XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Looking Glass Sphere]

Wow nice

Wow this was nice not sure how you did this but its a beautiful "SPERE" or "ORB" love the color that comes up in it from the ground piece, I like the shine too but maybe a sharp sparkle comming off that shine, Anyways very nice work here I have enjoyed seeing and reviewing this piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I like the shine too but maybe a sharp sparkle comming off that shine

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nuFF3 responds:

Hi

Thanks for the feedback.

I actually remade this piece two years after this was made.
https://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/nuff3/looking-glass-sphere-fortune

[Colorful Witch]

Nice color

And here you have some nice use of "COLOR" I really like the rainbow like colors here I think you should brighten them up and maybe even with a glow, And here we have something fresh, something interesting and kind of nifty, there was a good element about this you really know how to bring things together in a good way, and i was pleased with all of what you presented here, making something pretty interesting. So Nice work on this piece of design, I will always enjoy stuff like this and will always look for more stuff like it among the art portal and beyond.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I really like the rainbow like colors here I think you should brighten them up and maybe even with a glow

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Caaath responds:

OMG WOW, thank you for everything and for all the tips to improve it! <3 It was very kind of you!

[Mermaid Me]

Neat

Well notbad at all, and great for a mermaid piece. I see that this one had all the elements like decent characters and whatnot, but the detail in the tail was the best part in terms of effects and style, and great drawing of ocean life aswell. I love the use of lighting in this aswell, you've got ocean underwater light down pretty well, in the future you may find me reviewing your work alot, so hope to see much more soon...

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Most-High-Studios responds:

Thank you very much for your review! I'm always looking for feedback.

[purple]

Very welldone

And this was very welldone, love the character design here and i love the backround detail very nice indeed, You bring some good Insight to this piece and you have Captured some interesting visual ideas here, So this one here is pretty awsome, this piece really caught my eye, I like your deep style of detail and what not, it really came out well. I am most impressed with this, But Before I start saying anything the first thing I noticed on here is that it really jumps out at you with a nice unique style, you really do have the skills for great stuff such as this piece, Now that I have that out of the way I have to say you did an impressive job here actually.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Didnt find any changes needed you have presented a beautifull piece of art here.

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cashumeru responds:

you had me expecting some big overarching flaw i might've missed lol, thanks wayne!

[Scrab remake]

Notbad

I think this is pretty good, but something seems off about it....Not the design or concept but the image itself seems blurred and overworked in certain areas. I think it needs bit of a sharpen and some shading needs to be done. I do like this piece. I like the flow of the scrab into the background very smooth there throwing in some neveda type sceneary was a nice touch. Good effort all around but why does it have abs?

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just sharpen this one up a bit.

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Zelgeist responds:

Thank you for a insightful feedback. I appreciate it very much.

It has abs because its torso is supposed to be very human-like. Not utterly like human, but pretty close.

[Jinx now in 2.5D]

Very nice

So this was a nice art piece here the animation was notbad but I thaught you could have done more with the animation maybe have it turn more instead of the short moment it has, This is something different and you dont see this type of art and style everyday so its nice to see something good here today that is different. And now we come to the closing of this review or almost, but you do have a good peice of art here I like the efforti like this creation and I like your attention for detail, so keep up the good work and i look forward to even more stuff from you. Maybe a little Polish here or there would be an idea.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I thaught you could have done more with the animation maybe have it turn more instead of the short moment it has

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Anioco responds:

Oh thanks!
Actually, i'm gonna print this on a lenticular card, so it doesn't has to move too much.

:)

[vine]

Nice work

So this was pretty cool, love the black and white of this all it really came out well and made for some nice visual you really made it allurring and a good visual here as for any kind of improvement not sure this was a stand alone on its own as is, and odesnt need any major changes.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No major changes needed.

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RannitX responds:

Thanks for the input.

[K/Da Akali]

Very nice

This was "COOL" I really like the "NEON" on this wish it would glow even more or just a few parts glowed even more, I really like when people make these styles of artwork, because its not everydy we get to see stuff like this so thats all a big plus. And so here is my Extended part of the review Appropriately done if I say so myself, And now As I do end here I will say it was a nifty art piece with some nice design elements, you have shown you have the talents of some nifty art. So my last wording on this is that this was a Symbolic piece of art.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
wish it would glow even more or just a few parts glowed even more

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SouredApple responds:

I'll make note lol Thanks ;)

[Alien Concept]

These are cool

For some reason this reminds me of the simpsons alien creatures or something, I like your design though some more shading and shine in the ship would be good, and some more backround detail aswell, but other then that this was a cool alien ship or creature, anyways nice work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I like your design though some more shading and shine in the ship would be good, and some more backround detail aswell

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IketheGhost responds:

Well hey, thanks for the tips! c:

[Step By Step]

I like this one

Okay so this one was different from the usual inktober art. I did like the overall feeling and setting here. I did like the use of colors and your small stick character was good. The sun at the end was nice, almost like he went on a little walk as the sun rose. I think your comic panels are good and the text is good, but it is a bit small. Id love your to make this in bigger dimensions next time so things are more visible.

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make a bigger version of this for next time

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Cyberdevil responds:

The idea was that he's walking through the seasons, slow but steady, one step per panel. :) Probably not as visual as possible without more differences between them though. Glad you liked it!