XwaynecoltX's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Alien Creator 2]

Cool and unique

Well well you have something interesting here, i really like how you have something unique and interesting very entertaining if you ask me, i was very pleased with the outcome and all, a very nice submission you have. well this was a cool little submission, here i think i reviewed something like it before except it was black and white this one is in color, but the parts and such were ok, could use more stuff more animated stuff aswell, and even go as far as adding a wide selection of differant colors and so on, but other then that this was pretty good if you ask me, and i do look forward to what else you may bring to the table. These types of entries are kind of interesting, and i enjoy when people make these types, allthough you had something pretty good here, you even put in some extra effort wich i liked, so nice effort you have put here today.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Good idea you have had here and there is some slight room for improvment so i will do my best to direct in the right direction of advice and ideas and such, So keep an eye out for some interesting ideas that will improve things. more backrounds and more items, So you have some nice stuff here but does need more,

[tsf Puppy Fetch]

Really fun game

So i found this one to be interesting, you really put some effort into it and it keeps my interest, so that i did not get bored easily wich i can tend to do in some of these flashes, but with this one you did ok, so its a good presentation, nice all around. Now for the stuff you had in here with the puppy and all, it was pretty interesting, there lots to do here and see, wich made it that much more fun and entertaining, so i can see this as having lots of replay value and such, There was actually alot going on wich also made it more enjoyble to see, The gameplay was pretty fun, but in the end i wouldnt mind some more interactivity, it being a game and all, The "GRAPGICS" could use some more detail and more effort aswell. So a good flash well worth the while, some great effort here put fourth, allthough this review is comming to an end i just wanted to say it was a plasure checking this out very amusing, very entertaining, and i was pretty happy with the outcome, so nice job and nice efforts.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So a good flash lots of great stuff, but still could use some extra efforts and details, so below are a few ideas that may help, hope to see them used, it would only help in making your flash much better. So some of the stuff that could be better might be Graphics, The graphics was ok but could be abit better maybe added some more enhanced graphics but not too much, Also more interactivity in the game would be great, and make itmuch more fun, so those are some things i thought could be worked on.

[Wizard character maker]

Decent game

Ok so this was notbad kind of decent, as a fan of these types i do see alot of these types, so while it was ok there was some adjustments that could make this better, You had some good stuff and while they were pretty basic they could have used some detail and more effort on your part, and some more animated items wouldnt hurt either, just an idea or two that could make this much improved, and something to think about when working on your next one, so with that said goodluck on anything else you have planned. So while this was pretty good it could use a few extras It had everything that made it a great flash nice art, nice detail and nice graphics, so all and all this was actually a pretty good flash. So as any suggestions i posted try them and see how it goes, but for the overall of this it was pretty good stuff. and cant wait to see what else you are capble of, but untill the next flash in works good luck, hope to see more soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ideas, tips and better improvments are always needed so as Gone through the flash here are some helpful ideas, that can make things better, good luck, So as explained before, this could use more items more choices, even throw in some odd and random stuff, you want to make this differant from other dress-ups so having some items animated would also help in that.

[NG Dress Up #2]

Another good game

So you have another good game, I really like the "MENU-PAGE" and with all the characters, theres alot of times people just dont put that much effort so nice effort there thats a plus, But anyways nice effort there, So there waslots of characters too dress-up, but the items were limeted, and the view screen was somewhat small maybe you need to make a larger view screen, and more items on each character would also help, more detail would show up with a larger view screen aswell, but it was still fun game and entertaining, i liked it, And soonce again this was a decent Flash i really liked what you presented, now ofcourse there was some improvments that could make it much better i suggested some ideas below, but for what it is you presented a good flash with an entertaining and replay value, so with that said keep up the good work it was a pretty decent work of flash, and i hope to see more of your works in the near future so untill then good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You have a neat game here, It could be even better though because it was decent but withs ome fixes and and more additions, it would be even much better so here are some of my ideas that i thought might help and improve on an already decent game idea. Dress up games are pretty cool, but this could use some backrounds of some sorts something that changes up, but more backrounds for sure. A good game here and had some interesting items, and pieces, but also seems like they were pretty basic, so why not add more items for better creation, but not just that but add items that you normally dont see, give them abit more detail, and last but not least have some items with some sort of animation. I look forward to seeing more from you though.

