And here was something interesting
I like this one its interesting, the "VOCALS" are pretty good but one thing that bothered me is that it was just too short, you should have kept it going and made it longer with some depth, The drums and guitar on this was my fave and seemed to really work together while it was abit rough sounding at times it also had some smooth touches so that was good, but anyways nice effort here, some things could be better.
And those things that could be better would be some longer tune to it and more depth, more voals and just a longer version overall would sufice.