Could be improved
~~REVIEW~~
hmm ok so this is not bad sounding but as soon as this starts you can {HEAR} the scratchyness of it all and such, and there could be abit more {QUALITY} thru-out it, also another tid bit might to make it longer then just a little loop, but other then those tips mentioned i would say its ok with me.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
a few things suggested, more quality, less scratchy and make it longer more like a song.
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