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[Angel Of Love]

Decent dress-up game here

I am very entertained with your submission, you bring some new and old stuff but in a way it all seems to work out, I was excited to see some things that were nifty and what not and those are the types of things that make tings kinda differant but that seems to work aswell. The music was realnice and set a good tone for a decent game, the graphics were notbad, you shoiwed some nice detail and nice effort all around so nice efforts there, The "NAVIGATION" was something to be desired, but the game was actually fun and i got a good kick out of it all, the music was really something that kept it goping as everythng else could have used more items even some backrounds, but other then that it was an alright game. And so i have come close to the conclusion here on this submission, I have liked what you made here today, you have some interesting and entertaining ideas that went on here and i was generally pleased with the outcome. of things.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And here we have another decent game something that could ofcourse be improved on with some small changes and some possible clean up here and there, so this is something you can push in the next submission or upgrade on this one. A backround changer would be nice for the backrounds adding more items would be a plus, You have a good game here but in the end there was just too few items and needed more stuff and even effects.

[Abbie's Perfect Wedding]

Decent I really love these types of game submissions, while thy dont get the recognition they deserve, but they are interesing and unique in there own way and do deserve some extra points, now thats ofcourse if you put in the effort, but as for this one, Dress ups are always fun and its nice to see some different styles and i have seen my share of some differant styles, and this one is kind of new so thats cool and different i thought, the "BUTTONS" were too tricky, maybe it was because it was so close together and it was just odd on how they worked, Everything seemed "CLUTTERED" everything was just too close together, so maybe spreading stuff around, maybe a larger "CANVUS" is needed, anyways decent game here. So as explained there were some points that could be better, but i will get to thatsometime later in the review, for the mostpart this was still an alright entry, now ofcourse it could use some extra stuff and a tad more effort, but that will come in time,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You can never stop improving on things, as some submissions can be greatly improved with all sorts of changes and fixes, so i do hope you clean up a few things and add some changes as i have suggested here are some possible changes that will make it somewhat better, buttons need some reworking they seemed tricky and hard to play, it seems maybe because they are too close togethet and you never know whats being added and clicked. I think this type of game could use alarger canvus or screensize the one you did have was not that big, but with a larger one you can add more stuff, and you can add more stuff with more detail and quality, so thats something to think about when making these types and styles of games. Everything seemed cluttererd so maybe by adding a larger canvus as mentioned will help.

[A Dragon Story 1]

Wow awsome game

I really like these types and you can do alot with them, but some effort would really push these forward and make them even better then what that are, so some more effort wouldnt hurt at all, but you do have something interesting here, wow this was a pretty awsome dress up game, at first it was kind of "CONFUSING" because all the color button options were so small, so maybe making everything on a much larger scale would be a better route, but you do have an amazing game here, with all the nice detail, the impressive animation of the dragon and it was just one hell of a dress up game more impressive then most so good job there i was reallyimpressed with this. just make the color buttons larger. And while i dont like to end these too short it does come to an end at some point, but before i do, i will say and comment that this was an interesting and intriging idea, i do however think you can do more with it, maybe later you can touch up on that,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Here is where i would like to suggest some ideas that could help to improve on a few things and some things that i noticed that could use some small improvment, and if implemented it would be a big plus to your ideas, so give some of these ideas a chance, Make the color buttons larger they were kind of small, make everything on a larger scale if possible

[A Decadent Proposal icovr]

An interesting one here

I really like thse trpes of game entry types, there are interesting and fun to play around with,In some ways they could be better with some extras here and there, but i did enjoy what you presented here and do look for more of your work soon, Here was an interesting dress-up there was not alot to chose from, as it was only 3-5 outfits at the most and that was just the outfits you could change there was not hair or lips mouth and so on choices wich limited its options, Some other options could really be put into this to give more creativity, it was a good game nice visual but lacked in items and props and other options, but i did get somefun out of this, hope any ideas may help to improve on this as it does have some potential. and there you have it another decent entry to the portal, this one may not have been the best or even the perfectest but it had some interesting points, and while somethings can be better it was alright i enjoyed most of what you had to present here,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Improvments where do i start on this, its interesting, but again could use some small changes and adjustments, i have prepared a few ideas and tips to improve and if you dont use them thats your choice but if you do then its a plus on your side of things and will make this flash entry possibly alot better, so give a few ideas a chance for improvment. Well with alot of dress up games that lack items could use more variaty, more creative stuff that allows the creator to make and develop better creations so add more items, add more animated items and more random and unique stuff all around. I would like to mention that thiswas an alright game but you should add some changing backrounds, maybe at the click of a button then the user can click on a new backround for there creation, just an idea though. This was an alright game just needs a few extra adjustments.

