Alright this was a very unique and interesting game it had some unique elements and reminded me of those real time strategy games and you have put that here on a flash version so that was something nice and neat and i thought it was a well rounded and detailed game, how this can be better maybe to flatten the land much easier would be one way as it was going in theother direction at times anyways nice job Overall, This was decent piece, and a good start in some nifty ideas, looking forward to see what all you do in the future! but as for this one i have found it to be somewhat amusing, entertaining and even intrging.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So i found this piece to be somewhat outstanding it has its elemenst and its concept seems to really work wich i liked, so nice job there, ultimately this could be somewhat better, I will elaborate on that in just a bit, a more smoother flattening land option would be a nice touch.

[Mission in Space]

I like this game

I really like these types of flash games as they tend to take some time, I thought you showed some good effort and the outcome seems to show off that time and energy put in so props to you there, nice job indeed, There are some areas of improvment and it would really make this an all around flash entry so something to think about there. Ok so now on to the details of the review hehe, The "GRAPHICS" seemed to flow well with everything else, and looked pretty awsome, I guess this was like a turn based game, wich made it more fun for me, and that gave off a really good experience on things with this game and all, The enemythings like the aliens seems to be too strong, maybe thats an area you can work on abit, You really hit it right on with the "MUSIC" as it was perfect flow material for the content of the game, So a fun game indeed, kind of confusing at first but soon after a bit you get it, so nice game here i was pleased with it.Now with all that said i dont wish to bore you any longer, and want to close off this review before i get to improvments, but like i said before this is a decent entry there are probably some areas you could have done better, but overall its a decent flash fun and somewhat entertaining, and overall i had a good experience with this all, so nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And now we really come to the end of the review with the improvments sections, So not to nit pick but to try and suggest a few ideas here and there that could generally give you some ideas to make a better outcome, and who knows maybe you will see something you didnt before, so here are some tips and ideas and a few suggestions on improvments, give it a go. Make the aliens not so strong in killing you, So atfirst this game was kind of confused maybe a more "SIMPLE" direction in what needs to be done and goals and suchjust an idea though.

[BearBound]

cute game

As i have been reviewing for years I have seen alot of this and alot of that, but its nice to see the quality improve, your entry shows the effort and quality of what talking about or in this case writing about. Congrats on the award first of all, those are always nice as it shows that people appreciate your work so that was a nice gesture, The game had a small issue like when you found a spot that it went to a menu acheivment screen and when you click on menu screen button it didnt do aything something to check out, its a fun game kind of cute but needs more medals, needs more content and such,The game was pretty easy and the medals were pretty easy maybe add some harder medals to acheive. Creativity will make worlds come alive, So keep creating with no Limits. and as far as im concerned you have created a vast world of creativity already,
now just keep it going with other awsome stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Other than that I felt like the game was fun for a bit, there are some things that could make it better, so i have made a few ideas and basic stuff that i saw that could be improved on and such so give it a thought or two. I would really like to see you improve more on this, i think one way of doing thatis going with more Medals, the ones you do have on this flash are ok but could use more, for a more fun experience. Also look into fixing the button to go back to menue screen from acheivments page seemed glichy, Adding some harder medals to acheive would be a pls for this fun game. And adding A skip button on the intro cut scene would also be another nice addition.

[the Clobinater Dressup v2]

Kind of dull

This is a some-what Interesting game, I thought it would be something totally differant but boy was i wrong, I thought this was a pretty good Flash game in its own right. And you gave it just the right groovy feel, so nice job there. I found this one to be kind of dull, not that it was a bad thing just that there was not much to this including "ITEMS" So items are a much needed plus for this and any game like it so thats something to think about, There was not much backrounds, but you did have a few, the whole color sheme was ok but maybe abit too soft, and last the "BODY" it was the dull part that could have used more options with more shape options more curve and more formation options. Now that i think about it, this was pretty nicely done from start all the way to the finish, It is a fairly differant and interesting flash you have here. What's the most interesting is how you're able to have so many complicated and appealing parts in it wich i think is why i really liked it as much as i did.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So There are a few Things to take a second look at, And I will get to those, You have a decent entry, But i would like to take this time to Throw a few ideas at you, maybe some advice and so on, and I hope you use it to the best of your knowledge. Untill good luck. Add more Pieces and Accessories, especially adding some detailed ones with shading and some blinking and animated pieces. The body needed more formations and curves and so on.

[Megaman x - Armors]

Lots to chose from

I thought this was an alright game submission that you have here, I have always been a fan of these types of submission entries, In fact this was alot better then i had expected, but was pleased with what you had here,a good game for some good fun entertainment. Good game you have here, there was actually alot to chose from as in items and props, i dont think i saw a single animated one though thats probably something you may want to add at a later date and such. the other thing i have noticed about this are that the "BUTTONS" are too small here, you can click them but still too small so some larger maybe more fancy buttons would sufice, Things seemed too "PACKED-IN" on items so maybe you can make the view screen larger somehow and the items wont seem so packed in, anyways good game here. I am surprised this doesn't have a much better score! I have really come to enjoy this! You just get so wrapped up in this flash it is hard to keep track of everything else, The neatest part about this is probably how there is alot of possitive elements through-out the entire flash. so nice entry you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Alright All in all, you have a quite nifty, but under the surface, there's a lot of room for improvement. You just have to take the time and effort and put more into this game, And maybe you will use a few of the ideas that i have posted up here. Just give it a thought. One thing i have found that lacks in alot of these types of games is the lack of items, and props, Such is the case with your game, so adding more stuff will only make the game better and give it a more full finish to it. buttons are too small they could be a tad larger viewscreen is needed, everything looks packed in so a larger view screen would be nice.

[[SS] Morning After Pill]

Hmm interesting

And so this entry was somewhat differant more then i had expected, but i would say that i had some fun with this, and allthough it could use some more stuff and more happenings it was still something of some interest so you did a good job so far, OK so ill start off first by saying this is actually not a dress up game, but i did happen to find this in the Dress-up game section wich was odd, as for the content it waspretty short fast and a lil cute so it was not all that bad, and i was entertained, but seems like it started and finished very fast though, unless there is some hidden game icouldnt find but anyways it is what it is. And to close this review off ill just say that it was a pleasure seeing this and even reviewing, now i hope i was able to help somewhat, as there were some things that could be improved, there was some areas that could be better, But i will get to that, but for the mostpart here was a good entry and i really enjoyed what you posted up for us here today.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A decent flash entry here, some small changes could be made to make it better and more improved, something like that, but here are a few ideas and some advice that might help to inspre and make things somewhat improved and more better, so try them outif you are able too, make it longer more to it more depth also add more story againmore depth aswell, these are things that can make this a better entry.

[Sandile's Who's That? 2]

This was an alright game

Well here we have something interesting a good game if you ask me, i thought it was presented well, and i thought there was some nice elements throughout this whole flash, but anyways lets get really started with the details of this review. Alright this was actually a fun and entertaining game, you only had a few medals though, i think you should have it go every five questions to earn a level, but the 3 medals you have are just alright. but you have a good game here and the music is qwirky even, Maybe as another tip you should add a second or even third song to start after the first and so on, since the songs are so long you could have a variaty of differant songsplaying one after another.so fun game it was a pleasure. And so there is the main of the review, you have an interesting yet entertaining game here, some parts could be cleaned up and or add some small changes but not much.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
OK so as mentioned there could be some small changes and ill post up some small changes that could make it look and act better, just a few tid bits and such. Add more medals as suggested above there just very few and you can balance it out with the mass amount of questions. have more variaty of songs.