XwaynecoltX's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fruity loop v.1.1]

Decent loop

~~REVIEW~~
ok so this was notbad has a kicking sound, but seems it stays with the same tune, could use more variaty in there, now the tune you have is pretty decent, but throw in some other sounds maybe some horns, and drums with some harder sounds, it will give it some variaty, but really this was ok, even for a loop just needs abit more on stuff, anyways good luck on anything else you are working on.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As i just wrote above needs more then the same tune you got even changing up the tempo is a start.

[Hare Hare Yukai (C64 remix)]

Nice sounds

~~REVIEW~~
Now this was abit hard to understand at first but as you get into it, it gets easier infact the more you {LISTEN} to it, it really gets smoother and so on, and all the sounds and sound/fx seemed so little but yet you were able to present us with a good little tune here and that was pretty neat, so props to you on the {EFFORT} in making something from so little, anyways nice job there.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Now as for some sorta better outcome from this, i do like it as is. but more {SOUND/FX} can be a start maybe even some backround {ECHOING} anyways nice job.

[Bender]

Sci-fi like

~~REVIEW~~
notbad again, but again this was more of a loop then anything else, now thats not a bad thing but could be made into something more then that, with a few added sounds and even differant instraments it can be much more, its ok as a loop but can be better as some song, i kinda like it aswell as the loop kinda reminds me of some sci-fi feel or alian on the moon of some sorts so nice job on this one good piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
with a few added sounds and even differant instraments it can be much more,

[fruity loop]

Decent

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so this was notbad, seemed more like a loop though with the same tone going over and over so as a suggestion you can mix up the tune so its not so like a loop allthough that may have been your entention, while the loop is great it has potential to be more with some good quality, its decent but could be better, even throwing in some vocals would have been cool. so anyways nice job on this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This was ok as a loop but could have been better with mixing it up abit slow fast etc

[12 Bar Blues Boogie]

Nice harmonica

~~REVIEW~~
oh this was something differant, you dont normally hear a "HARMONICA" and while it was not perfect by any means it was still clear and sharp sounding, the quality could be better just a tad, and as a suggestion of improving the tune you can add and mix some backround effects to go with it and ultimatly turning it into a song, but from what you do have here, its pretty good and i rather enjoyed this piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
improving the tune you can add and mix some backround effects to go with it and ultimatly turning it into a song

[00hard]

Decent sounds

~~REVIEW~~
So here we have something differant you have a variaty of odd and unique sounds kinda all thrown in there and such, it does make for some sorta "SCI-FI" or even "ROBOTIC" feel and would work in those kind of flash elements, as for a tune i think it just doesnt fit as theres just too much differant and odd sounding sounds, but great for some sound/fx wich is ok also, anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
leave it as is, as its a sound/fx

[hurdy gurdy]

Needs moe r

~~REVIEW~~
ok so this was a simple drum solo as you say, but it was ok not bad just ok, now i can see this as an ok loop, but it has room for so much more as the drum solo is pretty good and very good quality i thought, but still i thought it could use much more maybe some differant instraments in the backround, and new sounds even a 2nd set of drums somehow. besides that it was pretty good.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some differant instraments in the backround, and new sounds even a 2nd set of drum

[Aaah! Hot Sludge!]

Too short

~~REVIEW~~
So this one was a "LOOP" clearly but i think it could have been much better the last one you made was much more indepth and quality, now this being a loop and all i thought you could have pushed it like you have in the past, some suggestions might be, more differant sounds differant after effects, and so on, the quality could have been abit more clearer aswell, but besides that i rather enjoyed this piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more clearer sounding guitar would be nice, also some suggestions might be, more differant sounds differant after effects

[phaser]

Very nice

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so first off this is alot better then some of your other shorter stuff, you pushed the quality on this one, wich really shows and here with this one its all very well together and plays right along into the next tune, now while this is not the best scoring of tracks you still presented us with a good tune and i like that one so nice job on this track, as for improving not much but explained more below

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
i think its fine as is, now i like this for the slow feel but some parts you can pick up to throw people off abit and in turn giving it something differant for the listeners.

[Snugglebunny]

Keep up the decent music

~~REVIEW~~
This had a scary feel to it but thats what i liked about it, you should think about adding differant mixes in there a differant instrument, maybe some scary wind chimes or something just an idea but it might help, but it was still neat stuff, i love scary dark tunes like you have here just needs abit more "DARKNESS" to it, anyways nice job here, cant wait for more stuff especially if its dark like this one, anyways good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
needs more darkness maybe some sorta windchimes to give like a ghost feel