XwaynecoltX's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[[LR] TheSoulMan Speaks Out]

This was differant

~~REVIEW~~
Now i must say this was pretty differant the {CHIRPPING} sound was interesting and really made it sound differant, but that was the neat part of it, the voice in there was interesting aswell, and made for a differant and odd sound all together, i got a real kick out of this, im thinking for the chirpping sound maybe you could not make it so loud but slowling bring it in, just an idea to improve on but for the mostpart it was an interesting sound and tune even as short as it was.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Work the chirping in at a slower and sofeter rate and maybe make the whole track somewhat longer.

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Little-Rena responds:

This was a bit of a joke, lol.

[The 10½ Heroes -Remix 2-]

Differant but still interesting

~~REVIEW~~
notbad again and i thought i heard the other version before on this one, but this one sounds differant and seems to have some differant and odd sounds, not a bad thing just differant, kind of hard to review this particular one because its kind of {WACKY} and thats not a bad thing its just differant but maybe thats what you were going for, as the tune gets going it does settle down from the odd and wackyness of stuff, anyways notbad keep making interesting stuff especially like this tune, not my fave from you but still a decent choice.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
i would suggest some more wacky and odd sounds throughout the track even making it more crazy.

~X~

Step responds:

Lol thanks. I made almost all the sounds with the Sytrus VST that comes with FL Studio, so maybe that's why they sound wacky :P.

Thanks for reviewing!

[Mass Illusion]

Nice variaty

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad i like this tune it startsout really quick and comes in with all the differant sounds, it really gets going, and i really like all the vairiaty, its not slow or too fast but just right in my opinion, love the drums in there and the asortment of differant sounds and such, i think the piano was my fave but really it all works very well because of all the variaty and such, so nice job there, as to improve i think its just right, anyways good luck on anything new.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I want to say more variaty but i like it as is.

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Step responds:

Yeah this is probably one of my best old submissions. I remember constantly editing the submission after I was done with it :P. Glad you like the piano, I always tried to make the piano in my songs sound as fitting as possible.

Thanks again!

[[LR] Penta Is An Idiot]

Differant and nifty

~~REVIEW~~
and this one is notbad it has a decent build up, but the sound quality seems abit too low sounding so raising the sound on this and slowing it down towrds the build up might also help as it crowds everything in there, but still other then that it has a unique sound to it, soft and fast kinda neat, so the only changes i could see from this would be to raise the volume quality abit, other then that its pretty differant and unique. anyways good luck on anything new you got comming out.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
raise the volume quality

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Little-Rena responds:

Alright, thanks.

[[LR] This Sucks Fuck You]

Decent

~~REVIEW~~
hmm well this was interesting, seems abit slow, but telling from the {TITLE} it seems like its not in your best interest lol, but it has a unique sound, i think it should be sped up might sound better in a faster tone or something, , just a thought though, the gap at the end seems abit too long aswell, but other then that i thought it was ok, so some slight changes for improving would be to speed up the tune just a tad, anyways good track look forward to hearing more of your stuff soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
speed it up it will sound much better

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Little-Rena responds:

lol, I didn't like it :p

[R&Beatbox Loop]

Could be longer

~~REVIEW~~
hmmm this is way too short, its quirky and amusing and is a good loop, but seems like there should be more in there, maybe a few differant instraments of sorts, throw in some deeper {DRUMBS} and some other uniquer sounds that way you can also make it longer and have more depth of tunes in there, it will flow alot better, the loop is 2 seconds long you need to add more to it more depth if you will, but for the mostpart its a cute loop, and i can see it being used in a number of sound/fx portions of flash movies. anyways better luck next time.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
needs more depth needs more instraments and could be longer

~X~

[Distant Oblivion Loop]

Short but still fantastic

~~REVIEW~~
now this one was fast and yes its a loop i did however you could have made the loop much faster, but it tends to be harder to review loops then anything else, but i do like the speed of it and all the sounds and instraments seem to flow together just right and the speed matches up with them so in those areas its great just wish there was abit more to it, not like a song just a longer loop to it, but regardless its still a fantastic loop, great job, hope to hear more of your work soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More depth and more to it not so short even if it is just a loop

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Step responds:

Thanks for reviewing! Actually at the time I think I was planning on making this a full song but then never got around to finishing it.

Haha I remember being really proud of this loop because all the different sounds fit together well for once :P.

Thanks again for this review, and thanks for all of the submissions of mine you've been reviewing!