XwaynecoltX's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Im Your Dj]

Could use abit more

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm well this was interesting the no sond moment was interesting then the {VOICE} of no dj was pretty interesting i thought at times it seemed too repetitive though, maybe you could lesson it or maybe as another helpfull tip you could have eaco one sound differant just an idea thought, the backround music was notbad either so all and all this was pretty decent and i thought it was pretty good while it could still use some improving other then that keep up the good work, so untill next time good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I meantioned above some repetitiveness, and some extra tidbits that could help on this

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[AB - Up To The Sky]

I love it

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm this starts off pretty good i like the {PIANO} and especially like how it {PICKS-UP} nice touch there, the piano playing is very clear and sharp, very welldone on this part, also great title as it has that feeling and the piano just gets better as it plays on, the tune is actually abit long but it kinda works well that way, you start mixing it up towards the middle, this is a really nice piece im adding this to my fave, but anyways great piece, i look forward to hearing more from you real soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
nothing i thought it was perfect.

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AsteroidBlues responds:

Thanks for rev, man ) I really appreciate that )
While i`m writing new stuff, u can hear some of my old stuff which is uploaded here already and some that i will upload in a matter of days )

[Polymorph]

Decent

~~REVIEW~~
So this was notbad, kinda neat actually starts of simple and pleasent, and has a good tone throughout the track very soft feel as it moves along, it is very just straight along so maybe giving it more of an over the top points like some deeper sounds some bass would push it abit more, something that would push it over though, but it does need something more there, but other then that it was pretty impressive, so try and making some new sounds in there along with some build up, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Good track just needs more something that will push it over the top, maybe some backround effects and some other mixes of differant sounds

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kohlirowe responds:

Hi, thanks very much for the feedback. Much appreciated.

[Mortex]

Pretyy good tune you have here

~~REVIEW~~
Oh this had some good beats and starts off freat with a really good build-up, and starts really {JAMMING} wich i really liked, its a very very kicking jamming jam here, i love the build up then you start adding some differant variaty into it and such, really good tune here, about halfway you start to change it up but not too much and that was ok it has its own mind kinda hehe, but anyways great stuff, it was a pretty good listen and i enjoyed it very much, i look forward to more from you real soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
In the end i thought it could use more of a bang not a calm down, just an idea though

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Fr34KC responds:

That was kinda what I was going for, I still don't like the cymbal though (but finding the right sound between low and high freq is a pretty time-consuming job to do) and I'm going to tweak around in this one for while since I'm not in a very creative mood (with all the exams going around) but for the "kicking jamming jam" there that's something I like about Maximus, it can really push your sound to the max.
I appreciate the thought, I'm certainly going to look into that (going out with a bang)
I just need some fresh ideas on how to put that into it (and at the same time erasing that ANNOYING click sound due to the side-chaining)

Thanks for your review =)

[Dizzy]

Nice tune

~~REVIEW~~
So i have not reviewed any audio in awhile especially yours, and i must say even though this is an older piece, it is still pretty good i thought, its more mainstream and doesnt offer much in {BUILD-UP} but does have a fast beat, wich is nice, it would have been nice to hear some build up to some power sounds and or instraments, just making it more interesting in that way, i like the keys in this though, and its pretty interesting if you ask me, so notbad work on this on, hope to hear more soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
needs more build up and more newer sounds and such.

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[Sentinel of the Mountain]

Decent guitar

~~REVIEW~~
oh this has a nice beat and tune here, great guitar, has a sorta {SPANISH} feel to it, the starting of it anyways, it goes off into some other variaty of tune thats cool sounding and more soothing and such, so i do like the variaty, i especially like the {GUITAR} it was abit differant sounding then other guitars, so props to you and the clarity was pretty good on this, so overall i was very impressed with this, the middle to end could have more of the guitar but other then that it was pretty good stuff, keep up the good audio tracks.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More of the guitar throughout the track would be a good direction.

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masterjiji responds:

DEALBREAKER INCOMING
It's a bass.

[Quantiy Mass Theory]

Decent tune

~~REVIEW~~
hmm well this was something differant it has some good sounds here and seems to go well and {FLOW} well together, and seems to be ok, i thought it was alright, the sound qiality is pretty good though but again like the others it would be nice to get some {BUILD-UP} in it and maybe some really good endeing bang or something like that, but from what this was heard it was pretty good solid and good flowing with some good quality to it, very nice indeed, so as to improve, more build up and such.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
as mentioned above, some more build up would be key

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BLack32Out responds:

K thanks

[shadow dark touches]

Needs some quality on sound

~~REVIEW~~
hmm ok so understanding its just a {LOOP} thats cool, but there seems to be alot of distortion that could be cleaned up, infact also adding some {VARIATY} to it with other sounds and instraments, could make it into a somewhat longer loop and that would actually be ok aswell, but i think from this loop the most you could fix up is the {QUALITY} of it as it doeas sound distorted and takes away from what is there and would be nice to hear it in a more clear and sharper sound, so nice job on the effort good luck on anything new you have.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Needs some quality and cleaning up the distortion would greatly help.

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NekoMika responds:

Thank you, one of the first pieces I made on my really old comp when I still had FL Studio 8, don't have it on current comp. I appreciate the insight and helpful tips though. I think I have gotten a better ear since then as well so if I ever made another piece in FL Studio 8 demo, it would probably sound a whole lot better than this did then.

Thanks for the review.

[Light Moon Requiem -Vgc-]

Could be louder

~~REVIEW~~
hmm well this one was somewhat differant, i liked it, starts off too {SLOW} but you did give it a nice feel and you had lots of {VARIATY} wich was the good part about it, i still think its abit on the soft side you have to bring up the volume somewhat, but i do like the variaty of it all, and with the {GUITAR} it really mixes in well, has that {RENISAUNCE} feel, but anyways i liked it and things you could improve on this might be louder volume, and more edg more build up if you will, other then that its notbad.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
needs to be louder with volume control, and could also have some more build-up

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[Beverly Hills Cop ~Remix~]

Another decent piece

~~REVIEW~~
haha ok so this really takes me back with this movie theme and all, infact it was just on the other day, but anyways great start it really gives you that {FEEL} that the movie is playing and such later on in the track you do change it up with the softer {KEYS} wich is ok cause anytime you make a remix of something you should always add in your own style wich you have done here just a lil, but besides that its pretty impressive and i really enjoyed this really took me back lol, anyways once again nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
For this i wouldnt touch it, but if i had too i would try and make it more my own style keep the theme but add in more variaty of your own stuff.

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Step responds:

Thanks! Actually, I never really watched the movie. I just heard the theme and I liked it so I tried to remix it, lol. I agree with you totally that remixes are best when they have your own style incorporated in them, but at the time I just made it similar to original theme...

Anyway I appreciate the review! You're slowly getting closer to my better songs :P.