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[RIKKU DRESSUP 3]

its alright

Here's a great entry that works well because there is so much to it. The graphics aren't that impressive, but it really is a fun and somewhat entertaining in itself. I think it might be because you didn't try to make it too fancy or anything, just portray it as how it's supposed to be. Another dress-up game allthough i admit this one was ok it was kind of interesting, i like the fact that you had some backrounds and alot of assorted items, one thing that bothered me here was that the "BUTTONS" were kind of small like the backround buttons, There was some "SLOPPY" effort like how the items were placed, you should have the items and clothing sectioned off, but other then that this was an alright dress-up game. so It seems like you really went out of your way to make some of this more complicated then it was, yet it was also pretty simple, wich is one reason why i have come to enjoy this as i know others will also enjoy this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Buttons can be larger so you can click and view them closer and better, the items can be larger aswell some of them seemed too small, So I will start off here with suggesting some sorta more random items, some animated ones, and stuff you might not normally see, maybe its funny, or even bazzar but something differant, and on another note you also want to add a bunch of items not just a few.

[Pumpkin Dress-Up 2005]

Has potential

Now This had its good and bad parts. But for a game it was alright, For the most part, the good outweighed the bad, so it was an game I would recommend. It was a simple game but still entertaining and somewhat impressive. This one has lots of potential but you did not push the limits or the creative skills forward, and with a pumnkin you could have done so much with this one, the backround changer was a nice effect but you only had three backrounds, you should have had more then just 3, atleast 5 or six would sufice. The "GRAPHICS" was so-so could be better with some more shading and small details to give it a more detailed look, maybe even some dark elements to give it the feel of halloween and such. I like that this Submission was easy to understand,and yet very interesting, not to mention entertaining, Everything worked out great, and had a nice look and overall design. I also Think some things could be possibly better, but i will get more into that a bit later.but its nothing more then a few small details.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This was actually not bad, but could use a few things, to spice it up somewhat, so below i have suggested some good things and advice some new ideas and even some old ideas. at least think about them. The backround changer was decent but needed more backrounds then the three you have, needs more detail maybe some shade work for more detail all around, alsomore of a dark feel aswell.

[[LL] - Dress Up Wine.]

Something differant

This was someting differant for sure, and you gave it some appeal, and i was pretty entertained with what you do have here, still could use some fixes and clean ups here and there, but for the most part of it its pretty amusing and entertaining as said. Hmmm ok so this was a differant idea of a dress-up game never would have expected to dress up wine, but you had it more like dressing up a "CHARACTER" and not really the wine, maybe to improve on your idea you could keep the idea of dressing up the wine bottle, but go more with that with fancy labels, and logos maybe some corks some shampain glasses, and so on, but anyways not to lose track you do have a good idea here nice concept but the character part should probably be removed, more props and items are needed though. The hardest part of reviewing stuff is that it has to come to an end and since i really enjoyed this piece, i will have to end it soon, but before i do i just wanted to say you have the effort you have the skill and you have the idea, but wouldnt mind seeing more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Theres always something new and differant with new ideas, i think some new ideas could be tossed around, and while i may not have the best i have suggested something that may help so i do hope you use some of my advuice and ideas, or just a few of the tips, The thing about these types of games is that you have to allow for creativity so with the more random and differant types of items the better especially whena dding unique random and even some animated items aswell, this allows for more of that creative style builds. maybe to improve on your idea you could keep the idea of dressing up the wine bottle, but go more with that with fancy labels, and logos maybe some corks some shampain glasses, and so on

Madanimation responds:

Thanks for the write up, but I literally don't care enough to improve on anything these days.
I'd forgotten I even made this thing.

[Angel Of Love]

Decent dress-up game here

I am very entertained with your submission, you bring some new and old stuff but in a way it all seems to work out, I was excited to see some things that were nifty and what not and those are the types of things that make tings kinda differant but that seems to work aswell. The music was realnice and set a good tone for a decent game, the graphics were notbad, you shoiwed some nice detail and nice effort all around so nice efforts there, The "NAVIGATION" was something to be desired, but the game was actually fun and i got a good kick out of it all, the music was really something that kept it goping as everythng else could have used more items even some backrounds, but other then that it was an alright game. And so i have come close to the conclusion here on this submission, I have liked what you made here today, you have some interesting and entertaining ideas that went on here and i was generally pleased with the outcome. of things.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And here we have another decent game something that could ofcourse be improved on with some small changes and some possible clean up here and there, so this is something you can push in the next submission or upgrade on this one. A backround changer would be nice for the backrounds adding more items would be a plus, You have a good game here but in the end there was just too few items and needed more stuff and even effects.

