XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[ready for kick off]

Nice detail

Alrigh you have some nice work here and this was a great "CHARACTER" nice structure on the character, the bland backround I could see more detail and some scene in the backround aswell, but anyways really nice work here and some very nice detail just needs some backround work.

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the bland backround I could see more detail and some scene in the backround aswell

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kmau responds:

I completely agree! Maybe I should've went with transparency haha.

[Come Into Me fan art]

Wow nice

seems like a "COMIC-BOOK" I could get into and nice to see you still submitting art after all this time, seems like you could have made a special frame or border for this one, So a lot of effort goes into these kinds of art pieces, and thats what amazes me, you have presented a good piece with awsome style. OK so I will leave you with that as a review and say that you have impressed me sofar and was glad to see this fine art piece and i hope you keep up the fantastic and creative ideas, because i will for sure be there looking for more, so keep up the work.

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seems like you could have made a special frame or border for this one

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jouste responds:

interesting take. borders tend to confine my images and i was looking to have this one be a little more chaotic. really interesting observation!

*highfives

[Artillery Unit 0076]

Really cool

I love the "ROBOTIC" feel you have going on here with this one, the "DETAIL" alone is pretty impressive line detail and color detail, so my take on this was that at the bottom where it hits the ground and creates a crack seems like you should have had much more cracks and such there was a lot of unused space on the canvus, but anyways nice work here.

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my take on this was that at the bottom where it hits the ground and creates a crack seems like you should have had much more cracks and such there was a lot of unused space on the canvus

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Imrie responds:

Thanks for taking the time to give feed back it's all appreciate.

[When the lake is a mirror]

Nice animation

So this was pretty "COOL" I really like the "ANIMATION" as it really reflects off the art very well and thats what I really noticed about this piece, the artwork and the characters are really good, as for any improvments I dont think you need any really nice stuff here, anyways keep up the amazing work.

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for any improvments I dont think you need any really nice stuff here

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Jogurt-NG responds:

Thank you I appreciate the feedback!

[Nightmare at P.S. 112]

Haha nice

So this was pretty good I think you have a good idea here and I think you could make a series out of all the scary villians in class or something, But the art was great the backround you made funny like a classroom, and the freddy character has lots of great detail.

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I think you could make a series out of all the scary villians in class or something

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DirtGoblin responds:

This actually started as a joke about a series where Slasher villains go to school to learn how to become slashers. Glad you like it.

[Izzy]

Really nice

Love the amount of "DETAIL" you have going on in this one, Love the back end design too almost creates a frame and border aswell, I would even suggest ad a small frame long the edges to accent that back end design, So Im glad I had a chance to see this aswell as review it, this was started from a simple idea but you turned it into something unique, so nice effort there. Very nice work here I like this style and the talent really does come full frontal here with the detail and style you push forward. There are things that can make this better but I like what you bring out in this style and piece, and we need more artists and pieces like this. My final Overview is this was pretty good.

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Love the back end design too almost creates a frame and border aswell, I would even suggest ad a small frame long the edges to accent that back end design

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mogy64 responds:

thanks a lot for the nice words xway! i did want to give tha back some sort of border especially due to how its tilted, but i thought it took away a bit from the white border of the character, since i wanted her to pop out more than anything.
ill definitely have that in mind for the next pieces tho, thank you again!

[elijah]

Very nice

Very nice "CHARACTER" the expression was not too much but maybe that was the "INTENT" I thaught the backround could have some added color or detail, but you have some nice work here some nice portrait here maybe ad some frames on this it would be a nice feature of the art piece.

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I thaught the backround could have some added color or detail, maybe ad some frames on this it would be a nice feature

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uwubu responds:

Thank you very much for the suggestions and help! The expression is very deliberate, and the reason I did nothing to the background or add a frame was because the expression/face is very intense and anything else would have been *too* much for the eye. (The expression itself is a bit *much* which is the whole point in this piece). <3

[Steampunk Dragoncity]

Amazing

Wow this is some "AMAZING" work you have here, I love dragons and love the city style like you have here the dragon sets the tone here for the city I do feel that if you had more lighting beaming down more on the dragon with more shine and sparkle it would really be cool, anyways nice work.

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I do feel that if you had more lighting beaming down more on the dragon with more shine and sparkle it would really be cool

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Kamikaye responds:

Thnks a lot for the feedback ! :)

[October]

Cool

So this was kind of cool, I am enjoying the "ANIMATION" allthough I think you could have added more in the backround like a tree from where the leaves might be falling from and thats just a small idea, but as for the character its really fantastic nice linework nice moment of enjoying the wind and leaves.

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you could have added more in the backround like a tree from where the leaves might be falling from and thats just a small idea

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MeghanLuna responds:

Thank you and thanks for the feedback! :D
I agree, a background would have made this piece a lot stronger.
I'm glad you're digging the animation and the linework ;)

[Janet!]

Cool character

So you have a cool character here a great "EXPRESSION" a really good "POSE" and you had won a nice "REWARD" for this piece aswell, so really nice work here I do think some backround detail would be nice, but you have impressed me and otheres with this awsome piece.

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I do think some backround detail would be nice

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alejandroartworks responds:

Hey thanks dude !
Yeah, this was for a character commission, but now you mention it a simple background would help to anchor the character to the scene, I do it for the nect pic! cheers!