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[Animated Dress Up Game]

Another cool dress-up game you have here.

Now as i get into this game entry and review alot of things come to mind, some ill suggest some thoughts and ideas later in the review, but i must say that i was pretty impressed with what you did have and some effort does show in this and its the effort you put into it inwich i liked, So it does have potential to be even better in the future with updates and such. Alright so not a bad game here for being a dress up and all, the "SIZE" was notbad eiether all though it was slightly larger then most but i guess that all depends on the game, i think you have done a superb job though, I must say i was pretty impressed with this piece as you have added some interesting stuff that make it all complete, i really like the click and add on prop that was nice, you added alot of stuff, but maybe adding some more creative items and such would be a plus. anyways good game you have here. SO you have a Good game here, It was a pretty good fun and i found it delightful and randomly amusing, You do have an idea oh how to make some decent games, I have also suggested some improvment ideas below. but do try and put some of the ideas in effect as they will only make things better, But overall this was a fun game, and you seem to have it down.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would love to see you make more of this, you ahve most of the style doen and the idea really comes across as a great game, Perhaps some advice inwich you can Utilise Ideas and fearures more better, it didnt really lack much but i have an idea or two here that may or may not help, but for the most of this, it was alright. Alright not a bad game, lots to see and do with this one, the one thing it could do with more of is some more creative items, random props and such, just some things to think about, other then that this was notbad.

enciel responds:

thanks for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :) will try my best to improve on my next submissions as well :D

[Pokémon:The first mission]

Old yet fun game

Alright you have some good ideas here and i like the concept of this whole thing, There was no real Lackluster points or anything really lacking, Infact there was not anything unnecessarily done on here, infact once again, This was a Professional meathod, and this can really thrive from your ideas, so i was pretty impressed with this. I like this for the small file size, now i also like tis because its some of the older games that really had some style to it, and this while not the greatest still shows why newgrounds was so great when it first started, but anyways good game kind of simple, could possibly use more user controll of weapons and such. so I really liked this game, it was amusing and had some differant styles of fun added to it so the extra effort does show, and I also like the creativity here it shows how the game plays and plays to the end giving some replay value, I hope to see some changes for the better and even see this get even more popular then it already is, i Enjoyed your presentation and look for more of your work soon. And once again great job on the effort here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You have a clever looking flash entry here, you really did seem to focus on some good visuals and decently flowed along here, and there was some decent interactivity with this, so its a good game submission, This has some good Potential to do even more in various areas thruout the flash, But i must say it was a Genuinely Decent ProjectJust needs some small tweaks. This could use a few upgrades like some more variaty in weapons, more kill points on the character, including more pokemon characters to kill.

[CATCH the TURDS]

odd but kinda interesting

So my Impression of this is that you have done good here you have something decent and interesting, Your Representation in this flash is, Swanky, and Positive, and thats what has allured me here, and i was taken back by how interesting this really is, so nice effort you have put fourward on this, and as i get more into the review ill give much more feedback on more possibilities. An odd game you have here, it was a simple idea and kind of silly but it was still intersting, this game was too simole but the size was soo short but i guess that was a good thing, but regardless a good time waster with this one, maybe a few upgrades could be done like some better graphics and more things to do within the game. So decent game here, I found this game to be fun and entertaining now ofcourse there are some things that can be made better and much more improved, With a few more adjustments and fixer ups it could be much better and even more popular with a larger group of people to enjoy, but anyways it was a decent flash, I really liked the effort you put in this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And so this is where i suggest a few ideas and improvments, cant always do that since some stuff is really good and right on tack, but with this one there was some good points and only a few points of suggestions for improvment, i have suggested a few ideas thruout the review including here, so just think about the ideas and just imrpve and make the weaker points stronger, in-turn commingout with an overall better outcime of an entry. maybe a few upgrades could be done like some better graphics and more things to do within the game.

