XwaynecoltX's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Royal March]

Subtle but decent

~~REVIEW~~
hmm this was another interesting one of yours it kind of sounded like some, {HORNS} at the start of it couldnt tell my computer was being choppy, but as it played through it had a nice subtle feel to it, it was not crazy loud or anything like that and that was ok with me, so i really enjoyed that aspect of it and all, so nice job and all, besides that it was pretty good, a nice subtle tune, keep up the good work, as for improving, i would think about throwing in some {SPIKES} here and there and what i mean by that is every once in awhile maybe a louder or thump ump here in there just to give it a more unexpected beat comming in.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some extra thump here and there wouldnt hurt, other then that it was pretty impressive

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Step responds:

Actually to be honest I think of this as one of my worst submissions, lol. It's pretty boring throughout and I agree that it could've had some parts where it stood out, maybe with some more powerful hits/thumps as you said.

Thanks for the feedback.

[add in beats2]

Nice build up

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm this was notbad, love how it starts off with the slow then picks up and really starts to pick up wich is really nice, so nice touch on the {BUILD-UP} gets really fast then you start adding some variaty wich is another nice key i thought, allthough i think you should have added more variaty especially towards the end, but other then that i thought it was a pretty nifty toon, anyways keep up the decent tracks, i will look for more of your work soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more variaty especially after the build up and towards the end.

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zanewolf55 responds:

awesome thanks for the tip i'll keep that in mind

[Hollywood (Joshlul remix)]

Nice and differant

~~REVIEW~~
Nice tune here has a dark but then nice feel, almost like a {CARNAVAL} tune, you have a few {GAPS} in there here and there, i think you should not have the gaps just let it run though, the vocls were pretty neat kind of reminds me of how kesha does it, but still it was decent, some more backround sounds would be nice something that doesnt take away from the vocals itself but something that give the whole tune something more unique, anyways nice job i liked it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more backround sounds and mixes maybe even try a harmonica and mix it up in there

~X~

[[LR] TheSoulMan Speaks Out]

This was differant

~~REVIEW~~
Now i must say this was pretty differant the {CHIRPPING} sound was interesting and really made it sound differant, but that was the neat part of it, the voice in there was interesting aswell, and made for a differant and odd sound all together, i got a real kick out of this, im thinking for the chirpping sound maybe you could not make it so loud but slowling bring it in, just an idea to improve on but for the mostpart it was an interesting sound and tune even as short as it was.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Work the chirping in at a slower and sofeter rate and maybe make the whole track somewhat longer.

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Little-Rena responds:

This was a bit of a joke, lol.

[The 10½ Heroes -Remix 2-]

Differant but still interesting

~~REVIEW~~
notbad again and i thought i heard the other version before on this one, but this one sounds differant and seems to have some differant and odd sounds, not a bad thing just differant, kind of hard to review this particular one because its kind of {WACKY} and thats not a bad thing its just differant but maybe thats what you were going for, as the tune gets going it does settle down from the odd and wackyness of stuff, anyways notbad keep making interesting stuff especially like this tune, not my fave from you but still a decent choice.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
i would suggest some more wacky and odd sounds throughout the track even making it more crazy.

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Step responds:

Lol thanks. I made almost all the sounds with the Sytrus VST that comes with FL Studio, so maybe that's why they sound wacky :P.

Thanks for reviewing!

[Mass Illusion]

Nice variaty

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad i like this tune it startsout really quick and comes in with all the differant sounds, it really gets going, and i really like all the vairiaty, its not slow or too fast but just right in my opinion, love the drums in there and the asortment of differant sounds and such, i think the piano was my fave but really it all works very well because of all the variaty and such, so nice job there, as to improve i think its just right, anyways good luck on anything new.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I want to say more variaty but i like it as is.

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Step responds:

Yeah this is probably one of my best old submissions. I remember constantly editing the submission after I was done with it :P. Glad you like the piano, I always tried to make the piano in my songs sound as fitting as possible.

Thanks again!

[[LR] Penta Is An Idiot]

Differant and nifty

~~REVIEW~~
and this one is notbad it has a decent build up, but the sound quality seems abit too low sounding so raising the sound on this and slowing it down towrds the build up might also help as it crowds everything in there, but still other then that it has a unique sound to it, soft and fast kinda neat, so the only changes i could see from this would be to raise the volume quality abit, other then that its pretty differant and unique. anyways good luck on anything new you got comming out.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
raise the volume quality

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Little-Rena responds:

Alright, thanks.

[[LR] This Sucks Fuck You]

Decent

~~REVIEW~~
hmm well this was interesting, seems abit slow, but telling from the {TITLE} it seems like its not in your best interest lol, but it has a unique sound, i think it should be sped up might sound better in a faster tone or something, , just a thought though, the gap at the end seems abit too long aswell, but other then that i thought it was ok, so some slight changes for improving would be to speed up the tune just a tad, anyways good track look forward to hearing more of your stuff soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
speed it up it will sound much better

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Little-Rena responds:

lol, I didn't like it :p