XwaynecoltX's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Benny's Adventure]

Kinda hard to handle

The quality of the video is first rate, as is the style, with incredible design, plus everything moves independently, unlike the bulk of the flash that we usually see here. Lavish attention to detail, This was an ok game and you had some nice "MUSIC" to go with it so i was sort of impressed with that aspect of things, I had a real hard time figguring out the "CONTROLS" and such you didnt even have an "INSTRUCTIONS" section on this whole piece wich would have been nice, but it seems like a fun game, kind of interesting though, hope to see some improvments. I love how this all mixes together in a rare blend of ideas concepts. and thats what you need to make something special, and so this one caught my attention right away.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The best designers try new things, and new ideas,which usually result in award winning product, So try a few new things and new ideas that will push the limits, i have a few for you here. Add an instructiones section on how to ram doors and such, other then that this was notbad.

[Animal Creator]

Very unique

I found no Lackluster points, if there are any points thatneed some work, i will suggest some ideas abit later, There was some cluttered points, But it was a Divine piece of work, and i know you are capable of making this work to even a Professional manner wich its pretty much there, So let this shine and Thrive, into new ideas and fun times. Ok so this was a very unique game you have here, it has some very interesting and unique elements and you can really "CREATE" with this one, however it is lacking some "MUSIC" options but you have done well with giving the user some creativity value and design so nice work there, but i would try and add some music or some music options. Its not everyday i get to see alot of games like this but this particular one was alright, so anyways decent flash, some ok entertainment value, and it was presented well enough to understand it all so nice job here. but overall this was a pretty good game, not too much to add, except adding more to it but not by much, but great flash i really enjoyed it, These flash types and styles can take time. So on an ending note great effort and keep up with the ideas and such, i look forward to more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Alright so here is where i can suggest some new ideas and options and here is what i came up with this particular flash. This could use some music options, more stuff that will give some options to sounds and such.

[400 Chickens(In Potentia)]

Basic

This is a Groovy and Swanky submission, theres no need to be Negitive on anything infact i can only be Positive as you have this Loaded with fun-ness and a good sense of entertainment aswell as giving it some decent quality and entertainment value, So as i continue to review this i get more excited with each new thing and such. And here we have something basic i like the idea of "CHICKENS" but you didnt put enough effort with more selection and props, there was just a few options and thats what killed it, Some backrounds would be nice thats an option you didnt have either, But i do like the idea here, seems like it would be better with some more detail and more options, but overall notbad at all. but anyways decent work here just wish it had more features and options. I thought this was kind of Dazzling and something differant but for sure had a nice visual look to it with a sense of fresh look about it, this was a pretty decent game entry, Now even with that said there are some stuff on this submission that can be better fixed and spiced up, but thats for later or i may have stated what needs changes already.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Tweak A few things here and there, and this can be even better, It would be in your best interest and the people who play your game toput that extra effort and add more stuff with some nifty features options and even new ideas, not to take away anything from what you have going on but it could make for a better outcome of your flash game, so try a few things add more effort and let it flow. So as above, this could be better. and here are some suggestions, tips and ideas that can only help to make your idea work even better then it is, so give it a thought. So first off Add more items then Some backrounds, And Maybe you should have had small and thinner lines the brush strokes were too thick

[8-Bit Mario dress-up]

Cute and basic

A fun game here, it does need more of an ump to it, The fun level kind of drops out of it after abit so you need to do something with this to make it more exciting but from what i did play it was kinda fun, and seems more on the simple side of things but i still had some fun with this game, but anyways ill get into more detail about what it needs and doesnt need. With this dress up i thought it was kind of cute, but also still on the basic side of things, now i refer to it as basic because, the items were far and few inbetween, and there was no real unique or random items,also with dress-ups its bette to have a larger view screen and so on, Now on the "POSITIVE" note with this one i thought that you did something nifty with the "TEXT" bubble that really made things somewhat differant, but was just not enough, but anyways i still had some fun with this. But with all that said, Amusing game some decent interactivity, and fun to play, there was alot to see and it was overall fun so great job all around below i have left a few ideas that may help to Improve on this flash, so keep up the good work and i look forward to more. But anyways decent flash i had fun with them, and most of all keep up the fantastic flash work. And keep making these games they bring entertainment to all.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And this was Genuinely a Decent game, it had some decent visuals some fun play about it, But Perhaps Some more Ironing out of some small little stuff, that could have some detailed effort and more unique stuff aswell, but there are some other improvments that could take place with this submission aswell so these are things to think about, and theres other stuff but these are some basic ideas and tips to work on A larger canvus would be a big start, and another big plus would be some backrounds then ofcourse more items, and animated items would also be something i would suggest.

