XwaynecoltX's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[chained smiley]

Fun game

A fun flash you have here theres was lots of great visuals and some nice detail with some pretty good effort on your side of things, I was taken back with this submission, as it was pretty good. Im not too good at these game types but this was still pretty good i thought, and it was differant from some of those simular type of games that i have played. Alright this was notbad i went as far as day 230 and beyond but it was fun, Now there was possibly one thing that you could do like making a play button at the end game screen so that you dont have to go to menu page to click play you can have the play button so people can still just keep playing without going to menu page. So as i do see some simularities from this entry and others from the portal, but i found some interesting details and you really show that you like quality, as this one is full of quality aswell as detail.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So this is not my specialty, but i think there could be a few fixes and some possible cleaned up areas here and there, here is what i came up with, and you should really try some of these out for a better product. So as mentioned adding a play button would be a plus for people who just want to keep gaining money.

[DN8]

Fun shooter

You have Processed alot into this game and shows the work you have done with the visuals, and bringsout a sense of entertaining value that i like to see in these types of games, And even some unnecessarily moments but ultimately it was still a fun flash entery and had lots of positive points that i came to enjoy, so keep up with that. Fun shooter game here, the graphics were notbad i like the different backrounds and some reall trippy ones that made for a fun game here, some levels were kind of hard but it was still pretty fun. The biggest or even the smallest projects are not the best ones, but i do like the little things you have done here, Its the little things like this one, that makes a game fun and entertaining, Hope to see more stuff like this from you soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You have engineered a good game here there are still some more ways to clean it up, i think i may have a few ideas that could make this into an even more engineered concept full of even more ideas and such

[Don't Look Back- ARGOMS]

Interesting game

I must say this was a pretty fantastic Game, for the mostpart it was a highly entertaining game, it kept my interest, and has some nice visuals and graphics that really came together, I like this because it had alot of good points some things could be worked on better, So great start to a decent flash game. and hope I hope there is more to come like this one. So that was an interesting gamethe pixle style was pretty interesting and gave off a fun time with it, themedals not all that easy somewhat hard but was fun regardless. You can never have too much input on these kinds of games, i do think some things can be cleaned up, but mostlythis was pretty good, so keep up the stuff you do. because its pretty good sofar, so keep it up, and keep making these interesting things.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And so here we are in the improvment section of the review to me always the hardest part of the review as i dont want to pick apart the review but try and help, This Game entry does have some decent Potential, so here is where i may Recommend Some ideas and tips for better imrpvment, with some positive points, and basic ideas, hope you use them in this or future games.

[Bagging Mastar 2k]

Very cute

So i unnecessarily clicked on this entry not really knowing what it was but then i found out that it was pretty awsome, It was a Swanky element that you added into this one, It even had a Divine feel, This was a very Acceptable flash and i enjoyed it very much, Alright so that was a cute game, cant believe i played it all the way through, dont get me wrong now, it was interesting and fun to start off with but tends to get boring after abit, so maybe you can do some extra stuff like having some sort of mini bonus game or something while he is bagging and such, also not sure if its a "GLICH" but it seemed like you didnt even have to click arrows as he would bag stuff himself, almost too easy if you ask me, a nice option for the long road to 100 levels, anyways maybe add some other medalsto make it more exciting aswell. This one seemed to be very odd yet an interesting start to a unique submission, the content was full of little tid bits here and there and i really liked what you had here. its differant but still has something special about it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
ou can Accomplish alot more with this one, its actually pretty good, As i Reflect everything from your entry there are a few things you could possibly change and or add just little things, Familarize yourself with some new ideas and maybe even some older ones do some extra stuff like having some sort of mini bonus game or something while he is bagging and such, adding some extra medals would be interesting aswell.

[Awaken: Front Line]

Interesting and unque game

My Initial thoughts were not great but then thought this had some more Positive then the Negitive, It actually Contains alot of interesting ideas surrounding it and such, and by the end it was more on a Spectacular Alright this was a very unique and interesting game it had some unique elements and reminded me of those real time strategy games and you have put that here on a flash version so that was something nice and neat and i thought it was a well rounded and detailed game, how this can be better maybe to flatten the land much easier would be one way as it was going in theother direction at times anyways nice job Overall, This was decent piece, and a good start in some nifty ideas, looking forward to see what all you do in the future! but as for this one i have found it to be somewhat amusing, entertaining and even intrging.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So i found this piece to be somewhat outstanding it has its elemenst and its concept seems to really work wich i liked, so nice job there, ultimately this could be somewhat better, I will elaborate on that in just a bit, a more smoother flattening land option would be a nice touch.

