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[After Bath Coloring]

Something differant

You have Established a good game entry here, it was nifty, it had a few suprises and was overall a fun and entertaining element of flash work, I Realized all this as soon as i started in on this game submission, there was some decent quality about it all, and it brought in some nice and nifty features, Now later ill discuss maybe some ways to even improve on it. OK now as i get more into the game and this review, i must say that you have really done somethng differant here, im not so sure this is a dress-up but more of like a page out of a coloring book wich is A-OK its differant and unique, the colors are nice the design is welldone, and overall this is a fun idea like a coloring book, i thought everything was fine except i found one issue and thats the the brush speed should be faster and smoother seems hard to drag, maybe thats something to look into, anyways nice idea of a game here. Now you for sure have the right Attitude when you were making this aswell as some good direction and so on, Thanks for putting the effort into this, allthough it could still be spiced up a little, it was still a pretty good flash you have here, and i look forward to any other entertaining flash you have planned for us, anyways good luck. Decent flash here, hope to see even better stuff and improvments soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And so here we have it, A Clever little flash submission, Good idea here good concept and it grew on me, We come to that area to improve on things, and while it was a fun and amusing game and doesnt seem like it needs much change but it could use a few things, to be honest this was pretty good, so if i do find any lacking points, I will post them here next. So only really one major issue. the brush speed should be faster and smoother seems hard to drag, too slow so speed it up somewhat, and make it feel more like a brush, more smoothlike.

[AdVaNcE DrEeSs Up]

So this one is interesting

And once again i find myself with another decent and even at times outstanding submission here, its a pretty decent game you have created here, and shows in the outcome of it all, There was some high and low points thruout the submission some areas that can be fixed and ultimately cleaned up on certain areas, but I found this to be pretty nifty of a flash works. But anyways notbad of a dress up game and or start to one, the character screen seemed slightly small, even putting hair on his head, was being cut off so that tells me that you need to add a much larger design area and or canvus, The props and clothing were ok but maybe you should not use such "THICK" lines of a brush tool, a thinner line will show more detail Also you should add more random and more unique items, even adding some animated ones would spice things upon this one. and its something to try, But anyways a good effort here could use a few adjustments for improvment. And Here once again I find one of those unique and interesting with a nifty touch good flash's so glad i saw this it was pretty good and had some entertaining value to it, nice effort here. I look forward to seeing other stuff like this, hope everyone enjoyes this, you have a good game here some slight fixes can make it even better though. So keep up the fine work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ideas, Ideas. and even more ideas thats what its more or less about, Here are some Tips and ideas to better improve on this delightfull game, Sometimes it just takes one or two ideas to really get the game going and even on a more popular note so considar some of these ideas. as they are in place to help and make things better, so try them out or some atleast. So with this one a bigger canvus and some backrounds would work and some more random items would help also. Dont use a thick brush tool for the outline of the props and even character it tends to look sloppy, and you show more detail with a thinnner one

[Lady K's Dress Up Game]

Decent

What struck me as really cool In this game was how you were able to have so many cool looking things going on. It doesn't take much to know that this is well done. and you have done just that, make a great game, I am glad I checked this game submission out. Hmm so this was an alright dress-up game, the "BUTTONS" were ok but seemed kind of small so you may want to make more larger and flashier buttons, Some backround changer would also be nice, you have a good amount of items with this but the onlything is that with the button style it kind of limits in creativity, and the music on this could have been louder it was too low, but other then that it was alright. What is amazing is how there are so many differant elements in this game, but it isn't very complicated. infact its a good game, I will say that I am impressed with this game submission, You just never knew what was going to come up next in this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Alright While there could have been some slightly better effort in improvments just a tad on some stuff here and there, It's still a pretty good game submission for what it is. just a few things to work on that i could possibly suggest some ideas below. so take a look into them. needs flashier and larger buttons, needs some backrounds, Music could be louder and have more choices, add drag and drop style

[Luigi Dress Up]

Kind of basic

This is great! I probably only like it because I'm such a huge fan of these types. of games When you combine all the stuff Thats in here you get good results and you have done just that, So props to you on this game, I had a smile on my face the whole time. throughout this flash. So for a dress-up its an ok one kind of too basic if you ask me, it has alot of element of clothing and props but they were all just the same and needed more unique and differant designs to them, now "LUIGI" is always a popular subject, but throw in some differant and random stuff, maybe stuff you might not normally see, make it funny like that, theres actually alot you can do with these types of games everything from backrounds to unique stuff and so on. It's Games like this that makes me realize it's a great website and a great game you have here, it's also decent in its own right. but it's actually not that bad. It reminds me of a good quality game ionce played except with a little buzz to it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I admit that I was a bit disappointed at how there wasn't a lot of real interesting things going on. but there was some other areas that still had other things that kept my interest up, and besides you can always make time for some improvments. needs random props, more props, loder music and some backrounds would be nice.

