XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[A Little Squibble]

ok

Well this one is okay, I mean, there could have been more going on here, you have a lot of things you could be adding here like a border or more details and color even. I see it is another text font piece where you are writing your letters. I think you have a nice sqribble going on here and the elements are there, but I do think you could have done more with this one in particular.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
as mentioned above, needs more than the font

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

I do like text. :) Thanks for the comment!

[2016¤1]

2016

What a year. I never expected that year to be so much for me, and I am so glad to have had that year for certain reasons. I love your text and the sentences you added here. It almost looks like a flyer for the year or a newsletter of what was and is to be. I think the way you did the 2016 number was neat and had good shades and coloring. I like the way your lines are so clean and vectored in this piece. Overall a great way to look at that year, that wonderful year of 2016.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing to really improve on as I like this one as it is.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

What happened for you in 2016? :O Hehe yeah, it was a bit of a poster of inspiration for the year to come. Thanks.

[Inktober #4 Public Message]

Nice msg

Well I have to say this one was really simple and fun however you did bring some good font and text into this one and has some nice coloring and there was some fun little textures inside this. It was really decent overall so props to you on this piece of art. You should put a few pieces of this type of art together to make a comic.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Good job but it would be cool if you made this into a comic.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Hmmmm wondering how I could make a comic out of this... if you have any ideas there feel free to share. ;) Thanks though.

[Inktober #5 False Bullet]

Umm

Ok there isnt much to say here. You have literally nothing going on here. I do like the joke you wrote in the bottom about being worth a shot. It was a good joke. I did laugh but next time draw something. I'm surprised you didnt get in shit for this hahaha.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Actual content next time bud lol

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Blank is part of the joke do, as in a blank bullet, you know? False bullet? But yeah, this was just a witty way to skip a day. :) I thought you might've skipped these particular ones intentionally!

[Inktober #6 Rainsicks]

Decent

Well notbad but this seems like it continues or something, nice looking characters under the rain but could use more colors inside the people themselves, you left me wanting more though and wanting to see more of this purple rain, so anyways it was a decent little ink art and I think alone it is a good piece but maybe make this one into a flash animation.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Turn this into an actual flash with animated rain drops.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Purple rain hmm... gets me thinking of the movie with that same name there! Actually i the midst of watching it today. :) That would be pretty cool, though seems like a lot of extra effort.

[Inktober #7 Lucky 7]

Lucky?

Well this one here was very entertaining with this number you ussd, kept me wondering why you picked this number, and gave me a few smiles with the use of yellows and the outlines in the numbers and squiggles, and somewhat random squiggles at that but thats what i liked about it, so good job and keep it up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
One thing I tell artists is that a border will really improve your art, and I think this one here could use just one of those but it is fine as is.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Maybe some subconscious Las Vegas reference; maybe some subconscious reference to something or one on site. :) 7's generally considered a lucky number so... seems coincidence weighs strongly in its favor! Glad you liked it.

[Inktober #8 Eightball]

Love this

I really do love a good 8 ball piece. I have one or two myself that I have done. I do think your version of this is interesting. Books piled over it was a new take on it I have never seen before. I do think that there is still too much white space and the overall 8ball is a bit too small but the colors in the books and their positioning over it with a slight tilt was nice to see. Very creative piece here. I did enjoy it

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think this one here could use a background of sorts to limit the white space and make the 8ball bigger but it is pretty good so far

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Ah yes, I remember those! Knowledge weighs heavier than luck... maybe? ;) Thanks for the review!

[Inktober #9 Cloud Nines]

Nice

Another nice piece of art you have here some good coloring and very nice visuals with the 9s. I would for sure like to see this as an animated short, maybe just have the nines floating downward in a gif type display with the window staying still. I think the use of the red and yellow curtains was a nice touch too and made it feel more realistic.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nice art here but needs to be animated

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Animation required every time there's something falling huh. ;) Thanks!

[Inktober #10 Clear]

Nice work

This was cool and this was a one in terms of quality here and your line styles were pretty consistent. I wouldn't mind even more colors as there was one the one color and it tends to get lost with the rest of the work when you have only one solid color going on. I think that this one is pretty nice as it is tho, but yes, definately needs color. I hope to see this next time with my suggestions as you have repeated designs before.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more color other than the only one you have going

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Feels like when I start using additional colors it easily messes things up, sometimes best to opt for simplicity, but I shall experiment; see what happens in the future. :) Thanks again!

[Inktober #24 The Greeting Card]

Card?

I think one here is more of a morse code than a card but this piece here is very interesting. I mean, it isn't like your others and say is a saying. I am trying to work on what it says actually, because it is bothering me, so you have my interested in that aspect. I think the lines you used for the text is good, but too basic. You have much white space surrounding them and you could have cropped this a but so the lines are bigger and easier to read. Apparently this translates out to "HELLO". is that correct?

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Less white space and make the text bigger to read the code more

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Well it's a card with morse code. The pun's in both title and code itself, so if you actually know the code... heeey, you actually looked it up! :D Yes indeed, it's a very literal greeting card! Thanks for that effort!