[Ashley Journey]

Decen dress-up game

What are the right words, Swanky and Groovy come to mind, And here i am reviewing another one of these fantastic submissions, now dont get me wront there are some things that could use more effort and you could change some stuff, but for the most part i like what you got going on here. Its Loaded with fantastic elements, and hope to see more of the same soon. A fun dress-up game you have, it was simple and i like the click on an item and it snaps on that was pretty nifty, so i have seen and played alot of these games and they are prettyinteresting i like the effort you have been putting fourth some effort in this one with lots ofitems, backrounds and even some music so nice job on this one. as for improvment not sure since you covered all the basics. You have A fun flash game, some good positive results here, graphics could be better and there could be some extra effort on stuff, but overall it was pretty entertaining, Besides some little extras, could be Rejuvinated with some extra touces and ideas though. just some little things and cleaning up, but overall it was a pretty entertaining flash entry.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And so here I thought you had a good game here there was some slight fixes and upgrades you can put in, nothing to take away from your flash, Because it does have Potential So here are just a few Constructive tips to make things better. So Put in some of that effort and run with it. andlet it show its quality, younever know but you do have something good here. I would like to see more variaty, i know you have alot of stuff already but maybe making some more random and unique stuff like goofy and odd hats and gloves and whatnot, that would be a plus onthis one.

[[SG] Dress Up Shades Gang]

Too basic

This is Groovy, and Spectacular, you gave a Positive light on this, There wasnot much unnecessarily Negitive points either, You have pushed the ideas forward and have come up with something interesting, ultimately this can be even better, and i love how you made everything work and come alive, it was pretty entertaining for the most part. Theres alot of dress-up game more then i can count, but i do have to say it was "CUTE" with yours here but it was too "BLAND" aswell, needed more clothing and prop options, Posibly a larger view screen, even some "BACKROUNDS" would sufice, but this game was too bland and too basic and does need some upgrading, more style more items but most of all needs more effort on your part to make it jump out, even throw in some idea that are not in other dress-ups for something differant and unique. Entertaining flash game here, it had some nice options and features kept me interested and was not boring, all though there are still some improvments that can be made, But anyways with all that said this was a pretty decent flash again had all the elements thats makes up something good and amusing so i was pleased with this, so props to you on something decent here, hope to see improvments soon, as this has lots of potential, untill then good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
There are various ways you can make this better i have even suggested a few ideas, Some stuff can be Utilised better of you should utilise new ideas to the best that you can, Focus on the strong points weak points of the game so that there is more balance throughout it, So i suggest a few ideas and tips here hoping that it will only make things better for your game, So try some or all of the tips and ideas out, and let your flash shine even more. Adding more items and clothing choices would be first on mind a canvus and then adding some backround choices would be a big change for the better.

[Potato Man Dressup v.3]

Notbad of a game

Everything in this has Processed very well and effectively, it was Acceptable, no i take that back, infact it was Spectacular and i didnt find much Lackluster areas maybe one or two but that could easily be worked on, but you do have some nice work here and it can only get better from here on out so nice job overall, hope to see more. This particular game kind of reminds me of the "DEAD-BABY" dress-up games, but also reminds me of a mexican man dress-up game lol wich are funny, but anyways this was notbad could use more items more props, i do however like the randomness of it all with there being some unique designs and all, and speaking of designs you should think about adding a border to the window screen seems abit plain. The flashing backround was alright but also seemed to get anoying so maybe thats also something that can be changed out aswell, So not to bore you any furthure with this review, But anyways you have some good work here allthough some more effort for better improvment could be done for an overall effect, and better outcome, Its not perfect but is ok for what you did supply in content, so on that part of stuff it was notbad at all. So a good flash well worth the while, some great effort here put fourth, untill next time keep the creativity flowing.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Before i get into improvments and updating any lacking areas, I just want to say that you have a good game here it kept me interested and was not boring by any means, There is allways room for improvment and while your flas was pretty decent there were a few stuff and details that could have some slight more effort, but i must say there is always room for some kind of improvment. add backrounds and add more items, also add a border around the edges of the canvus these would all be plusses on this kind of games.

[Alien Creator]

Nice style

Well well here was something good from the portal, and while it does seem to need some improvments and a few suggestive ideas, I will elaborate more on that in the review if it needs any help at all, as it was a pretty good start to a flash entry, so i do look forward to what else you can do with this, but lets move along to this interesting flash works you do have here. I like the style of game here while it is a dress-up you gave it alot of elements that people usually miss, so that was a plus, you gave this game life with good "CREATIVITY" i like all the variaty in planets, allthough in each planet there should be more props and clothing and stuff, more random stuff aswell, So my take on this game you did well, could use more variaty of items but was a decent and fun game. This game was alright, not perfect but does have some decent entertainment to it and i played it a few times so it also brings in some re-play value and thats something you dont get alot of in these types of game, So You a have a decent flash here, but there there is still some room for improvments even a few little things here and there, but in the end it can only help you and make your flash much better and again in the end more enjoyble for all who see it such as myself. so hope others enjoy it aswell.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You can improve on this, So use some of these ideas, even as basic as some may be but in the end your flash will be much better for it. So i got alot of good from this flash it was amazing actually, But also So think about some of the ideas suggested in the review. But anyways hope to see some more work from you, and hope to see some updates aswell, as this game was really fun and would love to see it continue on. more items is needed ofcourse, so other then that this was actually notbad.

blowtoons responds:

Thanks a lot XwaynecoltX! great review!

