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[A Merry Little Christmas]

Pleasent

~~REVIEW~~
hmmm nice and pleasent with this little track and love the christmas feel or holiday feel for that matter, it starts off really soft, and while that is ok it was just too soft sounding at the start, so it has a nice build-up wich is very pleasent, and gets better as you play, in the end its very delightfull and again pleaent to hear, so you did a fantastic job on bringing this together.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would like to hear a faster build up, and maybe not as soft sounding in the opening seconds, just a thought though.

[Jazz Thugs]

A short loop

~~REVIEW~~
hmm ok so this was interesting allthough its very short so i suppose it could be more of loop for sound.fx, while thats ok maybe you could work on it abit more adding some new stuff in there and making it more into something more then a loop or atleast a longer loop of sorts, while these are just some helpful ideas maybe it could be longer more backround sounds and more depth to it, so with all that said there wasent much to it but it was ok.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
could be longer more backround sounds and more depth to it

[Release Me (FX-82 PLUS Remix)]

Nice track here, i liked it

~~REVIEW~~
hmm ok so this one is notbad, it has good "QUALITY" to it and you do mix it up abit its very sharp thats something i always look for with these pieces, so nice job there, and i do hear some other sounds in there wich is cool and really comesout in this track and seems to all come together, now as for improving points, im not too sure, as this seems pretty solid if you ask me, anyways great stuff here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
i think this is just right as is, i woulding take away or add anything, good job.

delibrete responds:

Hey thanks man :) I always love comment and critic.

Well this is my first remix, personally I'm not overly happy with the result (I know it could be a whole lot better) but I'm still learning about making electronic music.

I'm planning on releasing a whole album of stuff, some remixes and some original (going to explore more dubstep). Hopefully my next track will have a better outcome.

Thank you for your input it's greatly appreciate :)

[The Duel]

Decent but could use more sounds

~~REVIEW~~
hmm so this is notbad, has a slow build up maybe too repettitive for me, i think in the repettitive part of of it you should mix in differant sounds even some backround effects would work here, just an idea, just seems with the slow build up its just too slow in my opinion ofcorse, but other then that i thought it was an ok piece here, so while that is said you could add other instraent sounds.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the build up was too slow needs more sounds and mixes in there

[Ericho's Voice Acting]

Voice presentation

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm ok so this was interesting your voice is differant from what i thought it might sound like, its not so kiddish, so as a voicer its notbad, and i could see it being used in future flashes, only one issue i found with this, you talk too fast at times, and sometimes its too fast to understand, so you should have pauses here and there in between games and such, but other then that this is pretty good for showing people your voice.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned have some pauses so its not so fast speaking or monotone.

[What ewe promised]

Very impressed

~~REVIEW~~
now this was a great piece infact this one is going into my faves list i love everything about this one, the guitar the vocals were fantastic aswell, i love the solo with the guitar even, now this would have been even better with more vocals as it was pretty good, and no real issues except maybe it could be longer with more vocals, but really other then that it was pretty good stuff, hope to hear more from you soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add a longer vocal to it,

Bunk420 responds:

Thank man! I really appreciate it. Didn't think this turn unfinished would really get a good review. I will as soon as I get moved into my new place get this one on top of getting finished.

[YuYu Metal]

Cool track

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad at all on this one, had a sorta "FINAL-FANTASY" feel, and i love how you had one part at a tempo then really change it up in another change up is awsome and the faster tempo was pretty good if you ask me, the "QUALITY" could have been better, more clearer sounds, maybe it was a mic issue but other then that this was pretty impressive very fast paced just like i like, anyways nice work keep it up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You had a change up from fast to faster i think you should add more of that, or even a few parts that build up aswell.

rtnario responds:

I hear the quality (after all, it's been five years) XD Thanks for the review!

[Strykjärn - Svälj Din Stolthet]

Great guitar

~~REVIEW~~
ok so i love the guitar on this, and it plays right away very fast and intense, i dont think i have heard you before but, this track was pretty good and seems well put together as each part seems to flow into eachother the guitar is very nicley done so props to you on that aspect of things, even some of the backround feel was pretty cool, now as any suggestion of making it better, well vocals ofcourse but i understasnd you had a time issue, anyways great stuff here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
adding some vocals would be great with this one.

[Punishment Fits]

Decent

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm this was interesting and it does show some good effort on your part the "VOCALS" could use some fine tunning but thats just with time, but for the most part you have it down, and you did bring it together, i love the music part of it aswell especially at the start allthough seemed abit slow maybe speed up the begenning of it just a bit, so with all that and suggested its was notbad, but could use more effort.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the beginning was a bit slow speed it up abit, also vocals are great here on this but could be fine tuned

[Eternal Memories at Midnight]

Too low sounding

~~REVIEW~~
Now i did like the soft feel of this but like another one i think this was just too low sounding, now if thats the intent i understand but i think you should have mixed up the volume sounds, so that it comes and goes or even have build up in it, But regardless of all that this was still a nice and nifty piece you made, just too low but like i said could mix things up, but anyways untill next time good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
About low sounding i think you should have mixed up the volume sounds, so that it comes and goes or even have build up in it,

~X~

ObsidianSnow responds:

In terms of volume, it's too low because of an export problem I had back when I was using Reason 2.0. I've since upgraded, and no longer have this issue.

In terms of the flow, I agree. It could use a little more diversity. I'm not thinking I'll go back and mess with this one any more, though - this was written years ago. I might still use the theme somewhere in a different piece somewhere down the road, but we'll see.

In any case, I appreciate your constructive criticism, so thank you!