ok interesting
So not my fave here, it is kind of interesting and has a fast paced jump here and moves along pretty fast it seems, i wouldnt mind some slowing down parts here and there, but really i liked this as its fun and a good listen, and how can we improve on this not sure, but it is pretty good sofar, keep up the good work. hope to hear more from you soon.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some slowing down of the rythem then maybe some build up with some deeper sounds would be something.