XwaynecoltX's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Walking in the park]

Intersting

~~REVIEW~~
well this isnt much just a loop and thats fine with me, but i still think you should add more to the loop itself, its a simple beat and needs more {UMP} to it, some deeper sounding instraments maybe some {PIANO} in there, but does need some more to it, its just too short too small too bland so making it longer and with much more {DEPH} to it would be interesting to take that loop and just stretch it with a mix of other variaty stuff, anyways nice job and good luck on any future endevours.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
could be longer have more depth and much more variaty needs abit of UMP to it

[Altered Beast: Stage 1-F]

Decent but kinda slow

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm notbad again with the guitar sounds, if you listen closley you can hear some ringing from the strings, now this was a much more {SLOWER} piece, you should try and speed it up, and again this one had that low quality like i was referring to in the other guitar solo, so some suggestions of improvment would be, Add more mix to the sounds and figure out that ringing tone, also speeding up the rythem aswell, now these are just a few ideas, eventhough this is an older audio track maybe you could still update, it anyways good stuff here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more mix to the sounds and figure out that ringing tone, also speeding up the rythem aswell

[Energy - seperate Rhodes 1]

Kinda slow

~~REVIEW~~
hmmm well its not bad but was still kind of slow, and there could be areas where you do {DEEPIN} in maybe adding some drumbs nothing to take away from the piano or anything but still something that can be presented to give the short tune more depth and longer sounding also not so dull with the straight forward feel but adding some slight variaty you can give it more quality and in general more people will be more interested, and son on, these are just some ideas that could make it much better

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some extra instraments and more variaty would be interesting

[-:YRX:- Gods Fist]

Awsome variaty on this one

~~REVIEW~~
Now this was something differant, as it was not the same as others but changes up and shows how you gave this some good variaty to it, and that was neat cause it changes even the theme style, so again didnt have the same straight forward style but has variaty and thats what i really liked about it, good sounds too, You gave it like a {CLIFF-HANGAR} were something was always happing in a very explosive music thing, so awsome job in that sense, Love the variaty of differant sounds and such and you used them well with lots of effort and such, i was very impressed, so keep up the awsome sounds.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would ad even more variaty then you already have it will push it over that edge, besides that its almost perfect.

YouriX responds:

Thanks! I guess i'll try to be diffrint in a diffrint way. Inception much? ;P

[Energy - seperate Rhodes 1+2]

Its like the last one

~~REVIEW~~
This sorta sounded like the last once except you added some lighter {KEY-STROKES} on the piano wich was nice but it doesnt change it up much, it does give a nice pleasent feel more the the prevous one, but still needs that {VARIATY} something with other unique sounding instraments just a little anyways, now i could see this being used in a very slow and pleasent flash, so its actually ok, so improvmenst as suggested would be to add abit more variaty some differant sounds adding some depth, anyways notbad at all with this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add abit more variaty some differant sounds adding some depth

[Club Basic Loop]

Love the fast beat on this

~~REVIEW~~
ok so now this has a fast beat and while it is just a {LOOP} i feel you could have done alot more with this like making it into a fast beat dance mix or something along them lines, the loop is too short even for the loop it needs more ump and more over the edge kind of stuff, but you do have a good start with this just make it longer more in depth and with alot of dance feel, its great stuff dont get me wrong but can be even better with a longer feel and more dance to it, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it into a more fast dance mix it has the potential,

[SP - Generic Dance Song 3 V4]

Nice beat

~~REVIEW~~
Nice tune here it has a very {UP-BEAT} feel and keeps you going so in away it is like the tittle reminds us, Dance could be a bit more faster and have it change up with even more differant mixxes aswell, but really for the mostpart its fast and upbeat, Must have been fun working on this, and i could really see this in maybe a flash someday yes ofcourse on that note, and now to Improve, well it already has the cheery and faster tempo, but like i was saying mix up the tempo also, so that it doesnt remain the same feel but picks up and drops down, just a lil tip though, anyways decent track.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned some faster and slower beats differant ones then you already have would be nice.

[Energy - seperate Rhodes 2]

Kinda soft

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad just another little loop, its not a bad thing, but this could have been made into something more, kind of like a tune or song, the little {CHIMES} are cute and nifty but you should think about, adding more chimes maybe some other instraments that are simular and even in this case a {HARMONICA} would be great, sounds simular to the chimes, just a few tips there and it would greatly improve on things, as for the chimes you have, notbad at all, so improving would be a plus as you do have something here, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
as suggested, some new sounds being added in on this would be great all explained on this

[a METAL Happy Birthday Song]

Distorted

~~REVIEW~~
Well its ok, but the happy birthday theme is very distorted there is some {STATIC} in the backround not sure what it its coming from, could be too close of a recording, or maybe a bad mic, and whatever it is, it really distorts the tune, you should clear it up because it makes the quality abit on the low side, seems like you do have something there, but that distortion and or static is killing this track so look-into it and maybe you can clear it up for a better sounding tune, anyways good luck on your next piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well as mentioned above the static is hurting the sound, clear it up make it abit better quality in that aspect

[Titbread - Trip Hop Delay1987]

This was differant

~~REVIEW~~
So this was differant, i like all the differant sounds and even {SOUND/FX} the deeper sounds are pretty good in this and this has a good and dark feel to it wich is nice, but it does seem to be missing something maybe because its so short as a loop, but still is pretty entertaining, so as to improve on something like this, such as, making more of a {TUNE} out of what you do have since you do have good few sounds of this, but anyways nice job and good loop just put more effort into this and make it even much better,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As suggested above, some changes could be made to make it even better.