XwaynecoltX's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Wizard character maker]

Decent game

Ok so this was notbad kind of decent, as a fan of these types i do see alot of these types, so while it was ok there was some adjustments that could make this better, You had some good stuff and while they were pretty basic they could have used some detail and more effort on your part, and some more animated items wouldnt hurt either, just an idea or two that could make this much improved, and something to think about when working on your next one, so with that said goodluck on anything else you have planned. So while this was pretty good it could use a few extras It had everything that made it a great flash nice art, nice detail and nice graphics, so all and all this was actually a pretty good flash. So as any suggestions i posted try them and see how it goes, but for the overall of this it was pretty good stuff. and cant wait to see what else you are capble of, but untill the next flash in works good luck, hope to see more soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ideas, tips and better improvments are always needed so as Gone through the flash here are some helpful ideas, that can make things better, good luck, So as explained before, this could use more items more choices, even throw in some odd and random stuff, you want to make this differant from other dress-ups so having some items animated would also help in that.

[NG Dress Up #2]

Another good game

So you have another good game, I really like the "MENU-PAGE" and with all the characters, theres alot of times people just dont put that much effort so nice effort there thats a plus, But anyways nice effort there, So there waslots of characters too dress-up, but the items were limeted, and the view screen was somewhat small maybe you need to make a larger view screen, and more items on each character would also help, more detail would show up with a larger view screen aswell, but it was still fun game and entertaining, i liked it, And soonce again this was a decent Flash i really liked what you presented, now ofcourse there was some improvments that could make it much better i suggested some ideas below, but for what it is you presented a good flash with an entertaining and replay value, so with that said keep up the good work it was a pretty decent work of flash, and i hope to see more of your works in the near future so untill then good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You have a neat game here, It could be even better though because it was decent but withs ome fixes and and more additions, it would be even much better so here are some of my ideas that i thought might help and improve on an already decent game idea. Dress up games are pretty cool, but this could use some backrounds of some sorts something that changes up, but more backrounds for sure. A good game here and had some interesting items, and pieces, but also seems like they were pretty basic, so why not add more items for better creation, but not just that but add items that you normally dont see, give them abit more detail, and last but not least have some items with some sort of animation. I look forward to seeing more from you though.

[Skater- make a skater DEM]

Nice idea here

So first i will start off with the intro its pretty good was not too much but it was nice to see an intro before the actaul flash starts up, there was not much but still a decent intro made it even more enjoyble, so nice effort there. So the idea of making a skateboarder is somewhat creative, the "SIZE" was abit much though kind of large even for a dress up game, but it is what it is. It did take abit to load up, but for the mostpart i enjoyed it, The button style of items is ok but maybe use the drag and drop style for better creativity, So while i liked this flash there are some good and bad about it, i went over it abit but have suggested some more ideas below hope it helps, its not major but could use more of the effort on little stuff here and there, anyways hope it helps as this was actually a pretty good flash. But anyways not to bore you any longer with this review i will end it here, but good luck on any new projects you have in the works.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
There are some improvments that could be made, here are a few suggestions, some effort on your side will only make this even better. So give these options a try. So the Only thing i Really had issues with was the large megabite file, I only worry that it may limit some users from enjoying your work, just something to think about when making big file flashworks. Maybe you can cut it down somehow. even making this into two parts might work, but compressing stuff like music, removing jpegs, and less quality on detailed artwork might even help, also removing symbols from the flash lybrary that are no longer in use is another option to go about. So this style of just click a button and the item or clothing just pops onto the character is ok, but the drag and drop style is much better and allows for more creativity by the user and allows them to build it up how they want with wacky and creative creations, so the button style is ok but the drag and drop just seems more overall better.

[DodgeTheFist]

Decent

This was decent, i think from what i saw, the "GRAPHICS" were the best part of this whole flash so you do have that going for you, You should think about adding music and sound/fx that would really improve on things. This game seems fun but also just too "HARD" and difficult so you should also think about making the game easier for newcomers and such, just a thought so that its more fun for all, There are alot of things that could probably make this game better, i like the crazy man but he needs some downtime in order to give the player some sort of better chance at getting him or something, but other then that this was an ok game but does need more effort and more stuff to mess with, anyways good luck on your next project. But my advice to making this game better, is make it easier, make it more fun, and have more stuff in there to keep the player interested, anyways nice work. Andi really look forward to see what you come up with next.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You should think about adding music and sound/fx that would really improve on things. Make the game easier for everyone to enjoy.

