XwaynecoltX's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Grim Grinning Ghosts (Rem]

Differant but i like it

~~REVIEW~~
Nice work with this one you have manged to present something such as a dark scary theme but then it changes off into something else like dancing or something i thought that was a nice touch, and the {LAUGHING-VOICES} sounded right on with everything else so nice touch on that, it made for some good uniqueness to an already great piece so awsome job there all around.the beat was cool kinda changes up from dark to kinda funny in a sense but that was just a slight interesting aspect of it so nice job all around once again.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Improvments? i would actually leave it alone but if anything have more of that change and variaty like from a dark feel to a disco like dance feel, if you can add other mixtures throughout the song that would be another awsome aspect of it all

[Mer Vide 2]

Too short

~~REVIEW~~
So this was a loop but it was still short, could use it as a sound/fx but seems like you coulod have done alot more with this maybe some sorta changing but i think you could stretch it somewhat more, more into a song or tune, and with the sounds you do have you could probably pull i off but you will need more variaty more differant {INDTRAMENTS} and even other sound/fx sounds and stuff like that , that will make it into something better, but anyways it is ok for the sound/fx alone.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As stated above needs more changing and improving stretch it into a song more variaty of instraments

[spooky tech-step #2]

Could have more depth to it

~~REVIEW~~
So this was very short and seemed much more like a loop then anything else now ofcourse thats what it is, now im thinking this could use much more depth to it, so adding abit more to it making it longer and just more mixes of music type of stuff would work abit better, well just a few ideas to stretch it out abit, i like it for the time it is just needs abit more in there, so anyways notbad and good luck on your next entry.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So as explained ad more depth and make it longer, some new mixes in there wouldnt hurt.

[Jzzz Tryout]

Kinda jazzy sounding

~~REVIEW~~
So this was differant, and seems like you were going for that "JAZZ" feel, it had abit of that but sometimes it changes up to something else, cant put my finger on it but just has a differant feel, i would really try and spruce it up more though, with more jazzy instraments, think of more stuff and emotion from like new orleans feel to it, and that, but anyways its a good start just has a hard time getting to what you want, and dont get me wrong it does, just needs more of it, so good luck on the next try.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As explained above.

[ParagonX9 vs KFNX - The Legend]

Decent

~~REVIEW~~
Now this seems to be one of your earlier tracks, well its your first, and while its not your best and i see you made some mixes from it, its alright but i would have to say the mixes were a tad better, now dont get me wrong this was pretty good for your first works, it could be improved, like what you did with the mixes and all, has a nice feel and with abit more over the edge stuff it will be brilliant, so on that part of things its pretty decent, i will have to checkout more of your tracks, for now, good luck on any new stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You have already improved on this with the mixes so im ok with that.

[Saigon]

This was original

~~REVIEW~~
Hmmm ok so this was something interesting, kinda original, but still with somewhat of a differant feel, so in that aspect of things its sorta unique, i did however think you could have made it more unique and give it some deeper bases sounds, but i must say it was pretty original, and like i said differant, So if i was to help and think of new ideas for this to be better it would be what i said before, adding some deeper bases sounds would really do the trick i think, just a thought anyways, but other then that its pretty good stuff, so keep up the good tracks.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Like said before, some more deeper and uniquer sounds more deeper base so it has a more heavy feel, in turn making it abit more unique.

[super happy dancesu]

Fix the sound

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so i was expecting something pretty good here, but you cant {HEAR} anything the {VOLUME} is way too low, you really cant hear anything, and i had the volume way up at the top level, so it does sound like you were trying to record just straight from the tv or something, it could also be the {MIC} maybe better quality of equipment, and a better way of recording stuff, possibly getting a soundbit would be another choice, these are just a few ideas to think about if you do ever decide to fix and improve on this, but regardless good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
a number of things i suggested above like, better equipment, better ways of recording and maybe a search from the net for soundbits would be nice.

[Dingo]

Could be longer with more variaty

~~REVIEW~~
Now here we go again, i like your work but most of it sounds too soft and they are more like {LOOPS} then anything else, you could change that by mixing up the sounds with abit of variaty and differant backround sounds, this track is notbad, and abit better then the drums one, just would love to see abit more variaty as it gets too {REPETITIVE} sojust some ideas, but for sure make it longer if you can, this was ok, i kinda like the beat you got going with it, again just needs more to it, so work on those things mentioned and it will be fine and dandy, ok so longer versions seem to work better thats another thing to work on.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make this longer ad more of a variaty of sounds even in the backround and should be all good.

[Dadoo]

It can be longer

~~REVIEW~~
So this is actually not a bad {LOOP} and thats basicly what it is, just a loop, now i can see this getting better though, as the first thing i noticed is its too {SHORT} so ad more mixes of drums and such, the next thing i noticed was it was too {SOFT} so raise up the base abit give it that real drum feel, so more louder and deep feel to it so its not so soft, those were the main points of fixing this up, but for the mostpart i liked it so longer and make it deeper sounding is what i get from it. anyways good luck on your next audio release.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make the drums sound deeper, and louder, and also add more content making it longer.

[_Revolution_]

Nice sounds

~~REVIEW~~
This has a very {RETRO} feel to it kinda like i was listening to something from the 70's or even 80's, the drums were a nice touch in this piece i think you should actually add more of the drums but with a higher bass sound. and adding some more variaty of instraments wouldnt hurt either, i like this track you have here its a nifty piece and i suggest working with it more and as mentioned give it more of that deep feel, more drums and more variaty from other uniquer instraments even some backround effects would be another nice addition, so anyways nice piece, i look forward to more of your work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
adding some more variaty of instraments wouldnt hurt either, also more of the drums with more of a deeper bass in there, And more variaty from other uniquer instraments even some backround effects would be another nice addition

Birdinator99 responds:

Thanks for the input, but this track isn't going anywhere haha