XwaynecoltX's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Club Basic Loop]

Love the fast beat on this

~~REVIEW~~
ok so now this has a fast beat and while it is just a {LOOP} i feel you could have done alot more with this like making it into a fast beat dance mix or something along them lines, the loop is too short even for the loop it needs more ump and more over the edge kind of stuff, but you do have a good start with this just make it longer more in depth and with alot of dance feel, its great stuff dont get me wrong but can be even better with a longer feel and more dance to it, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it into a more fast dance mix it has the potential,

[SP - Generic Dance Song 3 V4]

Nice beat

~~REVIEW~~
Nice tune here it has a very {UP-BEAT} feel and keeps you going so in away it is like the tittle reminds us, Dance could be a bit more faster and have it change up with even more differant mixxes aswell, but really for the mostpart its fast and upbeat, Must have been fun working on this, and i could really see this in maybe a flash someday yes ofcourse on that note, and now to Improve, well it already has the cheery and faster tempo, but like i was saying mix up the tempo also, so that it doesnt remain the same feel but picks up and drops down, just a lil tip though, anyways decent track.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned some faster and slower beats differant ones then you already have would be nice.

[Energy - seperate Rhodes 2]

Kinda soft

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad just another little loop, its not a bad thing, but this could have been made into something more, kind of like a tune or song, the little {CHIMES} are cute and nifty but you should think about, adding more chimes maybe some other instraments that are simular and even in this case a {HARMONICA} would be great, sounds simular to the chimes, just a few tips there and it would greatly improve on things, as for the chimes you have, notbad at all, so improving would be a plus as you do have something here, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
as suggested, some new sounds being added in on this would be great all explained on this

[a METAL Happy Birthday Song]

Distorted

~~REVIEW~~
Well its ok, but the happy birthday theme is very distorted there is some {STATIC} in the backround not sure what it its coming from, could be too close of a recording, or maybe a bad mic, and whatever it is, it really distorts the tune, you should clear it up because it makes the quality abit on the low side, seems like you do have something there, but that distortion and or static is killing this track so look-into it and maybe you can clear it up for a better sounding tune, anyways good luck on your next piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well as mentioned above the static is hurting the sound, clear it up make it abit better quality in that aspect

[Titbread - Trip Hop Delay1987]

This was differant

~~REVIEW~~
So this was differant, i like all the differant sounds and even {SOUND/FX} the deeper sounds are pretty good in this and this has a good and dark feel to it wich is nice, but it does seem to be missing something maybe because its so short as a loop, but still is pretty entertaining, so as to improve on something like this, such as, making more of a {TUNE} out of what you do have since you do have good few sounds of this, but anyways nice job and good loop just put more effort into this and make it even much better,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As suggested above, some changes could be made to make it even better.

[-Frenzy-]

Nifty style with this one

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so this was notbad, it has that {DARK} feel wich is ok with me, actually its great like that, Also has a very original style so props to you on that aspect of the tune, Now this lil track was notbad and had an almost sense of {FANTASIA} feel, kinda like color being splashed all over and what not, you have it flowing well so more good effort on your part here, so nice job on that once again, But anyways thanks for the pleaseure to listening to this very nice indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think it was just right as is,

[Chill]

Needs more variaty

~~REVIEW~~
hmmm this could have had alot more of sounds. and effects in it, seems like you had just the {DRUMS} going, and thats all it basicly was, you should really think about adding much more to this, some guitars some sound/fx, and some decent backround sounds wouldnt hurt., just tapping on drums isnt much for this even for a loop, so i hope to see better improvments with this one, dont get me wrong its a nifty sound/fx but still needs much more, anyways untill next time good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
adding much more to this, some guitars some sound/fx, and some decent backround sounds wouldnt hurt.

[Seasons [Tell]]

Smooth feel of emotion here

~~REVIEW~~
This was a really nice and {PLEASENT} piece, It also has this feeling then kinda takes off focusing on more intense emotion, wich you really made that show off well so very nice job on bringing that out, Great job on a nice little beat and flows thru decently without really jumping off track, so once again awsome job on this i really like it, Now if i could add any improving points i might say have it end with a more {BANG} like feel, nothing major but maybe something that will give the listener an unexpected cliffhangar at the end, anyways loved it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A small suggestion of giving the end abit more of a {CLIFF-HANGAR} something thats more unexpected.

[Fucking Metal (farcrydx)]

Metal sounding somewhat

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so this was notbad at all, it did seem a little repetitive? maybe if you added a mixture of sounds and instraments you could change that? Now i am a fan of {METAL} so i can say this is notbad in that aspect of things, it could have more variaty in there though, but it does have that metal feel, so nice job there, now as explained below you can add some variaty maybe a differant {MIX} of sounds and instraments, just a tip there for improving this to sounding even better like metal, but for the mostpart i really liked this piece, so awsome job, hope to hear more of your tracks soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Adding some mixture of sounds and maybe even some differant instraments could give it that extra touch and probably introduce new and deifferant sounds.