XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Alien Hominid!]

This was interesting

So this was "NOTBAD" I like this seems like its "UNFINISHED" some added shades and even a design in the backround would also be key, thats just a small idea to throw your way, but other then that this was actually pretty decent work so nice job indeed here.

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seems like its unfinished some added shades and even a design in the backround would also be key

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guyfromKillerRAT responds:

ahhhh sorry took so long to respond (I guess I didn't see this until now)

anyways did you know I drew this in MS Paint? i did

[The Gazebo]

Nice

Once again you bring on some "ARTISTIC" value to the portal and love the shades in the character and tree, So if anyone calls this soft work they are very wrong, I would say its how it should be you added your own twist, And with flavor if I say so myself.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes as its a beautiful sight of artistic creation.

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ChutneyGlaze responds:

Thats right! dont worry ill tell them off, thank you! for another dose of your awesome reviews!

[The Legendary Sky Fruit]

Apple

So this was cool I like the apple and seems well drawn the "SHINE" seems like it should be on the other side and maybe even much more shine to it even adding a sparkle off the edge of the apple would be really cool, these are just ideas to think about, but anyways nice art work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the shine aspect seems like it should be on the other side and maybe even much more shine to it even adding a sparkle off the edge of the apple would be really cool

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SlashCrazySmirk responds:

Thank you!

[Too Small]

Not small?

I am not sure why you "DECIDED" to call this one small, it has lots of different "SIZES" going on in terms of font and wording. I think the coloring of each word is nice, and this seems to follow that trend at the time of words being used as art the different ways you can position them. I love the overall little ester-like eggs hidden around, the smile faces, they are just lightly added and you have to look closely to see and it all looks great the way you did that. It was subtle and nice and it made me smile looking at them. I think the world is big enough for the both of us. Have you seen Canada? it is just land, land, land, and they don't share it! I think there is lots of space is the world for all of us, but the saying is a nice one to re-create and use here. Nice "COLOR" selection for each letter and nice use of space, but I would have like some shadows and maybe make the text more 3D. A background would have been nice, maybe just a speech-bubble like background around the text to give it a bit more fullness and body. I wish you also made this font yourself but I see most of it is just a program and that is something I wish you would not shy away from, because I do enjoy when you use your own fonts. Overall not bad tho.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some king of background around the text and font and then maybe make the font more 3D and use your own original font that you tend to draw.

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Cyberdevil responds:

Goes with the message, I think? The world not being big enough? Yupp, think this style had a peak of popularity a few years back, but t's still very much a thing. The background hmm... I had the gray pentagons there, but maybe they're a bit faded... thanks for the review!

I think overpopulation's going to be a pretty big problem in the future btw, large masses of land or no, we're consuming too much... but this one wasn't really about that anyway. XD Good to hear you've got a positive outlook on that!

[Charlotte and Smokey Bones]

Nice

So this was pretty cool, I love the visual behind her a very good detailed character and her simple look about it all was nice, my suggestion for improvement might be more texture in her hair or even a shine in her hair, but overall this was a pretty good piece of artwork here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
my suggestion for improvement might be more texture in her hair or even a shine in her hair

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IketheGhost responds:

Thanks for the tip! c:

[Clown]

Awesome

Okay this one here, this one will be a fave for me as I love a good "CLOWN" and this one here is very sinister and happy and I love that kind of clown LOL almost like he is evil and wants to take your soul or just candy or maybe just creep out the kiddies. I think the smile was the best part here as you made a focus of sharp teeth and big mouth to drawn you into a clown feature and creepy atmosphere. I think the hair is similar to that of Bozo the Clown and that is always good to drawn on as it was one of the more famous ones. I think using red for the hair and some in the face is a big clown color and it is good you used that to keep things on the right track, it also gives that more sinister look down for this "CHARACTER". More so the "RED" under the eggs that implies you've crushed or killed something with this egg and the clowns help was very nice indeed. While your last Easter piece was fun and "WHOLESOME", this is sinister and dark. I like that you can do contrasts in work like that with the same theme of the holiday. I also love the egg and the shaping with the text in front. It really pops out that text and draws you into it when you first look at the work. I think tho that the background is a bit too white, I would have loved some hell fire, or maybe a red setting backgrounds, something to keep with your theme and not just a plain white, but still a good piece overall and interesting to see you different things for Easter.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just add more of a background with that sinister look and feeling, but nice overall.

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Cyberdevil responds:

Maybe all of the above. XD And I agree with the background on this one, could've used something stronger! Thanks again for all these comments!

[Nott the Bravest]

This was pretty cool

So this was really nifty character you have here and I think you could have gone with more "TEXTURE" on the skintone but what you did have was pretty impressive and more style love all the little detail, the vibrant colors theme here was pretty good too if you ask me.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some slight more texture and meshed color.

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IketheGhost responds:

Well hey thanks, I'll be sure to work on that!

[Draw Your Summer 2013]

Detailed

Wow ok so "NICE-JOB" here because of all the detail and effort you've put into this one. You can really tell you put a lot of work into this piece right here and this piece here is something you can't take your eyes off of due to all this nice detail and artistic effort. I love the use of the "GREENS" for the summer, you've made that the main color and it worked well to establish your theme of summer. I really enjoyed the bunny or rabit you've got in the lower corner, the fuzzy details you've given to the creature was nice and overall made me feel "WARM-AND-FUZZY" inside. The way you do animal hair is a good texture and detailed style that I hope you keep up because I found it more realistic. I like the ping-pong table and paddle to show the summer activties you do and the overall feeling of athletic joy it brings out. The sun is nice with good shading and textures and the overall "TEXTURE" of the piece really come out alive here like it is a summer time party. I think next time try to not have those white parts that you've done, I understand the design you're doing here, but with so much going on, it just looks like you forgot to include something when you do this, like it was an unfinished part that you forgot, and you wouldn't want to make it seem like that, but it is still great even with that part, it was my only real concern, so good job on this one, keep it up and I hope to see more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Eliminate the white space parts, but that is only the bad part of this really.

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Cyberdevil responds:

I'm really not seeing the surplus of white with this one! XD Just the two clouds, which are unfortunately an inescapable part of summertime too... but maybe I could've worked on adding some depth to them too. Making them stand out. Glad you enjoyed this otherwise! You caught the feeling I was going for too.