Wow nice
So this was really good and has a nice and different sound to it and that's what made it unique and that also made me enjoy this piece a little bit more I really liked the way this starts and progressively gets heavier and builds up from there so nice job indeed and you should make more stuff like this it was pretty intense and I really enjoyed it so keep making raw stuff like you did here
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More added background effect sounds to balance out everything else
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