XwaynecoltX's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Society's Reflection (Jeffaro)]

Decent

~~REVIEW~~
Hmmm well this was abit differant, i do love how it starts off though, and does have a sorta {BUILD-UP} kinda rough around the edges, the {VOCALS} were ok but thought it could be abit more sharper and clear, the whole clip seems to have a scratchyness to it, you may want to add abit more quality in on that aspect of stuff, but other then that this was an ok piece and i thought it could be better but was ok with me regardless, so nice job overall.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some clarity and quality check could be worked on

~X~

[Eternal Pain (Jeffaro)]

It was interesting

~~REVIEW~~
ok so this was pretty decent, i thought maybe as a helpfull tip maybe make the {GUITARS} somewhat louder and a more focus sound, the drums were ok atleast i think that was some drums i thought i heard in there, the best parts of this track were the guitars and almost seems if you get some guitar solos in there, so nice job on that stuff, i just feel this was abit on the soft side with the guitars and would like a deeper and louder feel, other then that this was pretty good, good luck on anything new comming up, ill keep my eyes/ears open

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
needs a louder base or volume sound something though

~X~

[Tetris Remix (Collab)]

Fantastic

~~REVIEW~~
And like i love tetris so i saved this one for future use, and because its pretty awsome, i like how its tetris but does sound somewhat differant so props to you on that, This has a unique sound so i really like this, hell i might even play this while playing the tetris from facebook haha, anyways ways this could be better or improved to be honest i thing you did it justice as is so i would leave this one be, its perfect in my opinion, so awsome job glad i had a chance to hear it and save it,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Perfect

~X~

Step responds:

Haha thanks. This was a collaboration I did with my cousin. We were quite proud of it when we made it, although right now if I had to make a Tetris Remix I'd make a much better one, haha xP.

Thanks a lot for the review!

[All Hail Windows!]

Its differant

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm ok this was notbad, it was differant, and out of the sounds from windows xp thats interesting guess i never really noticed before, this was an ok tune but i have to say there was not much too it, its ok but would have been nice to see more {POP} in there, i do like the ending thats the sound i do know haha, but really other then that i cant think of anything else for this, the onlything i could muck up would probably be its cute, anyways nice job, im getting there lol

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
It needs more pop more something but for what it is was pretty interesting.

~X~

Step responds:

That's because it's an old song :P. I agree that there really isn't much to it. A pretty simple beat and just some windows sounds layered on top of it.

But thanks for the helpful advice!

[Hill Top Cruise]

Nice piano

~~REVIEW~~
This was a good tune here starts off really good and fast paced, props to you on the {PIANO} very good quality, very sharp and clear and i was really enjoying this ones, not much of a gap at the end so you know where it starts and ends, its very good stuff, as for improving i honestly would leave this as is, its a good piece, so hope to hear more from you soon, untill next time good luck on anything new you got comming up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
It was good as is i wouldnt touch a thing.

~X~

Short-Factor responds:

Thank you, that was a nice review. Although you suggested it was perfect and yet gave it a 7..?

[Saturday Afternoon]

It was decent

~~REVIEW~~
This was nice, has a very great day type of feel, meaning not too hard allthough you do give it a nice almost intense build up wich then changes up quite abit from what it started with, theres alot of differant chchanges in this alot of {MIXTURE} wich is ok with me, just seems like there alot of stuff going everywhere, but really other then that i thought it was alright and liked it very much, anyways good tune here, i look forward to more from you soon,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
maybe not as intense of a build up but other then that it was alright.

~X~

ElectroHarbour responds:

Thanks very much for explaining what was wrong with the song. Yeah it does have a kind of intense build up, especially flattening the chill atmosphere.

[Hero Of The Machines]

Pleasent

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm this had an interesting {SOUND} starts off very good kinda reminds me of some {BATTLE-SCENE} thats about to start and such, like on distant field or something its very soothing aswell and has a small build up wich was ok with this one, i just found it to be very nice and pleasent. so if i could offer any tips of improving i think i would add some more deeper sounds towards the end, but other then that i thought it was alright with some nice effort on your end, anyways keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some deeper sounds in the tail end of the song would be nice.

~X~

XenonMB responds:

will keep that in mind, thanks for the review :)

[-Distant Seas-]

Prety decent

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm this was great i love the guitar and differant sounds in this one, there was a good amount of mixture in this piece, kinda reminded me of {ZELDA} somewhat, i do however wish you built it up more it had a more straight forward tempo, and needed a push there somewhere, so if anything you could improve on this it would probably be more build up and pushing it over the top, but besides that i liked the mixture of sounds and liked the guitar in there, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more push, more build up

~X~

Step responds:

That guitar is one of the most overused preset sounds that came with FL Studio ;D.

Again, I agree with you that this lacks any 'oomph' or a buildup. These songs are very old and I really didn't know what I was doing at the time. In fact, in this song I desperately wanted to add some drums but I didn't know how xD.

Thanks for the review. Going back to all these old songs sure is giving me nostalgia, haha.