[Cartman FUN]

A better dress up here.

I thought it was weird But i also found myself enjoying this entry as much as the next guy, so i got a positive feel from this so props to you for a decent submission. You have Distributed a very good entry here, This is Loaded with lots to see and do, This is a very Acceptable Flash, and would love to see it Thrive into even more. So i gave this particular dress-up a better score then most and that was because you did take the time to push forward some good ideas and some nice features aswell, there was some bland areas that could be reworked or added some new ideas and all, I think my most issues was that the "BUTTONS" were too small maybe you can make some larger buttons somehow. slso the items were plenty and there was lots of it, but you should also add more differant styles especially with the "HAIR" these are just some ideas that can improve and make this a much better game entry. So not to make the review too long I will end it here shortly So with this flash it was actually pretty good, I liked the effort you put forward on this but there are still a few more things here and there that could make it even better, now ofcourse there was some improvments that could make it much better i suggested some ideas below, but for what it is you presented a good flash with an entertaining and replay value, So good luck on anything else you have planned.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
What does need some work is some various ideas and basic fixes, they may be small edits to the game but they will do some wonders in making the game have much more quality to it, allowing for more fun of a game. well i may have a few or just one or two ideas and opinions that could help and improve on this, so dont take them too lightly as they are there to help you. make the buttons larger,You can add more scene like backrounds not just the color based ones.

[Animated Dress Up Game]

Another cool dress-up game you have here.

Now as i get into this game entry and review alot of things come to mind, some ill suggest some thoughts and ideas later in the review, but i must say that i was pretty impressed with what you did have and some effort does show in this and its the effort you put into it inwich i liked, So it does have potential to be even better in the future with updates and such. Alright so not a bad game here for being a dress up and all, the "SIZE" was notbad eiether all though it was slightly larger then most but i guess that all depends on the game, i think you have done a superb job though, I must say i was pretty impressed with this piece as you have added some interesting stuff that make it all complete, i really like the click and add on prop that was nice, you added alot of stuff, but maybe adding some more creative items and such would be a plus. anyways good game you have here. SO you have a Good game here, It was a pretty good fun and i found it delightful and randomly amusing, You do have an idea oh how to make some decent games, I have also suggested some improvment ideas below. but do try and put some of the ideas in effect as they will only make things better, But overall this was a fun game, and you seem to have it down.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would love to see you make more of this, you ahve most of the style doen and the idea really comes across as a great game, Perhaps some advice inwich you can Utilise Ideas and fearures more better, it didnt really lack much but i have an idea or two here that may or may not help, but for the most of this, it was alright. Alright not a bad game, lots to see and do with this one, the one thing it could do with more of is some more creative items, random props and such, just some things to think about, other then that this was notbad.

enciel responds:

thanks for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :) will try my best to improve on my next submissions as well :D

[Pokémon:The first mission]

Old yet fun game

Alright you have some good ideas here and i like the concept of this whole thing, There was no real Lackluster points or anything really lacking, Infact there was not anything unnecessarily done on here, infact once again, This was a Professional meathod, and this can really thrive from your ideas, so i was pretty impressed with this. I like this for the small file size, now i also like tis because its some of the older games that really had some style to it, and this while not the greatest still shows why newgrounds was so great when it first started, but anyways good game kind of simple, could possibly use more user controll of weapons and such. so I really liked this game, it was amusing and had some differant styles of fun added to it so the extra effort does show, and I also like the creativity here it shows how the game plays and plays to the end giving some replay value, I hope to see some changes for the better and even see this get even more popular then it already is, i Enjoyed your presentation and look for more of your work soon. And once again great job on the effort here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You have a clever looking flash entry here, you really did seem to focus on some good visuals and decently flowed along here, and there was some decent interactivity with this, so its a good game submission, This has some good Potential to do even more in various areas thruout the flash, But i must say it was a Genuinely Decent ProjectJust needs some small tweaks. This could use a few upgrades like some more variaty in weapons, more kill points on the character, including more pokemon characters to kill.

