Notbad
Well this was notbad, the "VOICE" was not good, you should think about maybe changing it up a lil like deeper softer different accents and such, anyways nice job here.
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Change up the voice now and then.
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Notbad
Well this was notbad, the "VOICE" was not good, you should think about maybe changing it up a lil like deeper softer different accents and such, anyways nice job here.
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Change up the voice now and then.
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Felt the same way after i finish it however still turned out alright, lol. Thanks for the feedback have fun on Newgrounds, cheers.
Kind regards,
Wondermeow
Different
Well this was different but it seems to work and its a good demo to show people your voice talents, so nice job here indeed, and I like the accent in there, with that alone you really make it work/
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This was notbad at all.
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Interesting
So its always nice to hear different things here on the audio portal, even stuff like this your accent really makes this work in a number of ways, theres just some quality stuff you need to get a handle on a bit more.
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Good accent good voice here there was some static that could be cleaned up.
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hi dude, thanks for your feedback its good and ill keep it in mind for future stuff
Very nice
This was kind of like a "RAP" tune or something but its still pretty good and I liked how you rhymed all this together this was really good, you have some good "TALENT" here go with it and let it soar.
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Nothing here its pretty solid.
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Kinda short
I like some of the voices in here but this was just too short so you may want to think about adding more voices and more depth stretching this out to be a tad bit longer.
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More voices needed, could be longer.
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Needs to be puder
Alright so dont get me wrong, I listen to a lot of these and these are pretty good but the "VOLUME" needs to be up more, just something to think about, other then that you really do have a good talent here.
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Volume seemed a tad bit low.
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Very nice
The voices are very good I love the emotion and deep quality you have added here, toobad it was just too "SHORT" so thats something you could probably work on a bit.
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Could be stretched and a bit longer.
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Could be louder
Well this was actually notbad at all, the "SOUND" volume could be a tad louder though it was not soft or anything but could be somewhat louder, but other then that this was notbad.
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Sound could be louder.
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Actually iv been focusing on working on that if you listen to some of my newer stuff, i think i managed to fix it if not ill work harder next time :)
Whooa
This is kind of like a story its a long ten minute one too, the "VOICE" is good but you need to ad much more "EMOTION" and have some pauses here and there.
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More emotion, more passion and paus once in awhile.
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Dude I recorded this when I was 15 and had an awful microphone. I had a ton to improve on back then.
This was literally four years ago, and I hate this recording so much. One of the worst things I've ever recorded. I listen back on it and cringe. Worst recording I've ever done next to the old creepypasta readings I made before then. I've gotten so much better over the years, so no need to add a "things to improve on" section, lol.
I was awful back then. A whole lot worse than I am now.
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