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[car riding]

Kinda fun

I wont start this review off with being Negitive, because this was more Spectacular then anything else, It was not outstanding but is capable of being just that, as well as being the best it can be, but its a decent flash and i can see this going even farther, so you do have a decent presentation and great idea here i hope you can improve on this. This was actually a kind of fun game, the music could be more clear and sharper and probably have more choices in the music cycle, but the game was actually kinda fun. this is one of those little games that probably could use some medals to it, but overall a little fun game. I was glad to have seen and even review this piece as it was highly entertaining and you gave it much effort, Even with the right Attitude and thats what you need to make something nifty like this, so props to you on that, i wouldnt mind seeing more into this and even more effort but for the most of this it was pretty good stuff. So hope this helps good luck I really liked the flash.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This Flash could be Pollished up a bit, and maybe use a few Tweaks here and there, ultimately This will be a better flash game with some improvments , so checkout the advice and tips i have suggested. And again ultimately will allow you to have more viewers to your flash as well. And bring a bit more quality to your flash. So try some of the ideas out. ADD MEDALS this will increase the worth and popularity of this game. you can also add a cycle of different music or adding music choices at the click of the user to the player, also abit more quality should go into the music and sound.

flashmakeit responds:

Thank you for the review and advice. Your comment was really worth reading. I am thinking about making a point and click game. I would love to learn how to add medals to a game. It would be worth the challenge. I am glad you kinda enjoyed this game and I enjoyed your useful comment.

[ASV Dress-Up #2]

Pretty basic dress-up game

You have made this out to be an outstanding and Professional flash submission now dont get me wrong it does have some spots here and there that could be better, but im sure you will ultimately get to that, but overall this is a good piece of flash and i was pleased to see it in its entirely, so nice effort and good job all around on this one. Not to bemean or anything but this was a pretty basic dress up, i love all the bright and cartoony color and all but it was still basic and not much stuff to really mix and match the whole click a button was kinda meh since the drag and drop seems more creative, but anyways its was your basic dress-up here. On an ending note here this was a fun flash, really enjoyed it and liked the effort you put forward making this fun and entertaining for all to enjoy, There was a few Lacking areas but those are things that can be easily cleaned up, Maybe i can elaborate more on it later, I really liked it from the start to the finish, making a good effort all around, nice job here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And well you have a Decent flash here, It was actually pretty clever the way you did it, so i was pretty impressed with that, Some things could be Utilised better but anyways there are alot of these types but with some small fixes here and there and a few more additions, It could be much more improved, so dont be afraid to try some of the ideas out it can only make things better and much more improved. This needs more of a DRAG n DROP style, MORE ITEMS would be a big plus aswell, Besides that this was just your basic dress-up game.

[1.7 Sextillion Pin-Ups]

Someting differant here

This is a Groovy flash entry, Its Groovy and Swanky, OK so i just want to get this started and mention here that you have something good here you have a good vision of ideas and an overall good concept of stuff, and thats all it really takes to get something like this really going, now throughout the review i may suggest some ideas but thats later in the review, So with this one i was abit confused with this one, because the design and interface was really confusing, and kind of just everything was "CLOGGED" up and there was no real direction, i wouldnt mind seeing more of a traditional method here though, It seems well made and lots of effort but just has too much goingon here and could have things more spreadout expecially the design and all. But anyways once again we have another decent game here, theres not alot i can say to improve on this but there are some things that could be cleaned up as menioned and below, but for the most of this its pretty good and i liked everything i saw here, so keep up the good work. with some more effort so below are a few ideas that really could push this flash to the extra efforts, good luck on updating this or any new games you might be working on.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The Submission actually looks pretty good at this point. All you need to do is keep on improving from here and making more extras here and there. needs things to spreadout more, theres too much stuff with the interface and all, a more basic and more traditional style would be nice

[Anime Avatar Creator]

Good idea

You have Engineered a good flash game here, it has lots to see and do, allthough it could use more in some parts but that will ultimately be explained later, But as i start off this flashsubmission, i like what you have presented here and there are some fun and entertaining stuff as this gets started, I do hope to see more of it thruout so keep it rolling. I must say this was something, differant, I have seen alot of dress-ups and this was a wellmade one with lots to see, lots of items, and some good effects like with color and such, so i was pretty impressed with the whole outcome, Now i would like to see some more things like some "SOUND/FX" even some "MUSIC" choices would be great, well something to think about anyways. I really like what you have here, and since this review is almost over ill just say that in moderation this was a decent flash game, and shows what you are capable of and would love to see more of your skills pushed further, but as for this game, it was a nifty lil game, and i was pretty happy with the gameplay, very entertaining and some good fun to it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I found this to be mildly entertaining There was some nice lements here and there, and ofcourse there are some parts that could be better throughout. Well you have a good game here, i would suggest that you add some sound/fx and some music would really put this even in a better effected light of improvments.