[Bieber Metamorph]

Strange yet fun game.

Well, what you see is what you get - just a nice piece designed with some good effort to bring out some quality, and you have done just that. You have already impressed me with this one and hope it continues your success here on newgrounds.
So this was an interesting game,i see that you have even won an "AWARD" for it well thats another A+ in my book so congrats, i was happy that the size was not too large for my computer to handle either so nice job there, anyways onto your game, oh by the way glad to see lots of medals its always a fun experience the more the medals there are, I can see why you won an award, the "GRAPHICS" alone was superb and the sound was notbad either so gppd job and props to you on a decent and good quality of a game here. Allright so the game was slightly "DISTURBING" with touching and in van stuff but kinda funny i guess and its just a game i suppose, the game play is fun and interesting, Well, is there anything else that needs be said about a Flash like this? I feel that a little more should be said, because the content is not perfect. It is very moving, but is not where it needs to be to garner the full five stars from me,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So with this one i thought some things were slightly overused, but that didnt really hurt it, Maybe you can experiment here and there with things, There is still Plenty of room for some improvment. I think i have only noticed one little issue with the game and that was that bieber can tend to get stuck up behind the van and such sometimes, something to look into.

[Binary]

Kinda hard with this one.

Wow, I love this, the way that you've put in such a lot of effort, to get this far, with some frankly brilliant entry, So you have done the time and effort, and thats what drew my attention, so keep doing what you do, and ill keep interested in all your works. This game was interesting, i am glad that you won an award for this game so "CONGRATS" on that, The few medals was not too appealing so maybe adding some extra medals would benice, So the "INTERFACE" on this was kind of nifty, and the controls were explained very well, So this game was hard right at first, i think you should have some sort of "HINT" option or guid option incase you get stuck. I think that the idea in here, really isn't my kettle of fish, but i still found some entertaining value in and through-out the flash. and by the end i was enjoying your idea, so while it took awhile i adapted to your ideas and style.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I like this one, you could still have this Transformed into something more, and something more positive, allthough you did a pretty good job as it is, There are Numerous things that you could do to add some extra concept ideas, So one thing that i think could make this better would be to have more medals, it would increase the fun raing and keep it going for more replay value so add medals as it was kind of lacking in some. So as i suggested above you should have some sort of Hint option or guid option incase you get stuck.

[Binding of Isaac DEMO]

Fun like zelda

Alright where do i start, you have alot going on with this one, its pretty interesting and pretty fun once you get into it and such, you have got the skills and for sure the ideas, you could use more depth in some areas but ofcourse ill comment on that later. So a great flash, even won some awards and that was a plus especially with this type, just shows some good effort on your part and hope to see more like this soon. and nice job on the "INTRO" it was cute and it made for a nice little intro, the "AUDIO" was nice aswell, ok so as soon as i seen the instructions on this one, it was wow this is just like "ZELDA" lol thats cool though. even the first boss was the snake like creature just like in zelda lol, guess you really like the zelda games, So this was a fun game alot like zelda, pretty entertaining, there should be some more medals though. I think that while this piece was as I said above, Pretty decent, it could have been longer and perhaps some extra added elements but maybe you can cover that in future updates.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I cant Encourage enough to keep doing what you have been doing because you know how to bring the fun out, Maybe you could add some extras for that extra Exposure and such, This game has alot of potential, just a few medals kinda makes me a sad camper, so adding a few extra medals would be nice.

[Bio Assault]

Very addictive

Alright so i will start this review off with a word and that is that this was outstanding and even a little divine but thats just because i did enjoy this, ultimately you could work more on this, And i will elaborate a little more on that later So notbad with this one and looks like alot of fun too, Not alot of flash can win awards but when the effort does show off as does this one then its worth it and this one was worthit for sure so fantastic job there, and props to you on the awards. ok so wow as i do play and get into the game it gets pretty intense the controls are differant but as you get into it, its pretty fun, music is good and graphics are nice and smooth, The game is not that hard and gets really exciting and fun. i think the onlything that could be better is abit more smoothness on the ship movment. Well, what needs to be said? It's fantastic, the submission brings alot of emotion and alot quality through-out, so i do like your effort and style, hope to see more of your work like this soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I will take a deeper dive into this topic as i think it will help and improve on a few points i saw needing some more attention, So here are some options, and advice that you may look into. More smoothness on the ship movment, i think maybe some "FLASHY" effects could also on with the weapons and such.