This was interesting
~~REVIEW~~
Now this was pretty neat and differant at the sametime, that odd voice thing gave it a somewhat unique feel to it, gave it some style and depth to it which really makes it comeout, so nice job there, Now the building up on this was very impressive, it really gets you into this and wanting it to really just keep going so that part i really enjoyed that, Also very good on getting this to flow as it did from the start to finish and just flows right on through, i did enjoy this. so keep up the awsome work.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think the odd voice could be less used, its good to have but just too much is not needed.