Cool something new
I like this, the audio in the backround is really cool, and with the music you got going you really bring a real dynamic touch to it with lots of variaty and good emotion throughout this, seems like you really put the time and effort into this one, so that was really nice and good effort, the tune is deep and dark and has a rough touch but i think thats what makes it great, as for improving maybe you can have some sort of build up while still keeping the variaty and mix you do have.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more build up, and more of the audio voice in the backround thruout the tune aswell.