XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Shower Of Juice]

Notbad

Well here is another marketing idea and could work it seems, somewhat "BLAND" but maybe thats the idea, I like backrounds so im thinking that some sort of backrounds would really work here, just something to think about.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backround designs would be nice.

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Cyberdevil responds:

Mmm I didn't spend all that much thought on surrounding, which may give it a somewhat bland impression. It was the vending machine idea that was the main thing, though I do agree it could've looked better with something behind it. Thanks for commenting!

[Shield (Green)]

A green ver

So this is like the "ORANGE" one you had in 2009 ? the colors are nice, the design is flashy and it really does speak volumes and jumps out at you, I like it, would make for a good "LOGO" of some sorts.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maaybe something a bit in the backround but not much.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Yes indeed, same shield; different color. Glad you like it! :) Looks like you reviewed the other in great detail too.

[Zebras Are Cool]

Not sure whats going on here

Well not sure whats going on here but I still found this to be pretty interesting the "BACKROUNDS" are pretty cool too, the "FONTS" could be styled up a tad bit more but it was an interesting piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some improved fonts, maybe some texture in the backrounds.

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Cyberdevil responds:

Yeah me neither. XD Thanks for the feedback though!

[Wydowna Spider]

Nice

Wow this was a nice spider rendition, the "REDS" really seem to comeout on this one and even the "LIGHTING EFFECTS" seem to come off very well like the spiderweb and such, so nice job here I really like what you have done here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe some darker backrounds so that the lighting effects can really shine off well.

~X~

ROGUEKELSEY responds:

Thank you very much for the constructive feedback. I will take it into consideration in the future!

[melting rabbit]

Cute

Ok here is something cute, wouldnt mind some "COLOR" even if it was just a little but what you do have here is pretty awsome very nice lines good outcome.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some color would be nice.

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JulienGerards responds:

Thank you for the review :)
I was planning to put in color afterwards but I still hesitate about the technique to use

[Superman]

You have some nice art

Amanda I would like to say you have some really nice artwork looked at some of your stuff and it was very nice work, as for this one, I do like the paintstyle and the detail that you bring out in it, love the use of color, anyways keep u the good work, hope to see more of your work soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This was fine as is in my opinion.

~X~

amandadarko responds:

Thank you for your detailed review! I'm glad you like it ☺

[I Don't Get It]

Nice work here

Well this one is pretty good some nice work fresh and smooth lines, the shades and color tones in the "HAIR" was also pretty good, so overall a fantastic job here I liked it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I like that you added some color in here but wouldnt mind a tad bit more not much though just more items like you have already.

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QuiteSplendid responds:

glad you like it. if you mean add color for her color scheme then that will remain unchanged. that's how she's suppose to look like

[Dreams]

Nice

These are always so nice and detailed the pattern seems to all intertwine with one another and just comes together overall, the "COLORS" are notbad but maybe more deeper colors would have made this work even better. nice job overall, I like it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More deeper colors in my opinion, but its pretty good sofar.

~X~

VortexVisionz responds:

Thanks for your honesty! I'm always glad to see constructive criticism on my work. Glad you like though!

[I need a doctor]

Oh

Well this was interesting, has a whole comic feel I would like to see more "BLOOD" maybe dripping down and such that would be more of a plus but what you do have here is pretty good I thought. so nice job there, and nice color tones here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More blood but that may just be me.

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helloutcry responds:

thanks for the review man! Much appreciated! Mad love!