Awesome track
So here was a nice track you have it is different and unique kind of hard to understand it all but I like what you did with this one I think some extra sound/fx in backround would be a huge plus but you did very well as it is and on that note this was positive but doesn't hurt to make this longer and more streteched out with even some more build up on this anyways great track you have here
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Longer some extra sound/fx for backround cery soft and some more build up too
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