Nice sounds here
This starts off great and has a great pick-up, and just gets better with each second it plays out, it does have a good build up, and i also like the "VARIATY" you put in this one, all the sounds come together to really make for a decent tune, and i was impressed from the start so your effort does show, and it shows in the tune so nice job indeed.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As it is now this doesnt need anything, but maybe some sort of echo effect might be nice.