XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Masterpeach]

Mmm peach

Ok well I do like a peach now and then, something sweet and you've got a good idea of the look of one going on here. You are using your ink style for this and I like that, I like the lines of textures you have created as well. I like the overall feeling of it that is gives off too. I would love to see you have more peaches next time or attach it to perhaps a tree or something? It would be nice to add it to a bit more of a background setting as fruit alone can be a bit dule. Overall tho it is a pretty piece and interesting fruit concept.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
as mentioned above, needs a background and more of a setting

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Cyberdevil responds:

Well it's just one because: master peach, you know. ;) Glad you liked the texture though! I was pretty happy with that too. Was experimenting with a few different hues instead of just brighter/darker of the same color, and it actually worked OK with this one. Thanks for the comment again! Though regarding those backgrounds... rain check.

[Conan The Snowman]

Cute

Ok this one was very original and cute because I've never really seen a snowman with glasses before. I mean why did you name him Conan too? I like the name but it doesn't work with the glasses to me. He should have a more geek name like Kevin. I am not sure but overall the piece was nice and you captured that cartoon snowman look. I like the snow and effects around him and the blue eyes were a nice touch. You almost gave him a sort of human face and expression. Overall I liked this one.

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nothing to change

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Cyberdevil responds:

I guess you haven't read Detective Conan huh. :) Definitely recommended if you're into manga/detective fiction/any comics in general. Glad you liked this one, background and all!

[Merry Early]

A cute comic

So this was a rather "CUTE" comic, you should think about making these longer maybe a few more frames, and maybe even making a long running web comic of some sort, this was a good joke well executed and the artwork was notbad either I enjoyed this piece here.

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you should think about making these longer maybe a few more frames, and maybe even making a long running web comic of some sort

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BigEyedBen responds:

A fair analysis.

For one thing, I enjoy drawing like I did when I was 9 years old. I'd like to believe I could make more detailed artwork, but my cartoon character was invented when I was a child.

I usually choose the amount of frames based off the story I want to tell with them. I've occasionally, in the past, made some strips without dialogue to kind of emphasize the point that there's an awkward pause between scenes. If you wish to elaborate on their length I am more than willing to hear your input.

What sort of web comic would you prefer to see? A running series based on random events, or something along a plotline that takes place along a series of story-based events? I've had plans for both.

[Plasma]

Really nice

So this was nice You have some nice "NEON" and "GLOW" effects in this and in that case I think you could ad a nifty neon or glowing border and or frame to reflect all the glow points of this piece, you have a nice character and it really stands out well so nice job on this piece.

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I think you could ad a nifty neon or glowing border and or frame to reflect all the glow points of this piece

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gatekid3 responds:

Thanks.
It has a neon look to it, but I feel like a neon frame would just muddy things a bit. Not only would it take away from the face in my opinion, a neon boarder just goes against what i was going for i think. Like i said, it was one of those plasma ball things. Maybe darker boarders or background would help emphasize the light more, but I think light boarders wouldn't look particularly nice.

[Murky]

Nice color

So here with this one you have added some really nice color and made this jump out with a "VIBRANT" feel about it all, some really nice work here, seems as though the backround was a little light and the space could be filled maybe some color or props a design or something, this was some nice work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
seems as though the backround was a little light and the space could be filled maybe some color or props a design or something

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Cromatoid responds:

Thanks for the feedback I'll consider it for my next artwork.

[Scavenger]

A nice creation here

so this was a nice creation you have here, the "DETAIL" was pretty awsome I like the paint style texture in this too you braught some really nice detail all around here with some really nice texture even, as for any kind of changes or improvments this was just great as it is, so nice job here.

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as for any kind of changes or improvments this was just great as it is

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MrCreeep responds:

thank you!

[Carried Away]

Nice

So this was a nice "ART-PIECE" I like the fresh "COLORS" you have here on this one, and I like the close up view too the fresh colors are really nice, almost seems like you could do a series of these characters in different themes and whatnot, but anyways nice work here.

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seems like you could do a series of these characters in different themes and whatnot

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Flashlight237 responds:

'Bout time I got an actual review. Care to elaborate on what you mean by "a series of these characters in different themes and whatnot?"

[Tavern]

Very nice detail

So this was some nice "DETAIL" I dont think I have any tips for improvments on this one as you have outdone yourself with nice effects and details and great art ofcourse, And Finally a Symbolic piece with all the right touches, The skills on these types really come out, and thats why I have come to enjoy these types as they speak volumes of success, so nice effort. You have Appropriately added all the right elements, You really braught something to life here from art to live a very nice piece and its stuff like this that really make me go wow, I have enjoyed this greatly.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I dont think I have any tips for improvments on this one as you have outdone yourself with nice effects and details and great art ofcourse

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LukeWarmCalder responds:

Wow. Thanks for your response. I really enjoyed drawing this and appreciate hearing that others like it too.

[Discovery of the myth in the desert]

Wow nice

Now this was something really "GOOD" I really like the "MYSTERY" you have presented with this piece and you can see the detail in the giant walking along the sand as the people are in aw, so you presented something good with a story behind it, I think if you added some sun beam from the one at the far end it might create more of a nice effect, but anyways nice job.

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I think if you added some sun beam from the one at the far end it might create more of a nice effect

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Enjoyyourlife8 responds:

Such a comment, Thank you! Really appreciate this!!
Just a little note to have in mind, I made this one 10.19.2016 so I have myself improved quite alot since this drawing and I have study this and seen alot more details to improve on with this drawing. But for my old version we can be happy over it :)
Still thank you and have a awesome day!

[Purpose]

Really nice

So this was some nice "WORK" I love all the details in this piece, seems like some added shine and even sparkle could have been pushed on some those detailed points, but a really good art piece here and shows off a sort of story even like she is on a mission.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
seems like some added shine and even sparkle could have been pushed on some those detailed points

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BoyPorcelain responds:

Thank you!

I'm glad to see the idea came through, i will keep that in mind next time i use light like that.. If you have the time i have more art pieces that could do with some crit. Would love whatever feedback there is! :)