XwaynecoltX's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Kindermuzik]

Decent tune

~~REVIEW~~
This was interesting has an assortmant of sounds and such, it starts off kind of {SLOW} but seems abit bland throughtout, you should add more sounds in there and more of a tune like tune in there, maybe speed it up, and add more variaty of instraments and such, its a nice tune, but nneds more to it, i like it and was glad to hear it, very pleasent in its current state but has lots of room for improving anyways nice job sofar and good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Needs variaty, and maybe even speeding up

~X~

[Jungle Run]

I like it

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm another subtle beat but this time it does have a somewhat faster beat wich was ok with me, its still abit on the soft side but i did notice some variaty in the middle or in the end, so it was notbad, i liked it, has a very catchy feel to it with the sounds you do have, so nice job on this one, to improve on this one? im not sure i would touch itbut maybe like the last one from the {ROYAL MARCH} give it a suprise here and there, anyways once again nice tune here i look forward to hearing and reviewing more soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Abit of change here and there with some more of the interesting and uniquer sounds would be a nice change here and there and not too much as to take away from your ideas here,

~X~

Step responds:

Thanks for reviewing! As usual, this was made ages ago, and at the time I just had access to some new sounds. They weren't too special but I was excited to try them out and came up with this :P.

Glad you enjoyed it!

[The Royal March]

Subtle but decent

~~REVIEW~~
hmm this was another interesting one of yours it kind of sounded like some, {HORNS} at the start of it couldnt tell my computer was being choppy, but as it played through it had a nice subtle feel to it, it was not crazy loud or anything like that and that was ok with me, so i really enjoyed that aspect of it and all, so nice job and all, besides that it was pretty good, a nice subtle tune, keep up the good work, as for improving, i would think about throwing in some {SPIKES} here and there and what i mean by that is every once in awhile maybe a louder or thump ump here in there just to give it a more unexpected beat comming in.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some extra thump here and there wouldnt hurt, other then that it was pretty impressive

~X~

Step responds:

Actually to be honest I think of this as one of my worst submissions, lol. It's pretty boring throughout and I agree that it could've had some parts where it stood out, maybe with some more powerful hits/thumps as you said.

Thanks for the feedback.

[add in beats2]

Nice build up

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm this was notbad, love how it starts off with the slow then picks up and really starts to pick up wich is really nice, so nice touch on the {BUILD-UP} gets really fast then you start adding some variaty wich is another nice key i thought, allthough i think you should have added more variaty especially towards the end, but other then that i thought it was a pretty nifty toon, anyways keep up the decent tracks, i will look for more of your work soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more variaty especially after the build up and towards the end.

~X~

zanewolf55 responds:

awesome thanks for the tip i'll keep that in mind

[Hollywood (Joshlul remix)]

Nice and differant

~~REVIEW~~
Nice tune here has a dark but then nice feel, almost like a {CARNAVAL} tune, you have a few {GAPS} in there here and there, i think you should not have the gaps just let it run though, the vocls were pretty neat kind of reminds me of how kesha does it, but still it was decent, some more backround sounds would be nice something that doesnt take away from the vocals itself but something that give the whole tune something more unique, anyways nice job i liked it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more backround sounds and mixes maybe even try a harmonica and mix it up in there

~X~

[Dividing by Zero]

Decent tune

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm this is notbad, with the drums and all, i think you need to pick up the speed abit seems too slow im more talking with the drums and such, the second part that comes in does pick up and has the variaty, maybe the drums seemed slow because of the no other sounds in there, but this is an ok track witch does pick up and build into something really good, great track i thought, as for improving maybe just speed the start up just a tad, something to think about, other then that its a great piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Speed up the starting just a tad not too much but a lil more

~X~

Psil0 responds:

Yeah this was my first try, so at this genre, so I didn't want to overdo it. When I make my next house song, the drums will probably be a little more chaotic and dynamic than this.

Glad you liked it and thanks for the review man.

[[LR] TheSoulMan Speaks Out]

This was differant

~~REVIEW~~
Now i must say this was pretty differant the {CHIRPPING} sound was interesting and really made it sound differant, but that was the neat part of it, the voice in there was interesting aswell, and made for a differant and odd sound all together, i got a real kick out of this, im thinking for the chirpping sound maybe you could not make it so loud but slowling bring it in, just an idea to improve on but for the mostpart it was an interesting sound and tune even as short as it was.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Work the chirping in at a slower and sofeter rate and maybe make the whole track somewhat longer.

~X~

Little-Rena responds:

This was a bit of a joke, lol.

[The 10½ Heroes -Remix 2-]

Differant but still interesting

~~REVIEW~~
notbad again and i thought i heard the other version before on this one, but this one sounds differant and seems to have some differant and odd sounds, not a bad thing just differant, kind of hard to review this particular one because its kind of {WACKY} and thats not a bad thing its just differant but maybe thats what you were going for, as the tune gets going it does settle down from the odd and wackyness of stuff, anyways notbad keep making interesting stuff especially like this tune, not my fave from you but still a decent choice.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
i would suggest some more wacky and odd sounds throughout the track even making it more crazy.

~X~

Step responds:

Lol thanks. I made almost all the sounds with the Sytrus VST that comes with FL Studio, so maybe that's why they sound wacky :P.

Thanks for reviewing!