Make it longer
~~REVIEW~~
This was more of a loop more then anything else, its notbad, but its way too short, ad more stuf and instraments just for the extra measure, it will also give it more depth and style, just an idea or two on how this could be much better, anyways good loop hope to see more of your work sometime soon.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
ad more stuf and make it abit longer give it more depth.
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