XwaynecoltX's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Generic House Loop]

Notbad

So this is one of those you could really build on because while it was rather short you should really try and make it into a song much longer and with this up beat style and should make for a very nice piece of work here, anyways nice job though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it into a song and much longer.

~X~

[Drum distortion test]

Nice

Here was another nice beat you have, this one was more fast paced and that was actually ok, lots of good drums in there that gave this a pretty good kick, seems like its missing some build ups though but other then that this was a nice piece, keep up the fantastic audip tracks.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe some build ups but not much

~X~

[Fighting the Ghosts]

Very nice

So this was an interesting piece, I like what you have done here with this piece, and like the "BUILD-UP" at about 00:38-00:44 but you need more of those build ups and ofcourse this track could be a tad bit longer so stretch it out as best as you can, overall very nice work here. So with the whole tune in my head it was a good reliefe to finally finish it, I was generall pleased with this, right from the start with some good effects and a good touch of skills put into this and cant wait for more from you. And thats all I have to say at this point.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More build up points, and make the whole piece longer aswell.

~X~

[House1]

This was different

This was pretty different I do like what you have here but there needs to be a few changes like much more build ups and much more build downs then you can have more shock value and these are just ideas because this is a decent piece if you ask me, and regardless of what I write here you have to be comforble with your style.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
there needs to be a few changes like much more build ups and much more build downs.

~X~

[Alla Ska (Everyone Shall Die)]

Notbad

So here we have another heavy metal style and I must say still not my style but I can tell you really enjoy this, you should actually make this one longer it seemed kind of on the short side, but anyways it was not a bad piece of audio here especially for the style you have.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the track longer it was a tad bit short.

~X~

[Nailed To The Cross]

Very hard

well this one was very hard stuff but that is the intent, its really hard to hear the words not sure if thats the style but guess it is, this is probably not my style in general but I can see the effort is still here ith this kind of work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More focus on allowing the words to be heard.

~X~

[Zippy]

Another kicking beat

I love how this one sounds.especially at the start I do like that you have some "BUILD-UP" on this one but some of the build up tends to go a bit long, but overall this was pretty brilliant and a fantastic piece if you ask me. so keep up that fantastic work here in the audio portal.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Speed up the build up on some parts.

~X~

[SPP Brawler Game Menu Loop]

Nice beat you have

So I have come across your work now and have noticed you have always got some nice beat kicking it up and very sharp sounds and this one is no different you bring on some nice beats, nice sounds and always so sharp sounding with great quality about them, keep up the great work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Cant find anything that would or should be changes cause this was very good work in its own right.

~X~

[Portal to Hell]

Another dark one

I like this one also another dark element but that makes for something really good, you still bring out some new sounds in it and thats what makes it really work well I thaught, so that was actually a plus of things, seemed kind of short, so maybe stretching it out a little longer.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
could be a tad bit longer

~X~

[Drifting Through Space]

Very nice

Really good stuff here and I really love how this starts off a brilliant piece indeed, the "SOFT" feel is great do wish there was more build up, but its a fantastic piece if you ask me. You presented a decent track here with some unique sounds, and some decent quality In it all, making for a decent track and I really came to enjoy it right from the start. So keep on doing what you got cause you have something good going, keep up the interesting sounds.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More build up would be awsome.

~X~

siteml responds:

Thanks! I was looking at it from the angle of background music for when you're playing the game, which is why I avoided building it up to anything. Glad to hear you enjoyed it despite that :) I recommend trying the game (it's free!) and playing this looped in the background (with slightly lowered volume to hear the game sounds better). And I have been thinking of writing more tracks to fit as BGM for that game, so there may indeed be more of that kind of feel coming up :)