So this was differant
This was differant but it was neat it has a deep sound to it, seemed kind of on the short side though so you may want to add more too it maybe stretch out each piece abit more, or something, or adding other instraments that fill in the depth of it. Its a good tune, some issues of scratchy sounds but maybe that was just the effects you were going for, i like the tune, has a good feel to it, just needs abit more in my opinion, i do like it though, Anywaysgood tune keep up the good work and i look forward to hearing more from you, untill then good luck.
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stretch out each piece abit more, or something, or adding other instraments that fill in the depth of it.