[Anime Character Generator]

Cute dress-up

OK well good game you have here i would really like to see this Thrive and Flourish into something great, I can elaborate in more detail on that later, but you may want to find any Lacking and unnecessarily elements and make them more better and efficient for the flash game so that it runs better aswell, But you have a good start into something good here. I was glad to see that this has won underdog of the week, Its always something nice to win some awards for your efforts, and now onto your game here, And as i get more into this i am pretty amazed you have somethin really good here, but there is not much of creativity as you cant design stuff with easy you do have some interesting stuff though, and i love the use of the color bars here and that does add to the creativity, you should add the dran and drop dress-up option though, that would allow for more creativity. also some sound/fx and some music options would be another good option. A Dazzling Flash submission you have here, So my final thoughts on this was that it was a pretty good flash, and i got some good fun play out of it, it does need more effort but it was pretty entertaining and glad i had the chance to check this out. and i hope your other stuff is just as good, and on the last note here keep up the interesting works of flash.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
First of all in improvments tis could use a few, you can add a number of tings to make this a better and more entertaining game, So below i have suggested some new ideas and old tips that can make it all worth your while, keep up the good effort. and remember creativity is always a plus, and never hurts to go beyond the box in creation anyways good luck. Add a drop and drag option style of dress-up, Also adding some music or some music choices would be great with this aswell as some sound/fx to go with all the clicking and such.

[Pokémon Fartfetch]

Cute

And here we have a decent game, and a good submission entry, there was some decent imagry and visuals, and also had some fun gameplayabout it all, I did like some good points in this, However there are some points that could use more effort but I will elaborate thatlater in the review, but overall this was a decent start of a game entry. and you Processed a good flash here. OK so the idea behind this was ok, the graphics were cute and the idea was cute aswell, there was not muchto this though a little "TIME-WASTER" not more then that, but once you get all three "FANS" going it does get laggy and choppy, so maybe some lower quality options could work there aswell, but anyways its an alright game but needs more to it, needs more fun to it. I really found this Submission entry to be pretty good, Well presented well percieved and well orginised, The game was fun and entertaining, not to say it could use some small adjustments for improving, But you brought all the elements together making for a decent game here. So untill your next flash keep up the creative skills flowing and hope to make much more enjoying fun games like this one, i would love to see more anyways untill then good luck on your next Submission.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I must say this was a decent flash submission here, It has some entertaining and amusing factors and was pretty fun, Could use abit more Focus on some of the weaker areas, and if you do put some stronger direction there it will be a pretty solid flash, but other then that its an ok flash game, and could use some updates and changes with a few ideas as suggested, so go with it and let it shine thru. Gets choppy and laggy way too fast needs ome quality issues there, maybe slowing down the fan abit would be key.

[Akiko Dress up]

Decent game

So unnecessarily I found this flash by random chice but i must say it was a pretty good find as it was an entertaining and flashy game, now i still think there could be some more work in other places, and i will ofcourse elaborate more on that in abit, But in moderation it could use a few things here and there giving it that extra push it needs to be even better then it is. So let me start on some detail points and saying that you do have some decent variaty, but the fact that every 2nd 3rd and fourt item is basicly a copy of the other one doesnt do much for creativity, so with that said you can always make each item have something differant maybe something more unique and such from the other, also things are too "SMALL" aswell as "CLUTTERED" up so you could make the canvus larger to help releave that stress of issues, but other then that it was notbad, a fun dress up game but could use some more sttention for detail. I really enjoyed what you made her em a delightfull flash with lots of entertaining and amusing visuals, great stuff all around, its stuff like this i can really appreciate so very nice work, keep it up. There was alot of tips i suggested that will greatly help make this much a better game, and again good luck. And once again great flash entry here. Cheers till next time.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ok here we have a decent little flash entry, this was notbad of a game, it had some good and bad points and i have suggested some ideas for the bad if even that, And all it takes is a few Tweaking on spots here and there, But I do Recommend a few ideas and suggestions that can make this better and improve on them, so just something to think about. So make it your own, make it your own style adding some backrounds and even adding a larger canvus would be a big plus.

[Angel Of Peace]

Nice dress-up

To start off this review is kind of hard because Theres so much to start with, I guess I will start off by saying that This was kind of nifty work you have here, ultimately This can even be better with a few extra details and suggestions, Because after seeing and playing with this game I can see that you are capable of, and that makes me really interested in this and your other works, but anyways as for this flash entry. so you have a nice dress-up here it was very "ELEGANT" the graphics and visual effect was amazing smooth and fresh looking, This was a fun game but it lacked in much more items, not much creativity there, so thats one area you can work on, because these types of games are based on "CREATIVITY" and design so thats something to think about, and i would love to see this submission excell to and beyond expectations, anyways nice effort. What else can I say about this game, i enjoyed it for what it is Had some fun with it and it did give off some entertaining value, Its amusing and entertaining and had some nice visual graphics so from start to the end it was A pretty good entry. Now as for any kind of fixing up, ill leave that for the improvment section just below, but it was all good, Im not sure i saw any real negitive points needing improvment, but if there is anything else ill be sure to leave some ideas below.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
There is always room for some sorta improvments There is actually alot you can do with this, I thought i would atleast suggest a few ideas I hope you do use some of them since it will improve on an already decent Game, this flash did lack some stuff but that can be worked on with just a tad more effort, So look into these ideas, the game is great and could really take off even more then it has already. So forst off More items aswell as some backrounds will do the trick here.