[Mission in Space]

I like this game

I really like these types of flash games as they tend to take some time, I thought you showed some good effort and the outcome seems to show off that time and energy put in so props to you there, nice job indeed, There are some areas of improvment and it would really make this an all around flash entry so something to think about there. Ok so now on to the details of the review hehe, The "GRAPHICS" seemed to flow well with everything else, and looked pretty awsome, I guess this was like a turn based game, wich made it more fun for me, and that gave off a really good experience on things with this game and all, The enemythings like the aliens seems to be too strong, maybe thats an area you can work on abit, You really hit it right on with the "MUSIC" as it was perfect flow material for the content of the game, So a fun game indeed, kind of confusing at first but soon after a bit you get it, so nice game here i was pleased with it.Now with all that said i dont wish to bore you any longer, and want to close off this review before i get to improvments, but like i said before this is a decent entry there are probably some areas you could have done better, but overall its a decent flash fun and somewhat entertaining, and overall i had a good experience with this all, so nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And now we really come to the end of the review with the improvments sections, So not to nit pick but to try and suggest a few ideas here and there that could generally give you some ideas to make a better outcome, and who knows maybe you will see something you didnt before, so here are some tips and ideas and a few suggestions on improvments, give it a go. Make the aliens not so strong in killing you, So atfirst this game was kind of confused maybe a more "SIMPLE" direction in what needs to be done and goals and suchjust an idea though.

[BearBound]

cute game

As i have been reviewing for years I have seen alot of this and alot of that, but its nice to see the quality improve, your entry shows the effort and quality of what talking about or in this case writing about. Congrats on the award first of all, those are always nice as it shows that people appreciate your work so that was a nice gesture, The game had a small issue like when you found a spot that it went to a menu acheivment screen and when you click on menu screen button it didnt do aything something to check out, its a fun game kind of cute but needs more medals, needs more content and such,The game was pretty easy and the medals were pretty easy maybe add some harder medals to acheive. Creativity will make worlds come alive, So keep creating with no Limits. and as far as im concerned you have created a vast world of creativity already,
now just keep it going with other awsome stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Other than that I felt like the game was fun for a bit, there are some things that could make it better, so i have made a few ideas and basic stuff that i saw that could be improved on and such so give it a thought or two. I would really like to see you improve more on this, i think one way of doing thatis going with more Medals, the ones you do have on this flash are ok but could use more, for a more fun experience. Also look into fixing the button to go back to menue screen from acheivments page seemed glichy, Adding some harder medals to acheive would be a pls for this fun game. And adding A skip button on the intro cut scene would also be another nice addition.

[the Clobinater Dressup v2]

Kind of dull

This is a some-what Interesting game, I thought it would be something totally differant but boy was i wrong, I thought this was a pretty good Flash game in its own right. And you gave it just the right groovy feel, so nice job there. I found this one to be kind of dull, not that it was a bad thing just that there was not much to this including "ITEMS" So items are a much needed plus for this and any game like it so thats something to think about, There was not much backrounds, but you did have a few, the whole color sheme was ok but maybe abit too soft, and last the "BODY" it was the dull part that could have used more options with more shape options more curve and more formation options. Now that i think about it, this was pretty nicely done from start all the way to the finish, It is a fairly differant and interesting flash you have here. What's the most interesting is how you're able to have so many complicated and appealing parts in it wich i think is why i really liked it as much as i did.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So There are a few Things to take a second look at, And I will get to those, You have a decent entry, But i would like to take this time to Throw a few ideas at you, maybe some advice and so on, and I hope you use it to the best of your knowledge. Untill good luck. Add more Pieces and Accessories, especially adding some detailed ones with shading and some blinking and animated pieces. The body needed more formations and curves and so on.

[Megaman x - Armors]

Lots to chose from

I thought this was an alright game submission that you have here, I have always been a fan of these types of submission entries, In fact this was alot better then i had expected, but was pleased with what you had here,a good game for some good fun entertainment. Good game you have here, there was actually alot to chose from as in items and props, i dont think i saw a single animated one though thats probably something you may want to add at a later date and such. the other thing i have noticed about this are that the "BUTTONS" are too small here, you can click them but still too small so some larger maybe more fancy buttons would sufice, Things seemed too "PACKED-IN" on items so maybe you can make the view screen larger somehow and the items wont seem so packed in, anyways good game here. I am surprised this doesn't have a much better score! I have really come to enjoy this! You just get so wrapped up in this flash it is hard to keep track of everything else, The neatest part about this is probably how there is alot of possitive elements through-out the entire flash. so nice entry you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Alright All in all, you have a quite nifty, but under the surface, there's a lot of room for improvement. You just have to take the time and effort and put more into this game, And maybe you will use a few of the ideas that i have posted up here. Just give it a thought. One thing i have found that lacks in alot of these types of games is the lack of items, and props, Such is the case with your game, so adding more stuff will only make the game better and give it a more full finish to it. buttons are too small they could be a tad larger viewscreen is needed, everything looks packed in so a larger view screen would be nice.