Very solid piece
So all these sounds in one place you put it together in nice fashion, I love all the mix and variaty that you presented here today. Here you have a very solid piece you have braught us a great mix lots of variaty and different sounds and thats what made this great all the quality mix and variaty, so props to you on a great piece here. So pretty awsome stuff here, and cant wait to see what else you bring to the table but im sure if its like this it will be just as fantastic.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make some soft points so you can make some build up points.
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