XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[A Drawin' for a Drawler]

Interesting

That hat is scary, it looks like it is gonna eat that poor kid. Also this kid needs some sun, very very pale. Is he canadian perhaps? I think you did a good job here, but it seems very whited out, like the lighting seems off and it is too bright, almost faded. I work sharpen and darken this up a bit more and add more color to the face. If you are going to give everything else color then why not try it for the male too? That is just a suggestion, because otherwise you obviously have talent and an ability to drawn well, but I would work on your use of coloring. Good efforts.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Work on coloring in the face of the male here, but keep it up

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Zaccura responds:

Haha I definitely agree about it being too bright, he is not that pale lol. I was quite new to painting realistically so I was a tad afraid when adding the shading to his face for fear of "messing it up". However the lack of color in his skin is intentional as I suppose I was trying to do some fancy shmancy thing where it's monochrome except for his clothes, not sure I pulled it off properly haha XD

Thank you so much for the constructive and honest review, I really appreciate it! :D

And indeed his hat is quite scary.

[Life on Mars?]

Very nice

I like the "LIGHTING" I kind of feel like you should have had a more dominant lighting come in on the man or characters maybe even some backround props, I have seen a number of Art pieces come through here and there, And this one is not perfect But I do like the elements on this one, While not perfect but you have shown that what you have here does work, And you do get your idea across the board.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I kind of feel like you should have had a more dominant lighting come in on the man or characters maybe even some backround props

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DocLew responds:

Perfection doesn't exist but thanks.

[Through the Forest of the Night]

Wow beautiful

Wow there is a lot going on in this piece and the trees, my god the trees are just wonderful. You feel like you're about to walk into a mystery or a horror with this red riding hood. It gives that Red Riding Hood feeling off with the cape she has on in full red. I do love the way she is not facing you but behind you. I love love the dark blue tones and coloring here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing, great job with this one.

~X~

AngshumanDhar responds:

Thank you so so much for such kind words. Really glad that you liked it. 😊😊😊

[two world one life]

Awsome

so this was pretty awsome and I have to say this was really good work and I have to say the use of "COLOR" here is very amazing im an instant fan of this piece it just jumps out at you with the color vibe, anyways nice work indeed, if anything needs to be changed on this I would just ad that a frame or window frame like we are looking into there color world here, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
if anything needs to be changed on this I would just ad that a frame or window frame like we are looking into there color world here

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AshisAnimation responds:

Thanks man... 😁

[Tali and Yuno]

Pretty Cute

So this was really cute I love the "SHINE" you ad on the faces and other points this was a "SIMPLE" piece but is radiant with all sorts of little details that make it cute so nice job on this piece I do think you could use some backround work maybe some backdrop scene of a city scene or trees etc, anyways nice work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I do think you could use some backround work maybe some backdrop scene of a city scene or trees etc

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D-SuN responds:

Thanks for the feedback!! Very much appreciated and inspiring to draw more!

[Interstellar]

Cool

So first off very "NICE" and cool design here, the "SHINE" was nice but I think you could have had more of a sparkle and shine come off of the eye pieces and the helment itself, maybe some more domminant stars even, these are just some small ideas anyways nice work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think you could have had more of a sparkle and shine come off of the eye pieces and the helment itself, maybe some more domminant stars even

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StevieHarrisonIII responds:

Thank you for your help I will defiantly work on it thank you again

[Tera - Elin]

Very nice

The "STRUCTURE" on the character is amaung I do think you should ad more glows and lighting effects like with the circular beam she has going on and some "BACKROUND-ELEMENTS" would also be nice, Now this entry wont get the perfect award but what entry does, But what it does offer, Is a good balance of what works and some elements that you did bring forward are nice, Now go on and make more nifty stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I do think you should ad more glows and lighting effects like with the circular beam she has going on and some backround elements would also be nice,

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MLeth responds:

Thanks for the feedback! I don't think more glow would've benefited this piece as I feel I already went too far with the glow on the magic rune. If you add too much glow on something that isn't the focal point of a piece you might end up with an unfocused drawing. Her really is the focal point!

[Cute Nepali girl]

Simple but nice

So this was notbad at all, it is simple and the colors are basic but you have a nice structure here I do think you could ad much more to this with some textures more backround scene and so on, overall this was a nice piece indeed, and hope you make more like this sometime.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I do think you could ad much more to this with some textures more backround scene and so on

~X~

AshisAnimation responds:

Thanks for giving me an advice
..... 😁

[Sample]

Notbad

Ok so notbad work here but a lot is going on and it seems to be a bit confusing. I do like the "OVERALL-DESIGNS" you have going on, each one is unique and has something to offer. The way you wrote your name into the tag off to the side a bit was interesting. From the "LITTLE-MAN" in his canoe, to the face, to the book, etc. The font was great and the way you drew those stars around the font really added to it and made for a "DAZZLING-LOOK" with good solid elements of original ideas. I think the fonts you always create are some of your best pieces of art, but you've heard that from me before. I would hope that maybe you'd make the text bigger next time, more space should have been used here as there is a lot of white space going on in the edges. White backgrounds are fine, but when white space is surrounding your work it can get lost and it makes it look smaller as well, so I would either "MAKE-THINGS-LARGER" to fit the space or crop that all out next time. My fav part of this is the little man trying to canoe to somewhere. I would love to see you expand on this one and maybe tell a small story, with a background, and maybe some animation? That would be interesting to see. Overall a good sample, needs to be something more tho, and I hope you expand on these ideas in the near future.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As stated above, but mostly just take each element and make individual ideas and submissions with these and remember to eliminate your white space as it makes the project seem lost and look small.

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Cyberdevil responds:

An animated version of this hmm... I like that idea! It'd be the right time for a 10th year anniversary edition too. Thanks for the feedback; views as always!

[Struggling sister]

Very nice work

So this was really good and you really have a realistic look here, especilly on the faces, the paint style is just absolutly amazing and I am very impressed with the work you have done here, so you get my praise on this one its a beauitifull piece, make more soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe some more sunlight or some of it even if none at all its a fine piece.

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AshisAnimation responds:

thank you so much my friend.... i will remember your suggestion.... :)