XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Stan Lee Remembrance]

Nice

So this was pretty "COOL" So for me Stan lee loved his spiderman and I think you should have had more of that, but regardless this was pretty good, the glasses were nice you have a nice amount of detail, but anyways nice rememberance here with stan lee, hope to see more.

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So for me Stan lee loved his spiderman and I think you should have had more of that

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JackSquatJB responds:

Thanks for the comment. I agree about wanting more Spidey. Originally I was going to have webs coming off his collar but it just didn't look quite right. Honestly I started out simply wanting him to be The Watcher but it snowballed into including his other works and the Spidey hand just ended up being the best spot for it, albeit less prominent.

[Tentacle]

Very Nice

Love the color on this and that art detail on the tongue was very nice, here was an amazing piece of art that needs no changes, This one actually gave a decent vibe of things so I do hate to end on that note, but I did like what was repped here. so hope to see more of that. So this was a nice submission into the portal, You know, I think this is a nice and creative piece, I like the simplicity in this aswell as the detail that you presented, The design itself is intriguing and brings a style of its very own, and even seducing in its own unique way.

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here was an amazing piece of art that needs no changes

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Sevi responds:

Wow, thanks man, everyone's been really nice, and I wonder where is that newgrounds that other people talk about where people would strap you down and shit in your mouth?

[Blood Moon Akali]

Really nice

So this was something nice here you really did bring in the "BLOOD" theme on this but its the expression on her face that I really like making her suggest that shes ready for busness, but regardless of all that you have made some nice details here some really good character detail at that.

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Maybe more reds in there more blood theme elements

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Zakuga responds:

Thanks, I probably won't change this one much or anymore since it was featured on league of legends official website.

[Overlooked]

Nice

So this was something interesting, this one had a nice wavy animation about it, you made it very wavy and that made it "UNIQUE" a nice piece here and nice art style great character even, no changes here on this one its fantastic you should make more like this one.

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A unique piece doesnt need any changes its a fantastic overlook.

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Jogurt-NG responds:

back at it again with the feedback thank you!

[MegaTankMan Spritesheet]

This was cool

So sprite work is a dime o dozen but but this sprite work here of yours was very "NIFTY" you have some pleasent visual here with some really nice flavor, I like what you have done here and its this kind of sprite detail I really enjoy seeing, so keep making sprites.

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Some small color added would be cool.

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Lambtaco responds:

Colour would have been nice, but off-model.

[Basquiat]

Love the color

So with this one you have some really amazing use of color here and just all the different colors really jumped out at me more with this one then anything else, maybe adding some white specs of shine on the crown he has to represent some shine and sparkle would be a plus, I love your creative use of color.

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adding some white specs of shine on the crown he has to represent some shine and sparkle would be a plus

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DocLew responds:

Not to be rude or anything but you're leaving all these reviews to 'help me improve my works' but they're just your personal opinions, not real constructive criticism.
And no, sparkles and shine won't be a plus on Basquiat crown.

[Disgusting]

Nice

Nice work so you have some nice work here, the "REFLECTION" comes off well the red eye was nice I think more glare from the eye would be a nice touch here, but thats my imput on it all, you have some nice character work here and a nice portrait even so nice job.

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I think more glare from the eye would be a nice touch here

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RannitX responds:

Thanks!

[31 Days of Daisy Day 2]

I like the yellow

The yellow backround was nice maybe some texture or yellowish design in the backround, This could use a tiny bit of Polish, but this one does have a lot of detail and it shows, This looks like a blend of artistic quality to me, which makes it very beautiful looking to me. If you ask me its pretty Symbolic and you have got everything down Appropriately well. Theres so much you can do with this and you added some nice detail and its that detail that is so nifty, anyways nice work here.

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The yellow backround was nice maybe some texture or yellowish design in the backround

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loveboxf responds:

Hey thanks for the comment! I feel like I really need to make better backgrounds than just solid colors. It'll be something that I try to tackle more with my drawings from now on. Thanks again :P

[Plant Boi]

Nice

Some big pixels in this one, but its nice, I thaught some added plants in the backround would be a nice touch, I have really enjoyed seeing pixel art over the past year or so and this entry you have here is pretty amazing with some nice artistic style about it, I like the concept of this "PIXEL" piece right from the start some nice work on this one indeed, hope you make more just like this one.

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I thaught some added plants in the backround would be a nice touch

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gatekid3 responds:

There is no background though. or rather, this was just art of the character. So i feel like adding other plants would just be weird. Unless youre just saying, "add a background to it". To which i can only say.... i didnt feel like it.

[ready for kick off]

Nice detail

Alrigh you have some nice work here and this was a great "CHARACTER" nice structure on the character, the bland backround I could see more detail and some scene in the backround aswell, but anyways really nice work here and some very nice detail just needs some backround work.

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the bland backround I could see more detail and some scene in the backround aswell

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kmau responds:

I completely agree! Maybe I should've went with transparency haha.