Nice
I like this and I really like the drums in this I think you can push more drums into this with more of that and more beats and more build ups with the drums but you do have a good mix here and I was pretty impressed with the outcome and results of this I was very impressed with this and would love to hear more of your work and bring more focus on the drums like you did here anyways nice job
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more build up with the focus on drums
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