[RIKKU DRESSUP 3]

its alright

Here's a great entry that works well because there is so much to it. The graphics aren't that impressive, but it really is a fun and somewhat entertaining in itself. I think it might be because you didn't try to make it too fancy or anything, just portray it as how it's supposed to be. Another dress-up game allthough i admit this one was ok it was kind of interesting, i like the fact that you had some backrounds and alot of assorted items, one thing that bothered me here was that the "BUTTONS" were kind of small like the backround buttons, There was some "SLOPPY" effort like how the items were placed, you should have the items and clothing sectioned off, but other then that this was an alright dress-up game. so It seems like you really went out of your way to make some of this more complicated then it was, yet it was also pretty simple, wich is one reason why i have come to enjoy this as i know others will also enjoy this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Buttons can be larger so you can click and view them closer and better, the items can be larger aswell some of them seemed too small, So I will start off here with suggesting some sorta more random items, some animated ones, and stuff you might not normally see, maybe its funny, or even bazzar but something differant, and on another note you also want to add a bunch of items not just a few.

[Pumpkin Dress-Up 2005]

Has potential

Now This had its good and bad parts. But for a game it was alright, For the most part, the good outweighed the bad, so it was an game I would recommend. It was a simple game but still entertaining and somewhat impressive. This one has lots of potential but you did not push the limits or the creative skills forward, and with a pumnkin you could have done so much with this one, the backround changer was a nice effect but you only had three backrounds, you should have had more then just 3, atleast 5 or six would sufice. The "GRAPHICS" was so-so could be better with some more shading and small details to give it a more detailed look, maybe even some dark elements to give it the feel of halloween and such. I like that this Submission was easy to understand,and yet very interesting, not to mention entertaining, Everything worked out great, and had a nice look and overall design. I also Think some things could be possibly better, but i will get more into that a bit later.but its nothing more then a few small details.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This was actually not bad, but could use a few things, to spice it up somewhat, so below i have suggested some good things and advice some new ideas and even some old ideas. at least think about them. The backround changer was decent but needed more backrounds then the three you have, needs more detail maybe some shade work for more detail all around, alsomore of a dark feel aswell.

[[LL] - Dress Up Wine.]

Something differant

This was someting differant for sure, and you gave it some appeal, and i was pretty entertained with what you do have here, still could use some fixes and clean ups here and there, but for the most part of it its pretty amusing and entertaining as said. Hmmm ok so this was a differant idea of a dress-up game never would have expected to dress up wine, but you had it more like dressing up a "CHARACTER" and not really the wine, maybe to improve on your idea you could keep the idea of dressing up the wine bottle, but go more with that with fancy labels, and logos maybe some corks some shampain glasses, and so on, but anyways not to lose track you do have a good idea here nice concept but the character part should probably be removed, more props and items are needed though. The hardest part of reviewing stuff is that it has to come to an end and since i really enjoyed this piece, i will have to end it soon, but before i do i just wanted to say you have the effort you have the skill and you have the idea, but wouldnt mind seeing more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Theres always something new and differant with new ideas, i think some new ideas could be tossed around, and while i may not have the best i have suggested something that may help so i do hope you use some of my advuice and ideas, or just a few of the tips, The thing about these types of games is that you have to allow for creativity so with the more random and differant types of items the better especially whena dding unique random and even some animated items aswell, this allows for more of that creative style builds. maybe to improve on your idea you could keep the idea of dressing up the wine bottle, but go more with that with fancy labels, and logos maybe some corks some shampain glasses, and so on

Madanimation responds:

Thanks for the write up, but I literally don't care enough to improve on anything these days.
I'd forgotten I even made this thing.