XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Inktober #2]

Not bad

I see you've not submitted this one for voting, but I think it is pretty neat as it is. I do like your orange color use and the eyes on these characters are very cute and unique. I like the fact you have an orange under them going with your theme here of oranges. I think the white space is a bit unneeded but you can always add more background later to your work. I know you've done vector backgrounds before so it is nice to see when you do those. I think next time add a bit more and it will be a fully completed piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More additions to this and less white space

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Yeah there's quite a few of these I didn't really feel qualify as portal quality. :) But thank you. These are all Inktober doodles after all so I haven't spent a tremendous amount of time on each one, but will keep getting better I hope; make better things even without tremendous amounts of time required! :) Appreciate all these reviews!

[MCD]

Decent

I do love a good logo for companies. I think this was not bad and was done well for what it is. I do think your lighting is off in places, it just seems all over the place with those dots, but I see this making a good logo or something for a banner. I do like the use of color and your vector designs seem to flow well with polished line work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Work on the lighting for your designs a bit more but good overall

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Hmm yeah, not sure what I was going for with those dots, seems like an unfinished pattern when you start looking at it... good eye. And glad you liked the logo overall!

[Inktober #26]

Riddle

Ok so this one here is like a riddle, or it reminds me of the riddler. I do like the overall space used and the fact you never left too much out in terms of the question marks. I do find just plain black for all the question marks to be a bit boring and I do not see why you didn't try to add color here and there to spice it all up. I do like this tho and I hope next time you'll do it in different colors.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Try doing this with more different colors next time, as stated above.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Ah The Riddler too, could've been a reference! Well sometimes... less is more? XD Thanks for the review again!

[Inktober #31]

Dark

Ok so this one was dark and I love the red of all of it. You seem to have a hidden monster inside the red using lines and tricks and I think that was a really good idea. The shadows are nice and the black border around the entire image really works. I would like to see more of this, but not just the same one but with the same elements. Keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More of this would be great with different designs

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Yes indeed, he's in there somewhere, lurking in the shadows, surveying the world outside, radiating an untamed and intimate cruelness... glad you liked this one! :) Hope to do something similar later on too. I liked the idea. And how most of it turned out.

[Robo-janitors]

Fresh

So this one here has some very fresh "ART" allthough some added backround on this or atleast a prop or two maybe even just a design patern back there would be cool, A good piece of art here, it has some nice elements about this, allthough I could see it improving but I will touch on that later, but you do have some nice style here on this piece. and I look forward to see what else comes from your creativity, so keep that element of qaulity up. Now while I will be ending this review soon, this piece does bring some interesting visuals to the table and thats all a positive thing.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some added backround on this or atleast a prop or two maybe even just a design patern back there would be cool

~X~

GoodBadArtist responds:

Thank you for feedback! And it's my old piece and I wanted to make it simple and just try my hand on this kind of characters. Glad you liked it and I'll take you advice and improve on my future art!

[Yokaink]

Black and white at its best

So here was something done in some black and white the black and white at its best and you have showcased that here today with all the detail and "NICE-SHADES" even but some really nifty design you have presented here and "A-NICE-BLACK-AND-WHITE" finish here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would throw a black and white or colored frame on this.

~X~

SaniKink responds:

the frame would actually be a really neat idea!

[Sferic Curves]

A nifty patern

A nifty design and patern if I do say so myself with this "NIFTY-VISUAL-POINT" here, you have some good ideas and you have pushed a nice design out of it your lines and detail make this form a "NIFTY-LITTLE-DESIGN" here and I was really impressed with your design.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would mix some other colors in there.

~X~

OneWhoListens responds:

Thanks for reviewing & for the suggestions!

[Inktober #26 Dalmation]

Decent

Nice detail on the dalmation here. I think when you work with line art your ink is very good and always detailed. I wish you had more color in these those, but I understand not having it as the dalmations are usually only black and white. I think a background of color would have given this a splash and good effects. X marks the spot made me giggle as I am ~X~ and I do mark spots, but not on dogs hehe. I do like this as a good ink piece so keep up the great work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some color in a background with a background

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Hey I didn't think of that additional meaning. :D It really is in the eye of the observer too huh! Glad you got that giggle, and thanks!

[Boogie]

Interesting

Well this one here is a bit different but not uncommon. I do like this one with its use of a frog or lizard, but something reptile and fun with a nice face to show it has an expression of melencolly. It needs more like a background, I don't find it too interesting without one, but it is interesting. You have shading, lighting, coloring, and textures. You just need a solid background here but good job overall.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add up a background to this for more solid look

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Nothing really works without a background huh. :)