[Abbie's Perfect Wedding]

Decent I really love these types of game submissions, while thy dont get the recognition they deserve, but they are interesing and unique in there own way and do deserve some extra points, now thats ofcourse if you put in the effort, but as for this one, Dress ups are always fun and its nice to see some different styles and i have seen my share of some differant styles, and this one is kind of new so thats cool and different i thought, the "BUTTONS" were too tricky, maybe it was because it was so close together and it was just odd on how they worked, Everything seemed "CLUTTERED" everything was just too close together, so maybe spreading stuff around, maybe a larger "CANVUS" is needed, anyways decent game here. So as explained there were some points that could be better, but i will get to thatsometime later in the review, for the mostpart this was still an alright entry, now ofcourse it could use some extra stuff and a tad more effort, but that will come in time,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You can never stop improving on things, as some submissions can be greatly improved with all sorts of changes and fixes, so i do hope you clean up a few things and add some changes as i have suggested here are some possible changes that will make it somewhat better, buttons need some reworking they seemed tricky and hard to play, it seems maybe because they are too close togethet and you never know whats being added and clicked. I think this type of game could use alarger canvus or screensize the one you did have was not that big, but with a larger one you can add more stuff, and you can add more stuff with more detail and quality, so thats something to think about when making these types and styles of games. Everything seemed cluttererd so maybe by adding a larger canvus as mentioned will help.

[A Dragon Story 1]

Wow awsome game

I really like these types and you can do alot with them, but some effort would really push these forward and make them even better then what that are, so some more effort wouldnt hurt at all, but you do have something interesting here, wow this was a pretty awsome dress up game, at first it was kind of "CONFUSING" because all the color button options were so small, so maybe making everything on a much larger scale would be a better route, but you do have an amazing game here, with all the nice detail, the impressive animation of the dragon and it was just one hell of a dress up game more impressive then most so good job there i was reallyimpressed with this. just make the color buttons larger. And while i dont like to end these too short it does come to an end at some point, but before i do, i will say and comment that this was an interesting and intriging idea, i do however think you can do more with it, maybe later you can touch up on that,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Here is where i would like to suggest some ideas that could help to improve on a few things and some things that i noticed that could use some small improvment, and if implemented it would be a big plus to your ideas, so give some of these ideas a chance, Make the color buttons larger they were kind of small, make everything on a larger scale if possible

[A Decadent Proposal icovr]

An interesting one here

I really like thse trpes of game entry types, there are interesting and fun to play around with,In some ways they could be better with some extras here and there, but i did enjoy what you presented here and do look for more of your work soon, Here was an interesting dress-up there was not alot to chose from, as it was only 3-5 outfits at the most and that was just the outfits you could change there was not hair or lips mouth and so on choices wich limited its options, Some other options could really be put into this to give more creativity, it was a good game nice visual but lacked in items and props and other options, but i did get somefun out of this, hope any ideas may help to improve on this as it does have some potential. and there you have it another decent entry to the portal, this one may not have been the best or even the perfectest but it had some interesting points, and while somethings can be better it was alright i enjoyed most of what you had to present here,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Improvments where do i start on this, its interesting, but again could use some small changes and adjustments, i have prepared a few ideas and tips to improve and if you dont use them thats your choice but if you do then its a plus on your side of things and will make this flash entry possibly alot better, so give a few ideas a chance for improvment. Well with alot of dress up games that lack items could use more variaty, more creative stuff that allows the creator to make and develop better creations so add more items, add more animated items and more random and unique stuff all around. I would like to mention that thiswas an alright game but you should add some changing backrounds, maybe at the click of a button then the user can click on a new backround for there creation, just an idea though. This was an alright game just needs a few extra adjustments.