XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Inktober #31]

Dark

Ok so this one was dark and I love the red of all of it. You seem to have a hidden monster inside the red using lines and tricks and I think that was a really good idea. The shadows are nice and the black border around the entire image really works. I would like to see more of this, but not just the same one but with the same elements. Keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More of this would be great with different designs

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Yes indeed, he's in there somewhere, lurking in the shadows, surveying the world outside, radiating an untamed and intimate cruelness... glad you liked this one! :) Hope to do something similar later on too. I liked the idea. And how most of it turned out.

[Robo-janitors]

Fresh

So this one here has some very fresh "ART" allthough some added backround on this or atleast a prop or two maybe even just a design patern back there would be cool, A good piece of art here, it has some nice elements about this, allthough I could see it improving but I will touch on that later, but you do have some nice style here on this piece. and I look forward to see what else comes from your creativity, so keep that element of qaulity up. Now while I will be ending this review soon, this piece does bring some interesting visuals to the table and thats all a positive thing.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some added backround on this or atleast a prop or two maybe even just a design patern back there would be cool

~X~

GoodBadArtist responds:

Thank you for feedback! And it's my old piece and I wanted to make it simple and just try my hand on this kind of characters. Glad you liked it and I'll take you advice and improve on my future art!

[Yokaink]

Black and white at its best

So here was something done in some black and white the black and white at its best and you have showcased that here today with all the detail and "NICE-SHADES" even but some really nifty design you have presented here and "A-NICE-BLACK-AND-WHITE" finish here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would throw a black and white or colored frame on this.

~X~

SaniKink responds:

the frame would actually be a really neat idea!

[Sferic Curves]

A nifty patern

A nifty design and patern if I do say so myself with this "NIFTY-VISUAL-POINT" here, you have some good ideas and you have pushed a nice design out of it your lines and detail make this form a "NIFTY-LITTLE-DESIGN" here and I was really impressed with your design.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would mix some other colors in there.

~X~

OneWhoListens responds:

Thanks for reviewing & for the suggestions!

[Inktober #26 Dalmation]

Decent

Nice detail on the dalmation here. I think when you work with line art your ink is very good and always detailed. I wish you had more color in these those, but I understand not having it as the dalmations are usually only black and white. I think a background of color would have given this a splash and good effects. X marks the spot made me giggle as I am ~X~ and I do mark spots, but not on dogs hehe. I do like this as a good ink piece so keep up the great work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some color in a background with a background

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Hey I didn't think of that additional meaning. :D It really is in the eye of the observer too huh! Glad you got that giggle, and thanks!

[Boogie]

Interesting

Well this one here is a bit different but not uncommon. I do like this one with its use of a frog or lizard, but something reptile and fun with a nice face to show it has an expression of melencolly. It needs more like a background, I don't find it too interesting without one, but it is interesting. You have shading, lighting, coloring, and textures. You just need a solid background here but good job overall.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add up a background to this for more solid look

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Nothing really works without a background huh. :)

[Masterpeach]

Mmm peach

Ok well I do like a peach now and then, something sweet and you've got a good idea of the look of one going on here. You are using your ink style for this and I like that, I like the lines of textures you have created as well. I like the overall feeling of it that is gives off too. I would love to see you have more peaches next time or attach it to perhaps a tree or something? It would be nice to add it to a bit more of a background setting as fruit alone can be a bit dule. Overall tho it is a pretty piece and interesting fruit concept.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
as mentioned above, needs a background and more of a setting

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Well it's just one because: master peach, you know. ;) Glad you liked the texture though! I was pretty happy with that too. Was experimenting with a few different hues instead of just brighter/darker of the same color, and it actually worked OK with this one. Thanks for the comment again! Though regarding those backgrounds... rain check.

[Conan The Snowman]

Cute

Ok this one was very original and cute because I've never really seen a snowman with glasses before. I mean why did you name him Conan too? I like the name but it doesn't work with the glasses to me. He should have a more geek name like Kevin. I am not sure but overall the piece was nice and you captured that cartoon snowman look. I like the snow and effects around him and the blue eyes were a nice touch. You almost gave him a sort of human face and expression. Overall I liked this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
nothing to change

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

I guess you haven't read Detective Conan huh. :) Definitely recommended if you're into manga/detective fiction/any comics in general. Glad you liked this one, background and all!

[Merry Early]

A cute comic

So this was a rather "CUTE" comic, you should think about making these longer maybe a few more frames, and maybe even making a long running web comic of some sort, this was a good joke well executed and the artwork was notbad either I enjoyed this piece here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
you should think about making these longer maybe a few more frames, and maybe even making a long running web comic of some sort

~X~

BigEyedBen responds:

A fair analysis.

For one thing, I enjoy drawing like I did when I was 9 years old. I'd like to believe I could make more detailed artwork, but my cartoon character was invented when I was a child.

I usually choose the amount of frames based off the story I want to tell with them. I've occasionally, in the past, made some strips without dialogue to kind of emphasize the point that there's an awkward pause between scenes. If you wish to elaborate on their length I am more than willing to hear your input.

What sort of web comic would you prefer to see? A running series based on random events, or something along a plotline that takes place along a series of story-based events? I've had plans for both.