[Skater- make a skater DEM]

Nice idea here

So first i will start off with the intro its pretty good was not too much but it was nice to see an intro before the actaul flash starts up, there was not much but still a decent intro made it even more enjoyble, so nice effort there. So the idea of making a skateboarder is somewhat creative, the "SIZE" was abit much though kind of large even for a dress up game, but it is what it is. It did take abit to load up, but for the mostpart i enjoyed it, The button style of items is ok but maybe use the drag and drop style for better creativity, So while i liked this flash there are some good and bad about it, i went over it abit but have suggested some more ideas below hope it helps, its not major but could use more of the effort on little stuff here and there, anyways hope it helps as this was actually a pretty good flash. But anyways not to bore you any longer with this review i will end it here, but good luck on any new projects you have in the works.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
There are some improvments that could be made, here are a few suggestions, some effort on your side will only make this even better. So give these options a try. So the Only thing i Really had issues with was the large megabite file, I only worry that it may limit some users from enjoying your work, just something to think about when making big file flashworks. Maybe you can cut it down somehow. even making this into two parts might work, but compressing stuff like music, removing jpegs, and less quality on detailed artwork might even help, also removing symbols from the flash lybrary that are no longer in use is another option to go about. So this style of just click a button and the item or clothing just pops onto the character is ok, but the drag and drop style is much better and allows for more creativity by the user and allows them to build it up how they want with wacky and creative creations, so the button style is ok but the drag and drop just seems more overall better.

[DodgeTheFist]

Decent

This was decent, i think from what i saw, the "GRAPHICS" were the best part of this whole flash so you do have that going for you, You should think about adding music and sound/fx that would really improve on things. This game seems fun but also just too "HARD" and difficult so you should also think about making the game easier for newcomers and such, just a thought so that its more fun for all, There are alot of things that could probably make this game better, i like the crazy man but he needs some downtime in order to give the player some sort of better chance at getting him or something, but other then that this was an ok game but does need more effort and more stuff to mess with, anyways good luck on your next project. But my advice to making this game better, is make it easier, make it more fun, and have more stuff in there to keep the player interested, anyways nice work. Andi really look forward to see what you come up with next.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You should think about adding music and sound/fx that would really improve on things. Make the game easier for everyone to enjoy.

[Bieber Metamorph]

Strange yet fun game.

Well, what you see is what you get - just a nice piece designed with some good effort to bring out some quality, and you have done just that. You have already impressed me with this one and hope it continues your success here on newgrounds.
So this was an interesting game,i see that you have even won an "AWARD" for it well thats another A+ in my book so congrats, i was happy that the size was not too large for my computer to handle either so nice job there, anyways onto your game, oh by the way glad to see lots of medals its always a fun experience the more the medals there are, I can see why you won an award, the "GRAPHICS" alone was superb and the sound was notbad either so gppd job and props to you on a decent and good quality of a game here. Allright so the game was slightly "DISTURBING" with touching and in van stuff but kinda funny i guess and its just a game i suppose, the game play is fun and interesting, Well, is there anything else that needs be said about a Flash like this? I feel that a little more should be said, because the content is not perfect. It is very moving, but is not where it needs to be to garner the full five stars from me,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So with this one i thought some things were slightly overused, but that didnt really hurt it, Maybe you can experiment here and there with things, There is still Plenty of room for some improvment. I think i have only noticed one little issue with the game and that was that bieber can tend to get stuck up behind the van and such sometimes, something to look into.

[Binary]

Kinda hard with this one.

Wow, I love this, the way that you've put in such a lot of effort, to get this far, with some frankly brilliant entry, So you have done the time and effort, and thats what drew my attention, so keep doing what you do, and ill keep interested in all your works. This game was interesting, i am glad that you won an award for this game so "CONGRATS" on that, The few medals was not too appealing so maybe adding some extra medals would benice, So the "INTERFACE" on this was kind of nifty, and the controls were explained very well, So this game was hard right at first, i think you should have some sort of "HINT" option or guid option incase you get stuck. I think that the idea in here, really isn't my kettle of fish, but i still found some entertaining value in and through-out the flash. and by the end i was enjoying your idea, so while it took awhile i adapted to your ideas and style.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I like this one, you could still have this Transformed into something more, and something more positive, allthough you did a pretty good job as it is, There are Numerous things that you could do to add some extra concept ideas, So one thing that i think could make this better would be to have more medals, it would increase the fun raing and keep it going for more replay value so add medals as it was kind of lacking in some. So as i suggested above you should have some sort of Hint option or guid option incase you get stuck.