XwaynecoltX's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[hard break]

Distorted but needs work

~~REVIEW~~
ok so this one could use some {IMPROVMENTS} first of all this is way too {SHORT} so making it somewhat longer would not hurt, and there is too much {DISTORTED} to it, you may want to clean that up, also making it {LONGER} and with more differant sounds and instraments would be ok, other then that its ok

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
clean it up abit, give it a longer tune more like a song, also, slow it down as it may have caused the distortion.

[<EagleGuard> Project X]

I like the bells, decent track here

~~REVIEW~~
This was pretty nice its been awhile since i heard stuff on here but have to say this was pretty good, especilly with the {BELLS} you should push the bells more, I love the way this tune starts off with the one rythem and pushes forward to seom differant feel but still keeping the same style so nice job there, some improvements could be presented like more power sounds with the other sounds you had in there but were a tad light, so thats another issue that could be worked on.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Push the bells more they were really enique and thats what caught my attention, some more loder and quality sounds from any other instraments aswell, as stated as above.

EagleGuard responds:

Haha, thanks for digging up and reviewing this oldie! I didn't really know anything about mastering back then, so I just changed the volumes of each instrument a bit without actually equalizing every instrument as well.

Glad you liked it though, and I'll keep your advice in mind for future pieces =)

[-+[Arsenic Plums]+-]

Voices were neat

~~REVIEW~~
The voices in this seemed to comeout really good, i think that was the best part of this, and made the whole song worth the while and i enjoyed it, The voices were neat and differant, but maybe you did it too much of it, maybe a little less of it so it doesnt sound the same all the time, but still anyways good sounding track and i gues it really was a christmas song or something of that nature, anyways nice job i had fun with this one, maybe less of the same style next time thouogh.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Try and change it up so its not sounding the same all the time, less voices all wrapped up together may help on this.

[Danny Elfman's Bad Day]

Unique sounds here

~~REVIEW~~
Now this was a good song here one of the best i have heard in awhile, seems like you really put some quality into it, kinda has a scary creepy feel to it but not so much just a hint of it, The song kinda jumps up from its slow tempo which was pretty neat, so props to you on making something that is not just slow but does actually changes, Very good and interesting track you have here, i like how it changes up, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I wouldnt mind hearing some more variations in there just abit more then it will be complete.

[destruction journey]

Nice track

~~REVIEW~~
This was cool, a good mix here, I wouldnt mind hearing a much longer version since this was really impressive, but seemed more on the short side, so maybe with a few added mixes it could really be abit more quality, and something that more people would also enjoy, so maybe try out something abit longer and with some depth to it, but you have something really good here, you should make more like this, anyways good luck. it was a nice track hope to hear more soon someday.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
well as explained it could be longer with more depth and qaulity to it

[A simple prog-trance loop]

Could be longer

~~REVIEW~~
Hmmm this was notbad, it seems perfectly smooth and the way its set-up from the start to finish it was very smooth and perfect, this only being a few seconds long its still pretty good, allthough i think you could add some more time onto it with more of the smoothness i would say about 15 seconds long, it may give it abit more deoth and style to it, Anyways this was very good and i enjoyed hearing it, very nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
ad more time with it, i suggested making it about 15 seconds long so it has more depth

[Fruity loop v.1.1]

Decent loop

~~REVIEW~~
ok so this was notbad has a kicking sound, but seems it stays with the same tune, could use more variaty in there, now the tune you have is pretty decent, but throw in some other sounds maybe some horns, and drums with some harder sounds, it will give it some variaty, but really this was ok, even for a loop just needs abit more on stuff, anyways good luck on anything else you are working on.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As i just wrote above needs more then the same tune you got even changing up the tempo is a start.

[Hare Hare Yukai (C64 remix)]

Nice sounds

~~REVIEW~~
Now this was abit hard to understand at first but as you get into it, it gets easier infact the more you {LISTEN} to it, it really gets smoother and so on, and all the sounds and sound/fx seemed so little but yet you were able to present us with a good little tune here and that was pretty neat, so props to you on the {EFFORT} in making something from so little, anyways nice job there.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Now as for some sorta better outcome from this, i do like it as is. but more {SOUND/FX} can be a start maybe even some backround {ECHOING} anyways nice job.

[Bender]

Sci-fi like

~~REVIEW~~
notbad again, but again this was more of a loop then anything else, now thats not a bad thing but could be made into something more then that, with a few added sounds and even differant instraments it can be much more, its ok as a loop but can be better as some song, i kinda like it aswell as the loop kinda reminds me of some sci-fi feel or alian on the moon of some sorts so nice job on this one good piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
with a few added sounds and even differant instraments it can be much more,