Notbad here
So this was kind of differant, there was a good beat in here butalso there was a small vocal in there that had some variaty to it so that was a plus to it and made for some interesting backround effects and sounds so nice job all around there, good effort and i really like the mix you gave this, like i said it was differant, anyways good job here and keep up the effort in future stuff.
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Well with this kind you have alot of variaty and there is not much you can change so i would leave it as is.