I like it
So this was pretty intense here, the sound "QUALITY" was really good it was a bit slow but I could see you building up the tempo faster, Something of a unique taste here with this one, it was a good tune and could use some extra tid bits here and there but maybe something just a tad more differant even random. just try some new things, and let it flow. into something even more creative, And Im glad I had a chance to review this fine piece you have here and do hope you make more simular stuff like it it was great all the way around.
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it was a bit slow but I could see you building up the tempo faster
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