XwaynecoltX's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Kingdom in the Clouds]

wow greatflash here.

I must admit this was pretty fun and entertaining, the "INTRO" was pretty good itself. always nice to see an intro on games like this, so nice job there, and the "MUSIC" was even better there aswell so nice job there aswell, Soas iplay the game theres alot of great quality to it even some "CUTE" to it with the baby sounds,and overall the "VOICES" in general made this an even more fun game, sowed alot of effort and great quality to it, so nice job there, And as i play a few levels the levels actually seem kind of easy and pretty straight forward, now thats great for the start but, I thought i was gonna see the same "CLOUD" monstor over and over so was glad as the levels progressed that i saw some differant designs, One issue i did have was sometimes when the character goes off to the ends of the screen he gets stuck, and the keys dont always work to get him out, thats something that could be looked into. Passing thefirst "PHASE" of the game really got you more interested in playing, its a simple game of shooting back and fourth, but i liked it, the differant upgrades were ok could have some better "EFFECTS" about them though, and while i said its basic left and right defender type of game you should make it more unique and differant and allow for more differant elements of places to go with the baby and such. But anyways as not to bore you with myreview i found your game fun and entertaining but do look into that one issue about going off to side and sticking, anyways great game.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So if anytthing it was an ok game there was some issues not much but hope it helps, One issue i did have was sometimes when the character goes off to the ends of the screen he gets stuck, and the keys dont always work to get him out, thats something that could be looked into.

~~OVERALL~~
A fun game, cute great sounds and alot of effort went into this , very nice indeed.

[Notepad Drawing Collab 2010]

Fun

I found this game to be pretty fun and i really liked how you presented it, so it did have the effort and thats abig one, i was not too fond of the "SIZE" of it but thats something i can always get past, it was nice to see you winning some awards for this and that shows the effort and time you put into this, hope you win lots more. so Congrats on the awards. It did take some time to load that being with the 11 megs but again that was ok because there was alot of good things about this game including the quality and style of it so props to you on a fantastic game, It is always nice to see an intro on these things and thats not something everyone takes the time to do, so awsome job and great effort in doing so, shows your commitment to your work even if it was just a little intro its makes it more quality so nice job there. This was a fantastic piece from all the art to the great music really welldone here ill even forgive you for the size hehe, anyways great job and congrats on everything with this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The medals seemed abit too hard, the size was kinda high but well worth the time.

~~OVERALL~~
Awsome game lots to see and do, very good quality with this one.

[Kiss Twilight Boys!]

This was a cute game.

Lol this was a cute game, the twilight theme was funny but wonder why the whole bieber theme got mixed in with them aswell, but it was pretty funny and made for a good lil waster game, it was quick and short, could have used more medals in more progression of levels, as for some advice to make the game better well as suggested some more medals, maybe some differant styles of clicking on stuff, just an idea though, but overanll this was a pretty fun game, The "FLASHING" was a bit much maybe breakdow levels so you can add more medals in differant levels, and maybe flashing is one level but you shouldnt have the flashing throughout that can get abit anoying. Also i think this culd use a better "MENU" page maybe more designed better with a fresh look to it, but anyways good game cute and amusing.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would start with some advice for some better interface of an menu, something more fresh and sharp. The flashing was a bit much maybe breakdow levels so you can add more medals in differant levels, and maybe flashing is one level but you shouldnt have the flashing throughout that can get abit anoying.

~~OVERALL~~
This was a short game yet it presented some amusing fun.

[FMA Dress Up]

Pretty basic and simple

Well i must admit this was really "BASIC" and pretty "SIMPLE" didnt offer much on the eyes of backrounds, and variaty of items those are some key stuff in alot of these deress ups, also a larger "CANVUS" would also be a plus, the items you did have were ok and some of them were kinda unique but you still needed more variaty and more random stuff including some "ANIMATED" items the music was pretty good it was differant and made itmore enjoyble but you should also think about dding some more music choices, Good effort here, and i found some parts even better then others, it was actually a fun flash, it also has its good and bad moments, those are things that happen, but anyways keep up the awsome work and i really look forward to seeing more stuff like this, untill then keep working on great stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I like what you have presented here, So here are some ideas and tips that should help on making this better, View screen seemed an issue as it was sorta small, and didnt have much of anything that way, so as making this game better a suggestion might be to stretch the screen out larger so that you have more room for items and more stuff, hope it helps. As a nifty idea you can put in some backrounds or even go one step farther and have a Scene selection option maybe with five choices of differant backrounds, just an idea but there does need to be an improved backround. Add some items more items and some that have animated stuff like blinking lights and eyes stuff like that.

~~OVERALL~~
This was pretty decent if you ask me, has alot of potential to it, can even better with more improvment, i have suggested a few ideas, may they help or not, its a pretty good flash love the flow and vibe of it, so nice work. a good dress up game here could use a few changesand upgrades though.

