XwaynecoltX's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Barren Battlefield]

Decent

~~REVIEW~~
Hmmm this was something differant, has some flutes? and something else wich is kinda neat, and its more of a slow tune wich is ok also, i think it could be speeded up somewhat might have more quality t it, the sow parts just seem off at times, so my suggestion for improving on this one would be a faster tone for this one, but the flute sounds really good in this one, other then that its pretty good and i liked it so notbad at all.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I mentioned maybe speeding this up somewhat.

~X~

Step responds:

Haha yeah I think I used a French Horn here playing in certain parts with the piano.

I agree that it sounds very slow - I really sucked at making atmospheric songs at the time :P.

Thanks for reviewing!

[Tarantella in D Minor -Re]

Love this tune

~~REVIEW~~
Oh wow as soon as i started playing this i was wow this will be added to my faves list, this actually sounds something simular t ghost motel also wich i thought was pretty cool, but anyways to the tune at hand i love the flute and piano and the chime like feel it really made for a cute and quirky song. i like that and you didnt make it too long but just right, seemed very cute like, now normally i would suggest some changes but i really love this as is its perfect, anyways great work here, i will get to some of your other work soon,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Could be a little longer but to be honest i like it as is.

~X~

Step responds:

Heh, quirky. Never actually saw the song as quirky but now that you mentioned it those chimes do give it a quirkly feel to it.

Thanks for reviewing!

[SN | Unformed | SN]

Decent

~~REVIEW~~
Well this one was interesting you presented some nice {SOUND/FX} in the backround along with the music and that really made it more unique and such kinda had a feel of {WIND} of some sort but like i said that gave it that unique feel not just of the music but that something else was going on and that in itself was very cool indeed, so nice job there, now as for improving i think you did that sound/fx too much maybe lesson it some and add other variaty of sound/fx to go with the music wich was alright in itsself, anyways nice job all around.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the sound/fx of almost wind was abit overused i thought.

~X~

[Stargenx - Green]

Pleasent

~~REVIEW~~
Hmmm so this is actually notbad at all, its a more softer feel of things, and seems to stay that way, the piano is nice and pleasent but there doesnt seem to be much more then that, i would love to hear some build up from the start to the finish with the ending having a more powerfull feel, but as for what you do have its pleasent and nice, kinda reminds me of something out of a zelda game or something, but anyways a good pleasent tune i enjoyed it, keep up the good work, hope to hear more from you soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned more on the build up it just stayed the same,

~X~

Stargenx responds:

Thanks for the review!

[Mortal Kombat Theme ~Remi]

Nice track

~~REVIEW~~
hmmm now this does sound alot like mortal combat wich is cool because i loved the games and movie, haha great work with the {PIANO} yopu even mixed in your own style with the more softer feel moments then you really bring it up and power through the song so all and all a good theme of a song nice variation of your own style while still keeping touch with the main theme so awsome job there, a nice piece on one of my faves, now as to improve? hmm maybe more darker feel the keys seemed abit on the light side, other then that it was alright.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more darker theme to reflect the games and movies. maybe with deeper keys from the piano or something

~X~

Step responds:

Thanks for the review! I was hoping you could check out my newer songs rather than my old ones but I still appreciate the lengthy reviews! I agree that a darker theme would've been nice but unfortunately at the time I was limited with what sounds I could use. Thanks again!

[GP's Funk Beat-001]

Decent beat

~~REVIEW~~
hmmm well this is notbad has a few good beats in there, its kinda fast and thats alright, the beat sound quality could be abit better maybe abit more deeper base and such more slower beats and more other variaty of beats from the drums ofcourse it just seems to be about the one beat when you could mix and match and really bring the sound out and even with more quality aswell. so those could be a few things you could work on to make it somewhat improved, anyways good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned maybe some other drum beats and other variaty of mixes and matchs of sounds.

~X~

[Storm the Manor]

Decent track

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so this is notbad, it has a nice rythem to it and flows nicely, kinda reminds me something out of {STARWARS} any relation, but anyways it has a straight forward feel and basicly stays that way, it doesnt have much of a big cliffhangor or anything wich is something it could probably have since its like a {STORM} and could have some big bangs in there and such, maybe something at the {END} that has some loud base? just an idea there that could push it over the edge, for the most part it was just straight forward and not too blasting.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
needs some cliffhangar in there maybe some drums and such. and a louder feel wouldnt hurt.

~X~

[Pezmobile - Distant Tomb]

Nice fast tempo

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm now this was an interesting track, it started off slow but soon picked up very fast then you had some strange yet differant sounds mixing in here and there and thats one thing i really liked about this one, the beat gets faster and louder very nice touch there, now some harder beats could be installed especially when it gets to be a fast tempo, maybe some hard drums towards the end? just an idea, so overall i like it and an end improving tip would be ad some hard beats in there with the fast tempo so it has that end {WOW} anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nice work here adding an ending powerful dominate drum beat might give it that end climax, but all together its decent.

~X~

Pezmobile responds:

Thanks alot dude.

[Gandalf's Dead Cover]

Sadness = awsome

~~REVIEW~~
Oh nice, your songs and tracks get much better with time, now at first this started off {IFFY} but as you listen it has that feel as the title says, so in a sense it does get sad, but thats ok, now i love that you keep it on the low sounding feel and go in and out with it, so you really can express that emotion and makes you feel like you are there in that situation, now normally i might say spice it up for improving but this one is perfect as the feel is sad and i like that, so as for improving i would leave it as is, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I suggest leaving this as is not touching it, cause the emotion of sadness is there.

~X~

[Echoes in the Wind]

Decent track

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm ok so i decided to review some of your stuff, now this one really starts off too quiet, or soft sounding even 20 seconds into it its quiet, you should raise the tempo up abit and alot sooner, its a good song even the {SIZE} was decent, so to improve on this decent track you have, speed up the starting and add some loder or faster tempo going in there, besides all that it was decent and pretty mellow for most of it but still has a good feel, so nice job on this one hope to hear more soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As explained needs a higher sounding feel and or a faster tempo, it needs to be spiced up somewhat

~X~

doppler73 responds:

Hey, this is my first audio submission, so i was learning when i made this.