XwaynecoltX's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Wrench Ninja - Haunted Place]

Different

Well this was different but was kind of more of a sound f/x you could turn this into a song of sorts but needs more content and some variaty but this one was more like a sound clip and in that case can be used in stuff still but does need more to it, other then what it is.

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you could turn this into a song of sorts but needs more content and some variaty

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[Bells (WIP)]

Very nice

So this one does have some good quality about it and you should really think about making it into that song you talk about it has that "IT" factor as some say my only issue here is that its way too short and needs to be made into a full fledged song. Finest detail I have heard in a long time, So I am looking forward to see what else you can come out with, as this was one of those pieces that sticks out at you so nice efforts here. you gave this some nice Rhythm and have composed a nice piece here. Keep up this type of quality.

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my only issue here is that its way too short and needs to be made into a full fledged song.

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[Wrench Ninja - Day in the Park]

Cool track

This almost sounds a bit techno and such, but you marked it as something else it does have a cool vibe something like at a dance club but on a lighter note, this was just way too "SHORT" for sure make it longer ad some more notes some more sounds etc. But a good track regardless

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for sure make it longer ad some more notes some more sounds etc.

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[WrenchNinja-Hardcore Reggeaton]

Notbad

Well this was notbad, I could see you adding more of a vocal to this like a song of sorts with vocals. theres a number of things you could do, but adding much more variaty is needed and really changing up some of the sounds would just be a plus on your end.

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I could see you adding more of a vocal to this like a song of sorts with vocals. and more variaty of the different sounds and this was a tad short.

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[tetreese]

Very cool

wow this was very cool what you have here this will go as one of my faves its just that good you should really make this longer though and have more build up aswell. but besides that it couldnt be more perfect with a nice style you have here very welldone infact.

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you should really make this longer though and have more build up aswell.

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[Lousy Piano Improvisation 1 (2018)]

Beautiful

wow this was really beautifull you put together some nice piano mixes here with a nice style and the piano is beautifull a very welldone piece you have here if you ask me I enjoy it very much you should really make more pieces like this one maybe just not so long this one seemed really long. And to end things off here, again a decent tune with some little work needed as you have pushed some good effort though and such, I was pretty impressed. So on an ending note keep making some fantastic stuff not just for people around you but mostly because it gives you joy. so anyways im done here but keep making stuff like this.

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I like this one maybe just not so long this one seemed really long.

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Bertn1991 responds:

Aww, thank you so much.

I appreciate the kind words. I'm glad you found my playing beautiful. I made up the song on the spot, just playing whatever came to mind. It is pretty long, you're right. Next time I do an improvisation, I should try to make it shorter.

Thanks you for the constructive criticism and good advice :-)

[Recharged-Chocolate]

Very nice

This was very nice and the vocals are pretty good too actually the vocals are very welldone and made very well for the backround music it all seemed to come together, this track could be longer though seemed short but besides all that it was a great piece.

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Make it a bit longer if you can.

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[Mario goes Pop]

Very nice indeed.

Wow I have to say this is really nice you really bring some nice talent here with these mario themed ideas and tunes, you really make it your own and twist the originals around to be your own so props to you for an artistic style and making something positive.

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Its a mix all on its own.

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[Mario goes jazz]

Nice

wow this was really good the quality was very good on this one and the way you started it off was very impressive but the tune as a whole was just too short and you could make it longer you have the skills to really make it more like some sort of song itself.

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make it longer more like a song.

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[Let's Dance]

Love the sound

So its clear what you did here and that was bringing something different and unique to the table, thats exactly what I heard here. So right from the start you gave this some real quality about it with a kicking beat and great vibe really came forward and stood out from the rest love the quality of sound and that was from start to finish, As for changing thisng up you could have some better build up but maybe not much. So this was nice and not much more can be said about that except you showd us a unique and different style of detail quality and good efforts.

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As for changing thisng up you could have some better build up but maybe not much.

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naval76 responds:

thank you for the response. ill keep the build-up factor mind for future songs.