XwaynecoltX's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Aaah! Hot Sludge!]

Too short

~~REVIEW~~
So this one was a "LOOP" clearly but i think it could have been much better the last one you made was much more indepth and quality, now this being a loop and all i thought you could have pushed it like you have in the past, some suggestions might be, more differant sounds differant after effects, and so on, the quality could have been abit more clearer aswell, but besides that i rather enjoyed this piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more clearer sounding guitar would be nice, also some suggestions might be, more differant sounds differant after effects

[phaser]

Very nice

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so first off this is alot better then some of your other shorter stuff, you pushed the quality on this one, wich really shows and here with this one its all very well together and plays right along into the next tune, now while this is not the best scoring of tracks you still presented us with a good tune and i like that one so nice job on this track, as for improving not much but explained more below

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
i think its fine as is, now i like this for the slow feel but some parts you can pick up to throw people off abit and in turn giving it something differant for the listeners.

[Snugglebunny]

Keep up the decent music

~~REVIEW~~
This had a scary feel to it but thats what i liked about it, you should think about adding differant mixes in there a differant instrument, maybe some scary wind chimes or something just an idea but it might help, but it was still neat stuff, i love scary dark tunes like you have here just needs abit more "DARKNESS" to it, anyways nice job here, cant wait for more stuff especially if its dark like this one, anyways good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
needs more darkness maybe some sorta windchimes to give like a ghost feel

[Stride (Mans0n)]

Needs more edge

~~REVIEW~~
ok so this was pretty good i thought but it does tend to get abit repetitive, maybe you could {SEPERATE} it somewhat or even add a {MIX} in it as it did have a repetitive feel and such, it needed a more {PUSH} to it and needed more of that {EDGE} that could really bring it forward, but for the mostpart i thought it was alright and liked it but again needed that push. anyways hope to hear more from you soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned above it could use more {VARIATION} and more {PUSH} to it.

[Japan Street Loop +Bass]

its ok

~~REVIEW~~
Well this one was the same as the last one you did, i may have noticed abit more faster tune but still not by much, but like the other one, this needs variaty of differant sounds and instramenst even some sound/fx would help, also making it longer would be a plus, but again like i mentioned in the other one, this is a loop i know, but still could use that extra touch, anyways hope to see an update someday with some of the changes anyways good luck in anything new you have got going.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
needs to be longer and needs new sounds new instraments and such

[Japan Street Loop]

Also too short

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm this one is ok, but its way too short, i know its a {LOOP} but still seems like it should be longer and its still way too short in variaty you could add a number of sounds and other sound/fx aswell as some other and new including {UNIQUE} instrament sounds, this would give that variaty, to it and then also making it longer would just give you better results, anyways nice job hope to hear more from you soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some more variaty, and new sounds could make this longer

[Ravey Loop Thing]

Too short

~~REVIEW~~
Ok i guess this could be a "LOOP" more then a track, but still it seems way too short even for nineteen kb, so maybe you want to add abit more to it, more longer sounds just give it abit more depth and such so its not so bland of a loop, well good luck in improving on this, it would be nice to see an update of this. I do understand this one is abit older of a loop, but still with all that said it needs more depth.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
way too short could be longer with abit of depth

[You Do It To Yourself]

Feels sad

~~REVIEW~~
This was nice has a good steady feel and keeps going that way for abit, which is nice, thats what kept me interested, Now it was somewhat hard with what was sang and all but maybe that was the music and lyirics not being matched up exactly, You gave this a good beat and it has a sorta {SAD} feel to it all and such, but i suppose thats the sort of emotion you wanted, but in anycase its a pretty decent piece and i really enjoyed it, maybe you can add more of that but this is an older audio track anyways i like it, keep up the good music.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I had suggested some more sad emotion in there you already have some of that more of it wouldnt hurt either.

[Flawed]

Vampire like

~~REVIEW~~
This was actually notbad at all, it has a very phantom of the opera, which i love, i like the piano feel and tunes you have in there, its a very slow tune but thats a good thing about it, now as to improve on something like this i would try and change up the tune abit not just with the piano, but add some other and new instraments, maybe mix in some lighter piano with some deeper and darker ones so theres abit of {MIX} in there, just an idea or two though, but regardless hope it helps to improve on this one, good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Try mixing in sounds from differant instraments, and such, even some lighter and deeper piano would work as well

[eat your rabbit]

Needs more stuff in it.

~~REVIEW~~
This was actually a really good audio track, almost perfect has a good rythem of beats and it was pleasent a good mix if i say so myself, thought you could have stretched it out abit better with more of the differant stuff but for the mostpart it was pretty good, so keep up the good track making, i wouldnt mind hearing more stuff like this, just wish you made it abit longer, maybe thats somethng to work on the next one, anyways good luck on the next entry. I did enjoy this, so keep making some good stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As stated could have used more stuff in there and a longer feel of it all