XwaynecoltX's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fiery Vengeance ~FNG~]

It was neat

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad with this one, it starts off right away with a {FAST-PACED} feel, wich i liked, but with the drums it gets too repetitive, you should really {MIX} it up with other sounds and imstraments especially with the long drum solo you have going on, dont get me wrong its pretty good just needs some mix in there, maybe even {SLOW} it down and {SPEED} it up, but other then that it is pretty good stuff, so keep up the good work. i look forward to hearing more stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more mixture in the drum solo

~X~

Omnivore responds:

Just remember: Trance is not based off of ultra drum solos and beats. Trance is built off of reproducing beats that collide within each other. As it progresses throughout the song, you don't really hear any changes in the beats. And I like your review, but you need to know your genres. I find this review more useful for a rock song, or a metal song. Also, this is a submission for a collab. No other instruments were meant to be used.

[Sewerage [Dubstep]]

It was interesting

~~REVIEW~~
Well this was differant it was very hard sounding, and there was some good mix of variaty in there wich is always good to hear, but your tune tends to get very soft and muffled at times not sure that was on purpose, but other then that this was alright the sound was just all over and kinda hard to focus in on one sound, but other then that it was alright i thought, so keep up the interesting sounds and as improving maybe something more straight forward but also keep the variaty you have going.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More straight forward but still with some mixture

~X~

TuRdz responds:

Thanks for the feedback! Will do next time :D

[Society's Reflection (Jeffaro)]

Decent

~~REVIEW~~
Hmmm well this was abit differant, i do love how it starts off though, and does have a sorta {BUILD-UP} kinda rough around the edges, the {VOCALS} were ok but thought it could be abit more sharper and clear, the whole clip seems to have a scratchyness to it, you may want to add abit more quality in on that aspect of stuff, but other then that this was an ok piece and i thought it could be better but was ok with me regardless, so nice job overall.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some clarity and quality check could be worked on

~X~

[Eternal Pain (Jeffaro)]

It was interesting

~~REVIEW~~
ok so this was pretty decent, i thought maybe as a helpfull tip maybe make the {GUITARS} somewhat louder and a more focus sound, the drums were ok atleast i think that was some drums i thought i heard in there, the best parts of this track were the guitars and almost seems if you get some guitar solos in there, so nice job on that stuff, i just feel this was abit on the soft side with the guitars and would like a deeper and louder feel, other then that this was pretty good, good luck on anything new comming up, ill keep my eyes/ears open

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
needs a louder base or volume sound something though

~X~

[Tetris Remix (Collab)]

Fantastic

~~REVIEW~~
And like i love tetris so i saved this one for future use, and because its pretty awsome, i like how its tetris but does sound somewhat differant so props to you on that, This has a unique sound so i really like this, hell i might even play this while playing the tetris from facebook haha, anyways ways this could be better or improved to be honest i thing you did it justice as is so i would leave this one be, its perfect in my opinion, so awsome job glad i had a chance to hear it and save it,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Perfect

~X~

Step responds:

Haha thanks. This was a collaboration I did with my cousin. We were quite proud of it when we made it, although right now if I had to make a Tetris Remix I'd make a much better one, haha xP.

Thanks a lot for the review!

[All Hail Windows!]

Its differant

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm ok this was notbad, it was differant, and out of the sounds from windows xp thats interesting guess i never really noticed before, this was an ok tune but i have to say there was not much too it, its ok but would have been nice to see more {POP} in there, i do like the ending thats the sound i do know haha, but really other then that i cant think of anything else for this, the onlything i could muck up would probably be its cute, anyways nice job, im getting there lol

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
It needs more pop more something but for what it is was pretty interesting.

~X~

Step responds:

That's because it's an old song :P. I agree that there really isn't much to it. A pretty simple beat and just some windows sounds layered on top of it.

But thanks for the helpful advice!

[Hill Top Cruise]

Nice piano

~~REVIEW~~
This was a good tune here starts off really good and fast paced, props to you on the {PIANO} very good quality, very sharp and clear and i was really enjoying this ones, not much of a gap at the end so you know where it starts and ends, its very good stuff, as for improving i honestly would leave this as is, its a good piece, so hope to hear more from you soon, untill next time good luck on anything new you got comming up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
It was good as is i wouldnt touch a thing.

~X~

Short-Factor responds:

Thank you, that was a nice review. Although you suggested it was perfect and yet gave it a 7..?

[Saturday Afternoon]

It was decent

~~REVIEW~~
This was nice, has a very great day type of feel, meaning not too hard allthough you do give it a nice almost intense build up wich then changes up quite abit from what it started with, theres alot of differant chchanges in this alot of {MIXTURE} wich is ok with me, just seems like there alot of stuff going everywhere, but really other then that i thought it was alright and liked it very much, anyways good tune here, i look forward to more from you soon,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
maybe not as intense of a build up but other then that it was alright.

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ElectroHarbour responds:

Thanks very much for explaining what was wrong with the song. Yeah it does have a kind of intense build up, especially flattening the chill atmosphere.

[Hero Of The Machines]

Pleasent

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm this had an interesting {SOUND} starts off very good kinda reminds me of some {BATTLE-SCENE} thats about to start and such, like on distant field or something its very soothing aswell and has a small build up wich was ok with this one, i just found it to be very nice and pleasent. so if i could offer any tips of improving i think i would add some more deeper sounds towards the end, but other then that i thought it was alright with some nice effort on your end, anyways keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some deeper sounds in the tail end of the song would be nice.

~X~

XenonMB responds:

will keep that in mind, thanks for the review :)