XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Croc]

Nice art

so this was a very nice and colorfull one, with some really nice use of colors and designs and a nifty character it was pretty nifty if you ask me it was a very nice sight and and "ARTISTIC" sight so very nice job on this one and I look forward to even more from you.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Onlything I would even think about changing would be som addition of sparkles and shines.

~X~

ChutneyGlaze responds:

You bet and thank you. I promise to put additional sparkles and shine but only for you Xwayne!

[Dipper Pines]

Cool painting

So this was pretty cool, I like the "PAINT" style you have here and makes it look pretty realistic on this one, the "EXPRESSION" on the face is real scared and worried so you executed that look within the painting very well, I think a darker theme maybe some glowing eyes in the backround would be another key point on this piece, anyways nice work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think a darker theme maybe some glowing eyes in the backround would be another key point on this piece

~X~

RannitX responds:

Thanks for your input. bill cipher kinda blends into the background adding a glowing eye for him could have helped him pop out.

[uzuzuzzbobzozozo]

YAY more

I was hoping to see more from you. I do enjoy your work. I am saddened to see such a low vote on this piece, but some people do not understand dark art I suppose. The girl here seems to be lost or losing herself. The mouth is moving from one place then down and repeating like it has lost it. I love that. I love the element of teeth and sadness coming off of her, the madness within trap inside the body of hurt. The pain of the shadows and red combined make you see something deep inside her, something of sorrow. You wonder why and you wonder if this is fear, a monster, madness, or depression. It makes you think and that is what I like about your work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As discussed before, maybe a more red background instead of white, but I like these as they are.

~X~

shittingpie responds:

TY friend

[Nuclear Power Plant [Game Asset]]

Nice

This one here is okay, It does need a bit of textures and overall shading. You have the ability to make something 3D, but now you need to add your elements of textures, shading, and even some light. You have gradiants going on here, and that can work for shading, but you do need a lot more. Mostly you need more details and textures will help you with that the most. I do find this to be good work tho. I know most 3D images don't render backgrounds, but if you do use this for a game, do not forget your background, or it will feel incomplete. As far as shaping for the structures goes, you did excellent, nice symmetrical shapes and frames.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Needs some details and do not forget to add a background for your game.

~X~

jsabbott responds:

Thanks for the response. I am really a modeller and I just haven't gotten the hang of lighting or texturing yet. This model was made for a tutorial so I'm not going to be using it in real life. :)

[Azuberry (2016)]

Cute and funny

This was cute and made me giggle. I dont think I would eat her, but her hair does look yummy. And you gave it an entertaining value by making me chuckle so I was happy with it very well designed and drawn out. The colors are good and the coloring from line to line is good too. I wish you didn't have so much white space tho, because a lot of white is in your character and that can get lost in the art to the background washing it out. I would add a bit more of the vinagrette style background or a full background here to get rid of as much white space as you can to really make her white details pop and not get lost in translation.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A background to lower the amount of white space

~X~

lukisart responds:

Yeah I am quite afraid of designing backgrounds XD

[Succubus Meloetta]

Cute

Really cute character here love what you did with the "HAIR" here its very flowing and vibrant I think you could ad some more shine to the hair would really have a nice look, I would suggest some backround detail also, but regardless this was a nice character work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think you could ad some more shine to the hair would really have a nice look

~X~

ZedrinBot responds:

That doesn't seem like an improvement, just an idea suggestion (I don't think it'd fit with my intentions or would have a solid impact on the piece personally, especially considering this was a commission where the commissioner paid for a set level of detail).

Thanks for the review, though.

[Shadowrun - Suwi]

Wow nice

Now here was something really nice I "LOVE" the this character design and you gave her some nice expression too, wish there was more in the backround but overall this was good, you have presented something really nice here and it was a pleasent piece of art here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
wish there was more in the backround but overall this was good

~X~

MLeth responds:

Thank you! Although I would argue that the lack of a background is a choice (it was not part of the commission) rather than a flaw to improve on.

[Volpina]

Notbad

Well this was notbad I actually like these animals so that was interesting way you made one into a lady. I wonder if you are a fury fan? You have some decent skills with the brush work as you blended from color to color well and kept that animal fur look and a good amount of detail, the only thing I would suggest would be ad some more background details, the green is interesting and draws you to focus on the animals lady but it needs a bit more, or if not, try a border around the entire piece to just balance out your white space. I did like your name above the tail tho, that was a nice way to sign off the art.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add a background with more detail or try a border to get more white space off of this, but good job

~X~

lukisart responds:

Thank you for your advice!!!

[Umbra Sunrise]

Wow nice

Wow the lighting effect here was amazing this was like a photo of some sort but was really lifelike you have showcased some amazing work here and I love your direction on this piece and others, I have no imput on any changes to this piece its a solid piece of work, so nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I have no imput on any changes to this piece

~X~

nuFF3 responds:

Thanks.

This was one of the first images I made when I got a hold of a 3d renderer.
Its a super simple scene, with the most basic of things.
Even using the stock lens flare effect that came with the package, haha.

[Looking Glass Sphere]

Wow nice

Wow this was nice not sure how you did this but its a beautiful "SPERE" or "ORB" love the color that comes up in it from the ground piece, I like the shine too but maybe a sharp sparkle comming off that shine, Anyways very nice work here I have enjoyed seeing and reviewing this piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I like the shine too but maybe a sharp sparkle comming off that shine

~X~

nuFF3 responds:

Hi

Thanks for the feedback.

I actually remade this piece two years after this was made.
https://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/nuff3/looking-glass-sphere-fortune