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[Another Dress-up v2.1]

Hmm notbad of a game

This was a decent game, i like dress-up games and this was pretty neat i really like how you have two differant dress ups in this one of the face and the other one of the character all a good choices and you had alot of items on the first but not the second, you should think about adding some backrounds or something that the backrounds can change and all, but mostly something other then the "WHITE" bland one, try something new there, Great flash here, i really like what you did here and the Effort does show, there was a few things that could be made better and some extra effort on your part would, theres a few things that would be great for this flash and it would show with some more effort so below are a few ideas that really could push this flash to the extra efforts, good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
First off decent flash you have here, Ok I will start off with saying this is actually pretty decent the flash has good potential, it does need some more work there, below are a few ideas that could make it better but does need your effort on this, So use some of the ideas it will greatly make this better and allow you to have more viewers to your flash aswell. So as a tip or two, you could work on your backrounds more, what you have is ok but having the backrounds more enhanced with some sorta design would be one way, or some image in the backround that is somehow related to your game. But anyways hope to see improvments soon.

[Mad Dress Up]

Decent

Nice dress-up game here especially from an old regular, and i must say this one had some very good "EFFORT" the music was fitting, and its the first dress-up game with a scene selector from the early days so nice efforts there, all the options with guns and dress up props was pretty good, you had a good amount of variaty and nice detail on them aswell, so once again nice job there, Now you went the extra mile to have some "ACTION" stuff going on like a punch and so on, very nice indeed, so as for improving tips and points, I believe you covered everything so its as good as it gets, and nice job on the differant music selection aswell, the whole game was well rounded and had everything you could ask for in a dress up game and even more so nice job and nioce efforts on this fantastic game.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think you had alot of stuff from variaty of items, to scenes and even good music choices, the area that could have used more stuff would have to be, more Action-stuff, meaning more stuff and unique action buttons, you only had the 4.

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[Dress up Sanatana]

Poorly done

Not to be mean or anything but this one does need lots more effort it was poorly done, first of all the "ITEMS" are too small, and should be bigger, and the canvas should be larger aswell so that you can have more items and larger ones, the "MUSIC" was great but could also be the reason why the loading time took abit longer then usual. You could also use much more items that you had there was just too few of items and needs more then what you have, also be creative with your items make more random stuff, more unique ones aswell. as said before the music was great but you should have it "LOOP" or give the use an option to loop it or stop it. Anyways i had fun with this, the best part was the music, the rest needs lost more effort.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Improving on stuff is always a Plus, so here are some decent suggestions on making things better, you should give them a try or atleast a thought. The items were way too smal, you need to make them larger,The screen size was small, you should think about making it somewhat larger, maybe then you can also make more items aswell, a larger screen will allow for more items, and show more quality of those items aswell, give it a try it wont hurt, anyways hope to see improvments soon.Items and accecories are probably the key stuff that really makes up a dress-up game, and seems like your game lacked in alot of them, so i would suggest adding much more items, props and accecories, having some items that were animated somehow would be an extra touch aswell.Backrounds are not a must in these dress-up games, but by putting a lil more effort in them such as, some images and or art graphics, even just some simple scenery would work, but anything would make it better then just a plain palate. As mentioned above, the music was great but you should have it Loop" or give the use an option to loop it or stop it.

[Spirit of the Sea]

A decent game, kinda fun

This was a pretty creative game you have here the "FISH" and "TREES" was suce a great and creative idea and really made it differant and more "UNIQUE" of a game so nice job there i was impressed there, There could be a few added options and features, such as more of some sort of score board, maybe even more "STATS" for more detailed stuff like helth attk dmg etc great stuff like that. and now for the music, its not all the time the music fits games like this but i have to admit you chose the perfect choice of music it flowed perfectly with everything so nice job there, Most of all the graphics were pretty good and the game itself ran pretty smooth so overall a decent game. keep up the fun and most entertaining games.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So this was pretty good of a flash but could use a few more changes, fixes and adjustments to make it even better, and here are just a few ideas that i think would help improve on it greatly, so try them out, a few added options and features, such as more of some sort of score board, maybe even more "STATS" for more detailed stuff like helth attk dmg etc great stuff like that.