[AdVaNcE DrEsS uP 2]

Kinda simular to the first one

I really like these types of flash games as they tend to take some time, I thought you showed some good effort and the outcome seems to show off that time and energy put in so props to you there, nice job indeed, There are some areas of improvment and it would really make this an all around flash entry so something to think about there. So i cant give this much of a higher score then the first version, but i will grade you on the effort and creativity of it, So you basicly have no changes except for maybe a girl version, now as i explained in the other ones you need some adjustments, like thinner lines brush stroke tool not so thick on the character and prop outlines. also adding a larger canvus will help since you had such a small areas to work with, it will also help to add more items aswell, and some sort of backround sthat change or the user can change would be a nice option aswell, these are all things i have mentioned in the first one but could still be used here, other then that this was notbad. And here is another interesting game, it has alot to offer and has some potential aswell, I did enjoy what you have here now just would like to see more effort all around, So while this was pretty good it could use a few extras It had everything that made it a great flash nice art, nice detail and nice graphics, so all and all this was actually a pretty good flash. So as any suggestions i posted try them and see how it goes, but for the overall of this it was pretty good stuff so good luck with all that.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I really liked the effort you put into this but it also still can improve, A few improvments could be done here I have posted a few ideas that could really make this flash take off, I have some advice on a few things here and they are posted throughout the review but they are all some needed improvments to your flash that will make it much more enjoyble for your fans, and anyone who views and or plays this game. backrounds would be a plus here, Aswell as more items and more of a canvus like too it, Make thinner lines brush stroke tool not so thick on the character and prop outlines.

[Aquarium Dress Up]

Nice game

Alright you have a delightful and Divine piece of flash work here, its not all the time that you can find such unique entries and i am glad i have found something of interest here today, Now ofcourse theres room to make things better and some slight improvment, I will elaborate on that later though, and how effectively you may push improvments. Sofar i like the "MEBU-PAGE" it was fresh and very inviting as a game should so it does show the interest that it should, but i must say the "GAME-PLAY" is much to be desired for like you just click on objects and it changes to a new item or color patteren, that sort of takes away the creativity as that a drag and drop style canoffer, so why not add a darg and drop style over the click and change option it will allow for more creativity, the music was fresh and interesting and made it for pleasent. And here is another interesting game, it has alot to offer and has some potential aswell, I did enjoy what you have here now just would like to see more effort all around, So while this was pretty good it could use a few extras It had everything that made it a great flash nice art, nice detail and nice graphics, so all and all this was actually a pretty good flash. So as any suggestions i posted try them and see how it goes, but for the overall of this it was pretty good stuff so good luck with all that.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
there is lots of room for improvments, just a few things here and there, but the extra effort would really improve on this and make it better and a great game overall, Dont get me wrong its pretty good as is, but could stand for a few more enhancments, and will only make things better. so give some of these ideas a shot and let the flash comeout nice. Add a drag and drop option, kind of style like the old drag and drop.

[Arri dress up]

Interesting dress-up

You have Engineered something very Professional here something delightful, and something of good interest here, i was glad to have found this, And i didnt find anything that was lacking or anything like that, So Eliminating anything to take away from this would be out of the question, you do have a good entry here and i look forward to seeing more of this and your work. So this was not a bad game i actually like and review alot of these types of games, and while this one does show some good effort, i think you did more of a copy and past style of stuff, you need more creative items, you need more random stuff, and more unique props and such, i do however like the "SNAP-ON" option that was someting differant, also adding some music, would be another nice touch. Ok so with all that said and done, there was some good parts in this flash entry, there were some parts that could be better on your end, but again i must say for the most part of this it was notbad at all, just needs some changes here and there, But you have something decent and something to go with for something even better on the next run

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Improving is always a plus, and So im here to try and suggest some good points, and hope they do get some consideration, and only say that because they could help to make this more fantastic then it already is, so here are some suggestions. but i like what you have here, hope to see some more qaulity and improvment come along soon. So you can Make it your own dress-up with your own unique twist and style, Add Some backrounds, Also i think you could add some music to this it just seems kind of bland without it. just some things to think about.