[Quest - Demo]

It was fun

So this was a fun game, the "AUDIO" gets kind of anoying you may want to add some variaty in the mixof sounds and such and music ofcourse maybe have it rotate after about 2 min or something. the game is fun, the buttons could use a sleeker look aswell, You may even want to think about upgrading the game with some medals, it would really make it more enjoyble and give it some new veiws and new fans, just something to think about as medals really give games some better quality and more replay value. With all that said you cando alot more with this i have made a few suggestions and i do hope they help to improve on this, now dont get me wrong you have something decent here and the effort shows but could still use a few more additions of stuff and so on, so go ahaead and give some new ideas a try. anyways good game, it was short lived but still was somewhat fun, i have suggested a few ideas hope it helps to improve on your game.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The music/audio is kind of anoying you may want to add some variaty in the mix of sounds and such and music ofcourse maybe have it rotate after about 2 min or something. This game could use some medals, there are a ton of things you you could do to make it so that the flash gets some sorta points so that the medals can be achieved, but something to think about. the button was ok but would have been nice to see more of a Flashier and more fancy button. maybe something with animation also, like when you hover over it and click and release, just something more fancy.

~~OVERALL~~
Overall a fun game, here but could use a few new upgrades as suggested above so give it a try, the game can be better as it has some decent options.

[Girly Girl (Dress-Up) x 2]

One of the best

Oh wow this was probably one of the best dress-up games i have seen in a very long time, seems like you really put your efforth through on this one and thats very impressive the few things that really caught my eye on this game was first the variaty and amount of differrant stuff, and not just duplicates either, then you had some unique stuff like pony tails and so on, very nice indeed, there was some music and that made it even better, the drawings them self of clothing, props and even character were really good with some nice detail aswell, so this was pretty fantastic and i found this to be almost perfect, awsome job here keep up the great work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So while this was one of the best i seen in a really long time theres still room for improvments, i suppose with this one some added backrounds wouldnt hurt.

~~OVERALL~~
And overall this was a great game with lots of variaty and allows the user lots of unique designs.

[Cuboy: Cubeture 2]

Fun game

Notbad on this flash but this one didnt make much sense to me, it was ok though and i got some humor out of it, but again didnt make much sense and could be better, Its a pretty good game though regardless, there is lots to do and once you play it abit you do get a better understanding of it all, so thatsa plus, This Cuboy was kind of interesting never really head of him but it was amusing regardless, The cat was kinda funny and it being a baddie made it even better, So all and all this was a pretty good game, had a bit of story to it and that made it even more enjoyble so nice effort there, as for making it better not sure, it was a pretty welldone flash if you ask me. I do like the supense you give these games though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So my advice to make this better, would be make it more longer and throw in much more random stuff and more humor would also be nice.

~~OVERALL~~
A fun game lots to see, very entertaining and somewhat amusing, kinda confusing at first, but gets better, anyways good game here all others should enjoy.

[Dungeon Dice]

Kinda hard on this one

The medals were ok but this one seemed kind of hard the last 2 anyways i could never get the rusty key, but this was a fun gamekind of reminded me of those old "NES" games i use to play, anyways it was like going through these dungeons but anyways this one was pretty good just abit bummed about the last 2 medals but overall it was still pretty entertaining and fun, graphics was notbad either, Some advice might be to add even more medals as this was a pretty fun game, so nice effort here and i look forward to much more from you, anyways untill next time good luck on your next piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Medals are great and you had some in here but seemed too few amount, so by adding more it would increase the quality and allow for more players to have more fun and more to look for and play for, give it a try.

~~OVERALL~~
A good game, some ok medals abit on the hard side but still entertaininggame here.

[Doodle Devil]

Glichy but entertaining.

First of all, Keep up the great work and a huge hand to you on achieving some awards for this, that means it really caught the attention of the users. Second great job on the "IDEA" and concept of this game it seems to work and can even be better but does need some extra work and effort ofcourse. The glich with theplay button was anoying and should be fixed somehow, it keeps on flashing and not allowing you to play even right click play doesnt work much either, this is something that needs some work, its probably some bug that is in there, but anyways the game itself was pretty fun and entertaining once you get past that lil bug, other then that it was notbad, So as improvments work on that glich.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Overall the game was fun, but kinda glichy especially the one stopping you from actually playing, but anyways thats the first part that needs some improvments.

~~OVERALL~~
It was an ok game kinda glichy, did have fun once it was started though.

[Uncle Bob-Level 2]

Decent for an older flash game

So first i will start off with the intro itspretty good was not too much but it was nice to see an intro before the actaul flash starts up, there was not much but still a decent intro made it even more enjoyble, so nice effort there. Ok so the game is actually pretty fun, its really fast kinda hard that way and the "CROSS-HAIR" could have been better, have the cross hair on all the time, and it would be nice to have a bigger screen area and more to move around in, but for the mostpart this was pretty good, nice job and nice effort below are a few tips on improving this and making it even better, good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So first off a bigger view screen would be nice so you can see mor and move around much more, You should think about adding a Cross-fire, instead of the cursor arrow it makes it look like you are really using a weapon of some sort, and gives the player that sense of feel that they really are killing or shooting something. So a cress-fire would be perfect in this situation, so give it a try and it might be the perfect choice. also youmay want to slow down the action somewhat aswell,

~~OVERALL~~
An entertaining game, could use some better options and could be slower.