XwaynecoltX's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Into The Darkness-Metaljo]

Pretty decent

~~REVIEW~~
ohmy this is a pleasent tune, now this was the type of style i was probably wanting to hear from you atleast once or twice, this is a more softer feel of your style and thats ok, i even like some of the backround effects and that was a nice touch making this abit more, then we go into some of the hard stuff, really neat stuff here on this piece, other then that it was alright, pretty good if you ask me, as for some improving, not so sure it was decent all the way around.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe more focus on the softer touch here, the hard stuff is pretty good, but i did enjoy what you did with the softer touch, also thowing in more backround effects would be nice aswell.

Metaljonus responds:

thanks dude!

[ChaozFantasy-Metaljonus]

Very impressed with this one

~~REVIEW~~
Oh very nice with this one, now here you really push the build up, and the first few seconds of this track it has a unique sound, not sure what that was but would have been nice to have more focus on that aswell, but anyways the quality on this is top notch i can see and understand why this one got front paged so awsome job on that part of stuff, the sad part for me was that this was just a tad short, would have liked a longer version, cause you got some good quality playing with this one, love the guitar on this one, gonna add this one as a fave.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So great quality here, great guitar great jamming music with this one, only issue i found lacking was that it was too short, if anything else i loved the build up and would even suggest doing something more with the opening sounds that were kind of unique.

Metaljonus responds:

Thanks dude! This is the actual of the length of the song I was paying tribute too I could have went off and made it my own but I wanted to stay true to all of the fanboys on this site so I did hehe. you rock!

[Eclipse(demo)]

Fantastic

~~REVIEW~~
This is actually very beatifull, very pleasent, and you dont have much of a build up on this if there is any build up at all, its really slow, i do like the slow touch to this as it does give it a pleasent feel, but seems like it does need a push with some changes here and there on stuff, its pretty good for the most part though, and i came to enjoy this piece, so notbad at all, so a few improving tips might be, some tempo changes and maybe even some deeper beats some change up in the middle.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So i like the pleasent feel, of this it was pretty good, but at the sametime, it needed something more pleasent sounding is fine but needs a push maybe some change in tempo, but what i think it lacks the most is some better build up. anyways good job.

[Flying in the rain - Shen RMX]

Pretty impressive

~~REVIEW~~
oh this was really nice and had some nice vocals, kinda sounds familuar, but the voice was still pretty good i thought, the mausic itself was pretty good i thought, but the vocals really present this piece very well, and just allow the song to flow with ease and beaty, so great job all around on this one, very welldone on this piece, if i can suggest anything, maybe allow the vocals to shine more with abit of volume change up in the backrounds, other then that this was pretty good, i thought.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So awsome tune here very pleasing and settling, could have more focus on the vocals, but other then that this was a good qaulity, and i was really pleased with this from start too finish.

[Newgrounds Rumble BGM2]

pleasent and neat battle here

~~REVIEW~~
A great piece here and it just amazes me how with the music you can bring out a battle and more then that but a story and it tells it in the music and thats what this was, the "PIANO" is great and is like a battle but wish therewas more edge and battle to it more on the drums i suppose but for the mostpart this was pretty fantastic i thought, so improving on an already great piece is just too hard, but as suggested some more on the drums for more of the boss battle.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So while this was a pretty good piece i thought and does represent the battle seems like it could have used more of the battle more on drums might push that forward, anyways great stuff here hope to see more of your work soon.

[FFIVIntothedarkness-Metaljonus]

I liked it

~~REVIEW~~
Final fantasy is pretty cool, and i do see the or i mean hear the resemblance was pretty good, at first the starting of the tune kinda reminded me of one "LUIGIS MANSION"only cause it has that scary like feel, so you did get that portion of pretty good the rest does sound like the final fantasy series and what not, anyways a good tune here, very final fantasy, as for improving, some tempo changes more then what youhad but really not needed at all.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So as mentioned above, nice final fantasy themes here, and some temp changes here and there but nothing too drastic, other then that this was right on.

[Nana's Song-Metaljonus]

Pretty decent once again

~~REVIEW~~
ok cool another cool track this almost sounds like some of the megaman ones you have, i must admitt though its nice to see your work front pages and congrats on that, and you should be proud of the score its pretty good for the track you released here, in myhonest oppinion this is not your best and you still won so thats one reason to be proud, so nice job there, i like this track but like the other one i reviewed its need some of that harder tunes you can bring in, anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
First of all congrats on the front page, well worth it with this piece, this was pretty smoothall the way through, onlything on this i thought could be somewhat better would possibly be to add some of the harder tones just a tad here and there, anyways nice job once again.

Metaljonus responds:

Thanks dude! but this track is for my grandma who passed away when I wrote it. you may not think its my best but I put alot of emotion into it and think it is pretty good. I will probably go back and remix it to make it sound fuller but I got to find the session first haha. Thanks for the review.

[MegaManWindMan-Metaljonus]

Nice work

~~REVIEW~~
Hheh i dont know why but the mega man takes seem to remind me so much of the sonic takes from the game, maybe thats because i was more playing sonic games back in the day, but i must say i like this piece of yours aswell and this one is not as hard sounding as the others but really flows with the theme you have in mind, so that i was pretty stoked about, now i do have a likeing for your tunes and like that some are abit differant then others, anyways another nice piece here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As for improving in on this one, i like the smooth flowing of it already. so i wouldnt touch it, but knowing me i always come up with one tip or two, and i suppose for this you could always throw in some harder soundsbut not alot just here and there.

[Canon (Soft-trance remix)]

Pleasent

~~REVIEW~~
Fantastic outcome on this, it was brilliant from the start starting off soft and just flowing through to the end, so this gave me a very soothing and pleasent feel from start to finish, the keyboard was the focus it seemed here and you played it well, you didnt go too hard but you made do with it and it turned into a great soothing piece, so awsome job on this and i was very pleased with this and the outcome, as to make this better? i think its ok, but if anything maybe some changes in tempo here and there just to give it something differant.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some tempo changes could be placed but as is, its great and pleasent sounding, nice work indeed.

[Newgrounds poop]

Needs more focus

~~REVIEW~~
Haha well i must say this is "DIFFERANT" has alot of differant sounds, and alot of variaty maybe too much variaty in this one, it has alot of wacky and odd sounds in this one, and its on that loop so you get all these weird and strange loops, i do like the bebop bop at the starting of it, im thinking you were just having some fun with this and thats ok too, but maybe for a more serous note you can focus on one or two sounds and go with it, anyways nice effort.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Toomany differant sounds, needs more focus on one or two of them for a more song like theme.