[Jumping Fun]

I liked this game

This game has a good concept and has an even better entertainment value, allthough it could use some upgrades and changes wich i ill get too soon enough, The art and graphics on this game were pretty cool, kinda nifty actually, The game does need some extra effort and work, there were some gliching like with the "JUMPING" so you may want to look into that, The music was notbad but also could be better theres alot of selection in the audio portal that could greatly help with this, So with all that said this game is ok but can use some more effort and more work, aswell as a few extras so try some things out fix a few of the gliches and it should be good to go, but anyways good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
There was some glichy effects like with the jumping, something that you could fix and make better, Add some differant choices of music, using the audio portal would be a great start for this,

[Bubble in Trouble]

This was interesting

Well this game was ok but could use more stuff, it was not the best of games played but it does have some interest level, The controls could be worked on better as it was just too hard at times the game itself was also hard so maybe some differant levels of diffaculty would be a good start for making this game abit better. As youplay into the game the interst level kind of gets low so you want to try and make things better with new ideas and such, i would even suggest a mini game of some sort, The game needs more exciting elements, And on graphics you could put more effort more detail, more color and more design to the visuals and graphics, These are just a few ideas that could be improved on and would overall make it better, anywaysgood luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
differant levvels of diffaculty would be a good start for making this game abit better. Adding a mini game here and there might spice things up abit, and give the game more excitment, And last but not least improved visuals and greaphics with more use of color would be a plus.

[James Replay EGP edition]

Fun idea here

Now this was pretty neat especially when youcan frees the character, very nice indeed on that aspect of things, creating the levels are kind of neat aswell so props to you again on those areas and some very nice ideas here, The controlls were abit off, This game was fun and has some good entertaining value aswell as some replay value so that was another plus, The game does need more like some sort of enemy and even some items that could really give the game some depth and even more replay-value, And with the "MUSIC" that was pretty good but you should give more choices not just the one, but all in all i found this game to be fun entertaining, hard on the controls but still fun, keep making these entertaining games, and hope to see more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The controls could use some more figuration more mainstream of what other games use would be better, Some new stuff added like enemies and items, aswell as some more music choices, and abit more detail on the visuals and graphics aswell, So hope these small yet effective ideas help, im pretty sure with more effort they will.

[Dress Up Jesus]

It was Alright

Ok so what i got from this was that it was just alright and that relies mostly in the "ART" and detail of your clothing and props, some stuff seemed alil low quality could have had better shapes and more shades and detail within them, also there was just not enough items, to go around, something you could work on abit, But regardless this was a decent flash here would love to see you add too it but also understand its an older flash aswell, regardless good luck on anything else you have planned, You have an idea here and something decent here, i had fun with this one but it could use some more effort as suggested below and above and hope those ideas help to make it even better for all, but even as it is it was pretty decent if you ask me, keep up the decent efforts though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I like what you have presented here, So here are some ideas and tips that should help on making this better, some stuff seemed a lil low quality could have had better shapes and more shades and detail within them, So this is actually a decent dress-up game, but could use some more Accessories and Items, some more animated ones aswell. Anyways nice work here, look forward to even more in the near future.

[Dress Link Up]

Link is cool

So dressing up link is always cool, first i want to comment on the "MENU" page it is pretty neat and nifty could use more images of link and such though, The thing about this is that you made all the same shapes of clothing and just cloned them and thats ok but people cant be creative enough with the same ol same ol product you need to add more unique and random stuff even some animated and odd stuff. There was alot of great things in this flash, some could be better like some little details here and there, but not much but still some stuff could take a looking into as suggested of course, the flash itself kept me interested and wanting to see more, so hope to see more of your works sometime soon. Untill then keep up the awsome work and efforts.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I thought you had a good game here there was some slight fixes and upgrades you can put in, nothing to take away from your flash, just a few tips to make things better. As mentioned above you need more unique items, more random stuff not just the same old cut outs, Work more on the backrounds, the plain or just white one is ok but would be much better if you had some sorta colored version or maybe have the user chose there own kind, like with the click of a button of some kind. Add some items more items and some that have animated stuff like blinking lights and eyes stuff like that.

[Hedgehog Designer]

Fun and entertaining game

I must admit this was pretty neat and not how i expected, the Module was really good even had a 3d like feel to it, Now with all the buttons you can really create nice versions and there is some variaty, the button way of dress-up is ok but drag and drop seems to be my fave as it just seems easier to design and be creative, now ofcourse these are just some ideas and such, but for the most part of this it was pretty good i thought, And now for some improvment ideas, lets start with even more items then you have, maybe some random and unique props some that even light up or are animated in some way or another, and last but not least but adding some backrounds and not just the same ol ones, anyways nice work here i really had fun with this game.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
everything can allways be improved and or made better, may it be the little things so hope these small yet helpfull ideas help.So as suggested above, lets start with even more items then you have, maybe some random and unique props some that even light up or are animated