Hmm interesting sounds
I found this one of yours to be interesting like how you mixed it up abit better then some of your other stuff, some "VOCALS" were great, and also you made it abit longer then some of your other stuff aswell, now this one i wouldnt call a loop because you let it playout abit longer so nice touch there, its not my taste of stuff but still shows the effort on your part, so nice job there, nice work here, i look forward to hearing more of your stuff, old and new.
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It could be a bit longer especially in the vocals but honestly its pretty good if you ask me, keep up the good work.