XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[technoprist]

Wow very nice

Wow I have to say this was very impressive theres a lot of metal here would love to see some "SHINE" comming off some of it maybe even some "WAR-WOUNDS" and damge from battle not all clean and such.

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Very nice piece needs some shine and even lighting effects on the bulbs, now to be honest its a great piece as is.

~X~

Evgeniy2013 responds:

thenx
I will consider your councils then

[Wii Sunrise]

Notbad

This one is bright and sunny like, and that is a nice sun comming about, almost seems as if you could possible make some glow effects in the white line areas, but other then that this was a pretty good piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more glow in the white break areas of the sun would have a more focus on the brightness of the sun.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Seems like you've been looking around for Wii-related art? ;) Glow effects could be cool, as with the other one there's not much depth here either, so that might add some of that. Will give it a try if I ever remake this, thanks!

[Wii]

Nice

Nice shades of color in the backround, the fonts seem simple and the main colors are alright there was not much depth but maybe this was more of a simple style and those are still pretty good, overall nice stuff here.

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I like the color tones but wouldnt mind more "DEPTH" of color with more shades and deeper textures almost.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

The 'Wii' was actually made with vectors as well, so no font. Good feedback, thanks!

[Linear]

Life

Well its exactly as it says "LIFE" and that describes it clearly, there could be some splash effects thrown into this like some ripped open area with color comming out expressing life can be anything. but just an idea i like the meaning here though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned above, break the norm adding some color or splash effect could be that area of effect.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

That would be cool. :) Thanks for the feedback, and sorry I didn't respond earlier, for some reason this didn't show up in my feed back in September.

[Picasso Face]

Hmmm notbad

Well this was notbad, kind of interesting, I like the color tones and shades, even the outline seems to come together all in its own cute way, would have loved some "SHADES" in the backround but other then that this was notbad. will have to check out some of your other stuff soon.

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Nice work here, nice basic tones but all came together, maybe some extra shades and whatnot.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

I wasn't really going for 'cute'. XD Thanks for the comment though! Always fun to read your reviews.

[Arashi]

Nice

Well this one was nice work, there are some nice things here I think there are some things you can jump on more, like the red "EYES" bring that out a tad more more of a glow, the lightning bolts that are around him could also have a glow or thicker lines aswell.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More glow on the red eyes, and more bold on the lightning lines surrounding him.

~X~

Undeadkitty13 responds:

i see thank you

[Alakazam]

Nice work

The shine and detail on this was really good, I wouldnt mind more "SHINE" like on the spon and maybe some sort of backround something small. just an idea there but its pretty good piece.

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Some added shine like on the spoon would be nice.

~X~

EliasAdams responds:

Ok, thx for the tips!!

[Alpha and Omega]

Dark

There is a certain darkness to this and I believe that was the intent the expression on the guys face is right on the black and white on this is pretty nifty but a touch of color wouldnt hurt even though the eyes had color maybe a bit more of the color idea.

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Some color would be a nice touch.

~X~

linda-mota responds:

holy shit this pic is 7 years old wow i forgot this exists.

[lion]

Awsome

This one really caught my eye, the deep style of talent really shows off well with this one, there are some bland areas that can be worked on but other then that this was awsome. This was a nice piece you have shown some great detail and great "TEXTURE" I do think you should ad some frame or borders that add to the detail of this, anyways nice work here. Now before I go I do wish to say this was a pleasure to view and review, its stuff like this that keep me interested in reviewing awsome stuff just like this.

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I do think you should ad some frame or borders that add to the detail of this.

~X~

Jon-Fuchsworld responds:

Thank you very much! I know that I am an enemy for textures and the details, I never was a good painter, but I work on it! thanks for the good and the helpful words!

[Final Prophecy: Gliese 581 G]

Really nice work

This was cool, has a very nice ice feel about it now here I would have liked to see one of two things or both maybe some more sunlight comming in from that gap, and maybe some wind blowing to show off more ice feel to it, but anyways nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
maybe some more sunlight comming in from that gap, and maybe some wind blowing to show off more ice feel to it,

~X~

Acrylla responds:

Thanks man! I appreciate the feedback and I agree, the whole painting lacks in a lot of ways.