Notbad at all
Good tune you have here, there could be some changes but I will get to that later but to be honest it was a good piece and has a certain kick to it. Well here was a good tune, it was notbad at all, and actually has a pretty good "BUILD-UP" about it, I do however think you could ad some more mixture into this, not much but a tad bit more. And so thats that a good tune here with a nice and unique vibe about it, you really gave this a kick, and I like how that payed off in results.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More mixture of sounds and sound/fx wouyld be a plud for this, change it up now and then.
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