Notbad
Alright you have nice track here it also possessed something differant and i believe it was more unique then expected, but it was pretty differant, but nice theme going here. you added some good Charm to this whole bit and it made it all the better. This was interesting you bring a certain something along with this one and it was a nice tune, there was a tad bit "STATIC" that might be on purpose but regardless this was a cool piece of track. So as I have listened to this track a few times its interesting some parts could be better, but it was a pretty good tune, it was differant in someways but most of all I did like what you presented here and ill just say keep going with that, its decent stuff.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Not sure with this one maybe some more backround and unique sounds and sound/fx
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