[Alien Creator 2]

Cool and unique

Well well you have something interesting here, i really like how you have something unique and interesting very entertaining if you ask me, i was very pleased with the outcome and all, a very nice submission you have. well this was a cool little submission, here i think i reviewed something like it before except it was black and white this one is in color, but the parts and such were ok, could use more stuff more animated stuff aswell, and even go as far as adding a wide selection of differant colors and so on, but other then that this was pretty good if you ask me, and i do look forward to what else you may bring to the table. These types of entries are kind of interesting, and i enjoy when people make these types, allthough you had something pretty good here, you even put in some extra effort wich i liked, so nice effort you have put here today.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Good idea you have had here and there is some slight room for improvment so i will do my best to direct in the right direction of advice and ideas and such, So keep an eye out for some interesting ideas that will improve things. more backrounds and more items, So you have some nice stuff here but does need more,

[tsf Puppy Fetch]

Really fun game

So i found this one to be interesting, you really put some effort into it and it keeps my interest, so that i did not get bored easily wich i can tend to do in some of these flashes, but with this one you did ok, so its a good presentation, nice all around. Now for the stuff you had in here with the puppy and all, it was pretty interesting, there lots to do here and see, wich made it that much more fun and entertaining, so i can see this as having lots of replay value and such, There was actually alot going on wich also made it more enjoyble to see, The gameplay was pretty fun, but in the end i wouldnt mind some more interactivity, it being a game and all, The "GRAPGICS" could use some more detail and more effort aswell. So a good flash well worth the while, some great effort here put fourth, allthough this review is comming to an end i just wanted to say it was a plasure checking this out very amusing, very entertaining, and i was pretty happy with the outcome, so nice job and nice efforts.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So a good flash lots of great stuff, but still could use some extra efforts and details, so below are a few ideas that may help, hope to see them used, it would only help in making your flash much better. So some of the stuff that could be better might be Graphics, The graphics was ok but could be abit better maybe added some more enhanced graphics but not too much, Also more interactivity in the game would be great, and make itmuch more fun, so those are some things i thought could be worked on.

[Wizard character maker]

Decent game

Ok so this was notbad kind of decent, as a fan of these types i do see alot of these types, so while it was ok there was some adjustments that could make this better, You had some good stuff and while they were pretty basic they could have used some detail and more effort on your part, and some more animated items wouldnt hurt either, just an idea or two that could make this much improved, and something to think about when working on your next one, so with that said goodluck on anything else you have planned. So while this was pretty good it could use a few extras It had everything that made it a great flash nice art, nice detail and nice graphics, so all and all this was actually a pretty good flash. So as any suggestions i posted try them and see how it goes, but for the overall of this it was pretty good stuff. and cant wait to see what else you are capble of, but untill the next flash in works good luck, hope to see more soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ideas, tips and better improvments are always needed so as Gone through the flash here are some helpful ideas, that can make things better, good luck, So as explained before, this could use more items more choices, even throw in some odd and random stuff, you want to make this differant from other dress-ups so having some items animated would also help in that.

[NG Dress Up #2]

Another good game

So you have another good game, I really like the "MENU-PAGE" and with all the characters, theres alot of times people just dont put that much effort so nice effort there thats a plus, But anyways nice effort there, So there waslots of characters too dress-up, but the items were limeted, and the view screen was somewhat small maybe you need to make a larger view screen, and more items on each character would also help, more detail would show up with a larger view screen aswell, but it was still fun game and entertaining, i liked it, And soonce again this was a decent Flash i really liked what you presented, now ofcourse there was some improvments that could make it much better i suggested some ideas below, but for what it is you presented a good flash with an entertaining and replay value, so with that said keep up the good work it was a pretty decent work of flash, and i hope to see more of your works in the near future so untill then good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You have a neat game here, It could be even better though because it was decent but withs ome fixes and and more additions, it would be even much better so here are some of my ideas that i thought might help and improve on an already decent game idea. Dress up games are pretty cool, but this could use some backrounds of some sorts something that changes up, but more backrounds for sure. A good game here and had some interesting items, and pieces, but also seems like they were pretty basic, so why not add more items for better creation, but not just that but add items that you normally dont see, give them abit more detail, and last but not least have some items with some sort of animation. I look forward to seeing more from you though.

[Skater- make a skater DEM]

Nice idea here

So first i will start off with the intro its pretty good was not too much but it was nice to see an intro before the actaul flash starts up, there was not much but still a decent intro made it even more enjoyble, so nice effort there. So the idea of making a skateboarder is somewhat creative, the "SIZE" was abit much though kind of large even for a dress up game, but it is what it is. It did take abit to load up, but for the mostpart i enjoyed it, The button style of items is ok but maybe use the drag and drop style for better creativity, So while i liked this flash there are some good and bad about it, i went over it abit but have suggested some more ideas below hope it helps, its not major but could use more of the effort on little stuff here and there, anyways hope it helps as this was actually a pretty good flash. But anyways not to bore you any longer with this review i will end it here, but good luck on any new projects you have in the works.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
There are some improvments that could be made, here are a few suggestions, some effort on your side will only make this even better. So give these options a try. So the Only thing i Really had issues with was the large megabite file, I only worry that it may limit some users from enjoying your work, just something to think about when making big file flashworks. Maybe you can cut it down somehow. even making this into two parts might work, but compressing stuff like music, removing jpegs, and less quality on detailed artwork might even help, also removing symbols from the flash lybrary that are no longer in use is another option to go about. So this style of just click a button and the item or clothing just pops onto the character is ok, but the drag and drop style is much better and allows for more creativity by the user and allows them to build it up how they want with wacky and creative creations, so the button style is ok but the drag and drop just seems more overall better.