Great vocals
~~REVIEW~~
Now this was neat, the solo was great, kinda neat, the vocals are great in this, I could see this being more dominate though especially at the ending, like a powerful cliffhangar bump and thump, Now the {VOCALS} are good but sometimes it goes in and out you need a more dominate focus there so that it all comes together and not just in parts, Now while it was very good, i could see it getting better with a few changes as suggested, maybe even more focus on the ending, but anyways for the mostpart i liked it, it was alright.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A cliffhangar ump and thump sound would be a nice ending climax feel, Maybe dont {OVER-USE} the vocals so much, More focus on the vocals more of a dominate role there so it doesnt break off and on at times, and last but not least, more {FOCUS} on the ending.