Nice
So this was actually notbad at all that beat you have going its basicly just the same throughout the whole song so you should think about changing that up have bridges of changing tunes, have some build up into heavier tones, and make it longer, But with all that said this was actually notbad at all
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you should think about changing that up have bridges of changing tunes, have some build up into heavier tones.
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