[CATCH the TURDS]

odd but kinda interesting

So my Impression of this is that you have done good here you have something decent and interesting, Your Representation in this flash is, Swanky, and Positive, and thats what has allured me here, and i was taken back by how interesting this really is, so nice effort you have put fourward on this, and as i get more into the review ill give much more feedback on more possibilities. An odd game you have here, it was a simple idea and kind of silly but it was still intersting, this game was too simole but the size was soo short but i guess that was a good thing, but regardless a good time waster with this one, maybe a few upgrades could be done like some better graphics and more things to do within the game. So decent game here, I found this game to be fun and entertaining now ofcourse there are some things that can be made better and much more improved, With a few more adjustments and fixer ups it could be much better and even more popular with a larger group of people to enjoy, but anyways it was a decent flash, I really liked the effort you put in this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And so this is where i suggest a few ideas and improvments, cant always do that since some stuff is really good and right on tack, but with this one there was some good points and only a few points of suggestions for improvment, i have suggested a few ideas thruout the review including here, so just think about the ideas and just imrpve and make the weaker points stronger, in-turn commingout with an overall better outcime of an entry. maybe a few upgrades could be done like some better graphics and more things to do within the game.

[Ashley Journey]

Decen dress-up game

What are the right words, Swanky and Groovy come to mind, And here i am reviewing another one of these fantastic submissions, now dont get me wront there are some things that could use more effort and you could change some stuff, but for the most part i like what you got going on here. Its Loaded with fantastic elements, and hope to see more of the same soon. A fun dress-up game you have, it was simple and i like the click on an item and it snaps on that was pretty nifty, so i have seen and played alot of these games and they are prettyinteresting i like the effort you have been putting fourth some effort in this one with lots ofitems, backrounds and even some music so nice job on this one. as for improvment not sure since you covered all the basics. You have A fun flash game, some good positive results here, graphics could be better and there could be some extra effort on stuff, but overall it was pretty entertaining, Besides some little extras, could be Rejuvinated with some extra touces and ideas though. just some little things and cleaning up, but overall it was a pretty entertaining flash entry.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And so here I thought you had a good game here there was some slight fixes and upgrades you can put in, nothing to take away from your flash, Because it does have Potential So here are just a few Constructive tips to make things better. So Put in some of that effort and run with it. andlet it show its quality, younever know but you do have something good here. I would like to see more variaty, i know you have alot of stuff already but maybe making some more random and unique stuff like goofy and odd hats and gloves and whatnot, that would be a plus onthis one.

[[SG] Dress Up Shades Gang]

Too basic

This is Groovy, and Spectacular, you gave a Positive light on this, There wasnot much unnecessarily Negitive points either, You have pushed the ideas forward and have come up with something interesting, ultimately this can be even better, and i love how you made everything work and come alive, it was pretty entertaining for the most part. Theres alot of dress-up game more then i can count, but i do have to say it was "CUTE" with yours here but it was too "BLAND" aswell, needed more clothing and prop options, Posibly a larger view screen, even some "BACKROUNDS" would sufice, but this game was too bland and too basic and does need some upgrading, more style more items but most of all needs more effort on your part to make it jump out, even throw in some idea that are not in other dress-ups for something differant and unique. Entertaining flash game here, it had some nice options and features kept me interested and was not boring, all though there are still some improvments that can be made, But anyways with all that said this was a pretty decent flash again had all the elements thats makes up something good and amusing so i was pleased with this, so props to you on something decent here, hope to see improvments soon, as this has lots of potential, untill then good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
There are various ways you can make this better i have even suggested a few ideas, Some stuff can be Utilised better of you should utilise new ideas to the best that you can, Focus on the strong points weak points of the game so that there is more balance throughout it, So i suggest a few ideas and tips here hoping that it will only make things better for your game, So try some or all of the tips and ideas out, and let your flash shine even more. Adding more items and clothing choices would be first on mind a canvus and then adding some backround choices would be a big change for the better.